Review for What Can Be Lost. Constructive criticism only.
Edited by Master Inika, Oct 15 2011 - 01:29 PM.
What Can Be Lost Review
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Master Inika
, Oct 15 2011 01:27 PM
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Master Inika
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Mask of Time Discovered
Posted Oct 15 2011 - 01:27 PM
"Who ate all the pies?! Who ate all the pies?!"
— Unnamed Po-Matoran, Mata Nui Online Game
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Allanon Loke
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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 06:43 PM
Oooh, a mysterious, ancient treasure hunt. Good prologue. It's nice to have the main characters at least introduced in the beginning. Nice start.
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