Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff
Posted Jan 15 2013 - 03:23 AM
Theme #3:
(credit to 55555 for the image)
Broken Mask
Deadline: 11:59 PM PST on Monday, January 21st.
Any interpretation of the theme is valid, but your entry must be a Bionicle story and it must adhere to the rules posted above.
Edited by Velox, Jan 15 2013 - 05:30 AM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
[ The Shadowy Verge :: Midnight Voltage :: The Ambage :: SSCC ]
Emerging Mata Nuian Protector
Posted Jan 18 2013 - 09:13 AM
Member Name: Karzhani the Utahraptor
Theme: Broken Mask
Word Count: 592
Link to Story and Title: Torn
Submerged!
Posted Jan 18 2013 - 12:32 PM
Just came up whith an awesome Idea, my story will be up soon.
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Jan 18 2013 - 03:41 PM
Me too, it shall be done by today or tomorrow.
EDIT: Those it have to be in the story line or something that is still Bionicle related.
Edited by The Forgotten One, Jan 19 2013 - 12:15 PM.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Ice Warrior
Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:00 PM
It has to be in some way Bionicle related, though not necessarily in the storyline.
Undergoing Renovations...
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:11 PM
Okay, time for my custom Bionicle story.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Tohunga
Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:29 PM
Ok here is my story 
Member Name: Pikiru
Theme: Broken Mask
Word Count: 724
Link to Story and Title: Fractured Time
Edited by Pikiru, Jan 19 2013 - 02:30 PM.
Submerged!
Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:35 PM
Member Name: Dual Matrix
Theme: Broken Mask
Word Count: 476
Link to Story and Title: Dreams of darkness
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Jan 19 2013 - 07:18 PM
Member Name: The Forgotten One
Theme: Broken Mask
Word Count: 816
Link to Story and Title: Shattered Past
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Submerged!
Posted Jan 21 2013 - 05:34 PM
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Seeker
Posted Jan 22 2013 - 09:28 PM
Man! Missed it. I had a good one too... Oh well. I'll just have to wait until the next one.
What are we searching for? Are we searching for anything or just randomly surfing the internet? I did that once. I found this bionicle fan site called bzpower. Whoever made it had no decorating sense what so ever.
Descending into Protodermis
Posted Jan 22 2013 - 09:45 PM
Oh, I thought I had another day. Oh well.
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I've joined the BZPRPG. See my profiles here.
See the collection of my writings as well as previews of those to come in The Scarabax Library.
Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff
Posted Jan 28 2013 - 07:03 PM
Congratulations to Pikiru and his story "Fractured Time", winner of "Broken Mask"!
Honorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the Deep and "Torn" by Karzahni the Utahraptor.
Congrats, guys! And don't forget to check out the OTC contest which should be starting next Monday (apologies for taking a week off, but we're working on another project behind the scenes currently), as well as the next Bionicle contest which will take place in about three weeks. Thanks to everyone for entering!
Edited by Velox, Jan 29 2013 - 06:49 PM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
[ The Shadowy Verge :: Midnight Voltage :: The Ambage :: SSCC ]
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Jan 28 2013 - 08:11 PM
What, no one told me when the contest ended. (Probably should've read the main page.) Oh well, there is next time.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Flying Force!
Posted Jan 31 2013 - 12:12 PM
Creep of the Deepwut
Honorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the DeepOH.
Also known as Vinyl Scratch, ~(Natalie Breez)~ or Creep Of The Deep.
Man, I need more friends here... :/
Tohunga
Posted Feb 01 2013 - 03:52 PM
Oh wow I won! I can't believe it 
I only just found out just now (well actually 20 min ago, but still now-ish)
I dont know what to say, except thank you so much!
It is truly an honour to have you guys think my story is good.
And congratulations to Creep (I quite liked your story, though it was sad) and Karzahni (I though you did a very good job doing Teridax and Takanuva), and everyone else that participated 
Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff
Posted Feb 12 2013 - 07:33 PM
Really sorry for the delay on this, guys. I just completely forgot yesterday. But as promised, the next Bionicle FFFC is here:
Theme #4:
Surrender or Run
Deadline: Monday, February 25th, by 11:59 PM PST.
