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[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

UNITY. DUTY, AND RAISIN BRAN

Follow the toa and there jurney to Epic as this all new series kicks off with a laugh!

(WARNING: this comic is totes random and is incredibly cute looking)

COMICS

The one word of awsome

Lewa and cheetoes

Tak & Mak look alike

Fourth wall

Fourth wall P2

Fourth wall P3

Fourth wall P4

Fourth Wall P5

New comics I do this

Sagas I do this

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 08 2012 - 04:38 PM.

[-Absorba-]

Aw... cute art style!

I'll be checking on it, but you've set a pretty good first impression as of now.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Why thank you good sir! come again!

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

NEW COMIC

[-Absorba-]

Man, Lewa really wants to really screw them up, doesn't he?

Though I do wonder how panel destruction leads to vaporization.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Yes, but this isn't all. prepare for the next ep of fourth wall!
NEW COMIC!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Oct 20 2012 - 07:50 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

New of the comicness!
I go beyond the fourth wall! FEAR ME! MWA HA HA!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Oct 21 2012 - 03:55 PM.

[Terra Nuva]

I really love your art style. Great Job.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Thank you Terra nuva. I try. ; )

[Calvirick]

The drawings are nice.

And I can see that you're trying to go for a different comic-reading-format, which is cool it's always good to be original. It's not the best way to do it. I'm still trying to read it left to right instead of right to left at a downward angle.

I don't have a suggestion for an alternative, but maybe try something else.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Well, Outside of the fourth wall can be tough to read sometimes! Dont worry, though. They are going to be back in place soon.


I hope.

[ReckoningReckoner]

The first two fourth wall comics were reallt well done. I like how you drew it. Especially how it faded out a little at the end.

The others were confusing to read. I know what you were going for, but it ended up more annoying than anything.

"I feel a *disturbance... someone broke my face plant record!" That was really funny. I laughed at that.

I like your art style too. Also, check your spelling every now and then

Edited by Reckoner, Oct 31 2012 - 05:49 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Sorry about that! I'm thinking of removing text and typing instead. Thoughts?

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

New comic up guys! enjoy! sometimes I even go Behind the outside! wish the toa luck.

[Katoris]

That Fourth wall breaking there is pretty bad.

Edited by Katoris, Nov 25 2012 - 02:55 AM.

[Taka Nuvia]

(So since you said you might come back to those again someday I thought it would not harm to give you a small review of the comics so far. Hope it's okay and stuff... ^^)

 

When I first clicked on the topic to check out the comics, something I immediately enjoyed was the art style. The high level of abstraction, lack of feet and general sock-puppet style of appearance makes the characters incredibly endearing. You could also say cute. Same goes for the expressions, which too are very cartoonish and abstracted, yet likeable.

The colouring is sublte, almost a bit too sublte IMO; more vibrant colours would probably suit the comedic nature of your comics a bit better.* You use a scanner, that's good. I would suggest turning down the contrast a bit though, so that it all looks a bit less grainy. (also, *hinthinttutorialhint* =P)

As for redibility, using only capital letters usually helps a lot, and flows better with the rest of the comics than digitally adding the text. (at least it's that way for me ^^")

 

Humor's fine, it's random but not too random.

 

There's one last thing I'd like to comment on, and that's the layout, particularly of the latest "Fourth Wall"- comics. Normally the "rule" is that "if you have to number your panels something's wrong", but  I guess I know what you were going for. However the latest ones were just... incredibly confusing. Of course, in a way that does make sense, with the fourth wall broken and stuff. Maybe you could make the numbers stand out more? Like, in colour or something. It would make finding the next panel to read a bit easier ^^

 

Overall I've enjoyed these so far, and would like to read more if you ever get back to them! :3

 

~

*just a personal opinion ;D

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

I am currently working on an actual kit for these. that way I can get back to them faster.

[Takua Dragonstar7]

Hey Loganto, I never knew you had these comics as well. These were quite funny, especially the Takanuva and Makuta one.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

They really do look alike though.

They really do look alike though.