Posted Nov 21 2012 - 08:15 PM
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 05:46 PM
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 06:21 PM
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 06:28 PM
I do understand. I'm not new to this, Kal. Sure, I'll cut out the Rhotuka- with a different power.
Hmm. Only a couple things. First, with Mind Control and Illusions, I hope you know it's obvious that they can fight back and possibly dispell/turn the attack on you, of course. You can't just do that to a character and succeed.After that, if you plan to have those powers, cut out the Rhotuka-because that's basically the illusion power, unless you want to make that power hard to use-or the poison.
Name: ValyetSpecies and Gender: Toa; FemaleAppearance: A horribly damaged fusion between a Toa and a Visorak, with the latter's legs protuding from her arms, body overlapped with a thin exoskeleton that replicates the armor beneath it. Her heartlight is not visible, although there is a slight glowing eminating from he chest. However, Valyet is in her best physical shape and is very flexible. She has varying colors, from gold to black to green to red.Weapons and Possessions: Valyet wields a simple, rusted sword, which she rarely uses. Her main weapon is the individual pincher fused to her lower arm. She also has a Rhotuka launcher mounted on her arm, which has the ability to cause vertigo.Mask: Kanohi FelnasPowers: Valyet has the power of Mind Control, Telekinesis and Illusions. All are from her natural Toa power of Psionics, which she uses very much. She did not recieve any other power from her fusion, but has the capability to spit paralyzing poison at an enemy.Faction: NoneBiography: Formerly a wanderer, Valyet was a exiled Toa for her murders of many in a village she had stayed for much of her life. Her journeys set her everywhere, but sometimes, her predicametns were more difficult as the years passed. After settling in a cavern of from Outpost Central, a mysterious being had encountered her, fusing her with a mutating spider beast, Visorak. Before she could fght back, the fatigue from the transformation cut off her energy, resulting in the being she is now today. Valyet had lost a portion of her memory- and sanity, to say to the least, and aimlessly goes about. When the Ul'kar had revealed themselves, she intended to end the menace, permanently.
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 06:40 PM
Aw, I had thought it would got through. Very well. Now is the application approved?
No, I meant literally cut it out completely.As in, you can't give it another power.And don't post that profile up in The Crypt until I or my Lieutenant, Krayzikk, approves it. That's one of the basic rules.
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 06:44 PM
I'd much rather keep the spit.
Did you, y'know, fully cut out the Rhotuka?Or the venom?
Posted Nov 23 2012 - 06:47 PM
I have indeed. Now, I must depart for more pressing matters at the moment. Post will be up in awhile.
Very well, then. Make sure to cut out the Rhotuka and you're good.