Here's my review topic for my new epic, Chronicles of Tahu: Dark Destiny of Legends! I hope you enjoy it, and please leave a review!
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Chronicles of Tahu: Dark Destiny of Legends Review Topic
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Kakaru
, Oct 02 2012 12:47 AM
Tahu Epic my story Review Bionicle
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Kakaru
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Senior Fish
Posted Oct 02 2012 - 12:47 AM
She's out of the light, she doesn't remember
She said I wanna go home
She said I wanna go home
Face turns white like a sky in December
She said I wanna go home
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Takuma Nuva
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Descending into Protodermis
Posted Oct 02 2012 - 09:44 AM
I'm finding myself at something of a loss for words right now, but I'm certainly looking forward to it.
The humorous tone you've chosen is certainly, for lack of a better word, intriguing...
The humorous tone you've chosen is certainly, for lack of a better word, intriguing...
Takuma Nuva
Get your toast out with a fork...
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Exo-Armored Toa
Posted Oct 02 2012 - 09:36 PM
Best sentences in the whole thing. You might want to include more of this improve the clarity of the emotionsHe was angry…It made him angry.
Keep up the…interesting…work.
Edited by Paleo, Oct 02 2012 - 09:36 PM.
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Posted Oct 03 2012 - 01:00 AM
amazingly detailed with AWESOME character!11!!! This is bringing Tahu to a whole new level I never saw him in before. Will the Makuta be in the next chapter!? Keep up the good work!
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