Edited by Velox, Feb 24 2013 - 01:12 PM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
[ The Shadowy Verge :: Midnight Voltage :: The Ambage :: SSCC ]
Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff
Posted Feb 16 2013 - 09:32 PM
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
[ The Shadowy Verge :: Midnight Voltage :: The Ambage :: SSCC ]
Stone Champion Defeated
Posted Feb 18 2013 - 09:35 AM
"If people only knew how hard I work to gain my mastery it wouldn't seem so wonderful at all." -Michelangelo
Charity Review Coordinator for the Epic Critics Club
A Writerly Blog
The Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness
(BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded Completed 05/11/13)
(What I Should Have Said Posted 12/20/12)
(The Final Answer Posted 02/18/13)
(Dawn of the New Century Posted 05/17/13) (Review Topic)
Emerging Stone Champion
Posted Feb 18 2013 - 05:50 PM
Member Name: Dinobot Pahrak
Theme: Surrender or Run
Word Count: 645
Link: A Machine's Philosophy
Click to join in on the violence!
Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai (Final Stretch); Book 3: Kako: Chapter 44 is up!
Cloak of the Past
Posted Feb 18 2013 - 06:06 PM
Oops, forgot this bit. 
Member Name: The Wretched Automaton
Theme: Surrender or Run
Word Count: 787
Link: Hunter's Game
"I have seen my dreams laid out before me, then taken away just as quickly."
"I have been shown fear in a handful of dust."
Chapter four - Desire
Coming soon!
Short Stories: The Commute ~ Rasinov ~ In Your Absence ~ Hunter's Game ~ Suchia (Coming soon)
Epics: The Best Kept Secrets (Chapter 27: The Shadow Walker coming soon) ~ The Shadow of this Red Rock
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Feb 18 2013 - 07:52 PM
Thank goodness for dead line extension. I'll post my short story Friday.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Fluidic Master Nuva
Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:13 PM
Submerged!
Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:26 PM
I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.
Edited by Dual Matrix, Feb 19 2013 - 04:27 PM.
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Cloak of the Past
Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:51 PM
I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?
It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen.
"I have seen my dreams laid out before me, then taken away just as quickly."
"I have been shown fear in a handful of dust."
Chapter four - Desire
Coming soon!
Short Stories: The Commute ~ Rasinov ~ In Your Absence ~ Hunter's Game ~ Suchia (Coming soon)
Epics: The Best Kept Secrets (Chapter 27: The Shadow Walker coming soon) ~ The Shadow of this Red Rock
Fluidic Master Nuva
Posted Feb 19 2013 - 08:10 PM
Thanks, that helped.Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.
I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?
Off topic: My minecraft modification is still running, I can't post there cause I save that spot for V1 tomorrow :
I don't use Microsoft Word a lot (I plan to write it down then typing it), but thanks for telling me.
I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?
It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen.
Edited by Takua the Chronicler7, Feb 19 2013 - 08:11 PM.
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Feb 19 2013 - 09:01 PM
I still haven't written it yet, but I'll have it down before the deadline.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Feb 23 2013 - 03:53 PM
Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten One
Theme: Surrender or Run
Word Count: 835
Link: Life
Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten One
Theme: Surrender or Run
Word Count: 952
Link: The Murder
Edited by Flaredrick: Forgotten One, Feb 25 2013 - 11:05 PM.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Submerged!
Posted Feb 24 2013 - 05:06 PM
Edited by Dual Matrix, Feb 24 2013 - 05:44 PM.
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Feb 25 2013 - 06:57 PM
DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Descending into Protodermis
Posted Feb 25 2013 - 11:27 PM
I decided to be creative, and went with a Vahki pursuit. Glad to have entered!
Member Name: Click
Theme: Surrender or Run
Word Count: 844 (A little long, but I did just edit it down quite a bit. Sorry.)
Link: On the Run
Edited by Click, Feb 25 2013 - 11:35 PM.
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I've joined the BZPRPG. See my profiles here.
See the collection of my writings as well as previews of those to come in The Scarabax Library.
Submerged!
Posted Feb 26 2013 - 01:10 PM
DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one.
Sorry dude, I just like writing and had three awesome ideas
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
BZPRPG - 2013
Encountering Protodermis
Posted Feb 26 2013 - 05:44 PM
I only had two, and I was just able to turn my second one in last night.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Fluidic Master Nuva
Posted Feb 26 2013 - 10:22 PM
Bibliophilic Littérateur & Senior Staff
Posted Feb 26 2013 - 10:22 PM
Edited by Velox, Feb 26 2013 - 10:23 PM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
[ The Shadowy Verge :: Midnight Voltage :: The Ambage :: SSCC ]
Descending into Protodermis
Posted Feb 26 2013 - 11:02 PM
Could I quickly edit my entry? I just realized I said Keelerahk (green Visorak) instead of Keerahk (white Vahki) *facepalm.* I thought I knew everything about Bionicle!
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See the collection of my writings as well as previews of those to come in The Scarabax Library.
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