Velox Posted January 15, 2013 Author Share Posted January 15, 2013 (edited) Theme #3: (credit to 55555 for the image) Broken Mask Deadline: 11:59 PM PST on Monday, January 21st. Any interpretation of the theme is valid, but your entry must be a Bionicle story and it must adhere to the rules posted above. Edited January 15, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karzhani the Utahraptor Posted January 18, 2013 Share Posted January 18, 2013 Member Name: Karzhani the Utahraptor Theme: Broken MaskWord Count: 592 Link to Story and Title: Torn ^click the banner to read my epic! Credit to Shattered Mask Productions for the banner Internment - Ask Makuta Returns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted January 18, 2013 Share Posted January 18, 2013 Just came up whith an awesome Idea, my story will be up soon. I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted January 18, 2013 Share Posted January 18, 2013 (edited) Me too, it shall be done by today or tomorrow. EDIT: Those it have to be in the story line or something that is still Bionicle related. Edited January 19, 2013 by The Forgotten One Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicBOOM XS Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 It has to be in some way Bionicle related, though not necessarily in the storyline. Undergoing Renovations... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 Okay, time for my custom Bionicle story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikiru Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 (edited) Ok here is my story Member Name: PikiruTheme: Broken MaskWord Count: 724Link to Story and Title: Fractured Time Edited January 19, 2013 by Pikiru Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 Member Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Broken MaskWord Count: 476Link to Story and Title: Dreams of darkness I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 Member Name: The Forgotten OneTheme: Broken MaskWord Count: 816Link to Story and Title: Shattered Past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 Second story yeey:Member Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Broken maskWord count 560Link to story and title Final Battle Reinvented I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creep Of The Deep Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Member Name: Creep Of The DeepTheme: Broken MaskWord Count: 701Link to Story and Title: Friend Do not trust corrupted memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Lapaka Posted January 23, 2013 Share Posted January 23, 2013 Man! Missed it. I had a good one too... Oh well. I'll just have to wait until the next one. What are we searching for? Are we searching for anything or just randomly surfing the internet? I did that once. I found this bionicle fan site called bzpower. Whoever made it had no decorating sense what so ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted January 23, 2013 Share Posted January 23, 2013 Oh, I thought I had another day. Oh well. ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted January 29, 2013 Author Share Posted January 29, 2013 (edited) Congratulations to Pikiru and his story "Fractured Time", winner of "Broken Mask"! Honorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the Deep and "Torn" by Karzahni the Utahraptor. Congrats, guys! And don't forget to check out the OTC contest which should be starting next Monday (apologies for taking a week off, but we're working on another project behind the scenes currently), as well as the next Bionicle contest which will take place in about three weeks. Thanks to everyone for entering! Edited January 29, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 What, no one told me when the contest ended. (Probably should've read the main page.) Oh well, there is next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Creep Of The Deep Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Creep of the DeepwutHonorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the Deep OH.I never expected this really. Hoo boy, honorable mention. D: Sweet!Congratulations to Karzahni and Pikiru. :3 Do not trust corrupted memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikiru Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Oh wow I won! I can't believe it I only just found out just now (well actually 20 min ago, but still now-ish) I dont know what to say, except thank you so much! It is truly an honour to have you guys think my story is good. And congratulations to Creep (I quite liked your story, though it was sad) and Karzahni (I though you did a very good job doing Teridax and Takanuva), and everyone else that participated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 (edited) Really sorry for the delay on this, guys. I just completely forgot yesterday. But as promised, the next Bionicle FFFC is here: Theme #4: Surrender or RunDeadline: Monday, February 25th, by 11:59 PM PST. Edited February 24, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 17, 2013 Author Share Posted February 17, 2013 Due to the forums going offline, the deadline is being extended until Monday, February 25th, by 11:59 PM PST. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TNTOS Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Member Name: TNTOSTheme: Surrender or RunWord count: 415Link to Story: The Final Answer-TNTOS- "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pahrak Model ZX Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Member Name: Dinobot PahrakTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 645Link: A Machine's Philosophy My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Oops, forgot this bit. Member Name: The Wretched AutomatonTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 787Link: Hunter's Game I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Thank goodness for dead line extension. I'll post my short story Friday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word? profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 (edited) I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word? Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.Off topic: My minecraft modification is still running, I can't post there cause I save that spot for V1 tomorrow : Edited February 19, 2013 by Dual Matrix I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word? It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen. I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 (edited) I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word? Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.Off topic: My minecraft modification is still running, I can't post there cause I save that spot for V1 tomorrow :Thanks, that helped.I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word? It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen.I don't use Microsoft Word a lot (I plan to write it down then typing it), but thanks for telling me.My story should be up by Saturday, by the way. Edited February 20, 2013 by Takua the Chronicler7 profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 I still haven't written it yet, but I'll have it down before the deadline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted February 21, 2013 Share Posted February 21, 2013 Member Name: Takua the Chronicler7Theme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 791Link: Siege profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 23, 2013 Share Posted February 23, 2013 (edited) Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten OneTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 835Link: Life Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten OneTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 952Link: The Murder Edited February 26, 2013 by Flaredrick: Forgotten One Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted February 24, 2013 Share Posted February 24, 2013 (edited) Member Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 402Link: Let us rememberMember Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 370Link: One against a millionMember Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord count: 346Link: Suffocation Edited February 24, 2013 by Dual Matrix I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 25, 2013 Share Posted February 25, 2013 DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted February 26, 2013 Share Posted February 26, 2013 (edited) I decided to be creative, and went with a Vahki pursuit. Glad to have entered! Member Name: ClickTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 844 (A little long, but I did just edit it down quite a bit. Sorry.)Link: On the Run Edited February 26, 2013 by Click ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janus Posted February 26, 2013 Share Posted February 26, 2013 Member Name: JanoozTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 495Link: Vahki NoNoNoNoNonNO You misunderstood me You didn't hear what I said You're not listening LIKE MOST AMERICANS -Arin Hanson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted February 26, 2013 Share Posted February 26, 2013 DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one. Sorry dude, I just like writing and had three awesome ideas I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 26, 2013 Share Posted February 26, 2013 I only had two, and I was just able to turn my second one in last night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBBBalta Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Member name: BaltarcTheme: Surrender or RunWord count: 715Link: Run Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Isn't it a bit late for entries, as the deadline was yesterday? profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 27, 2013 Author Share Posted February 27, 2013 (edited) Unfortunately, Baltarc, the deadline for "Surrender or Run" was yesterday, so we are no longer accepting entries. =/ Next Monday, however, a new contest should start in OTC, and two weeks after that another Bionicle one. Edited February 27, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted February 27, 2013 Share Posted February 27, 2013 Could I quickly edit my entry? I just realized I said Keelerahk (green Visorak) instead of Keerahk (white Vahki) *facepalm.* I thought I knew everything about Bionicle! ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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