Vakama35 Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 Here's where one can review my epic, reposted from the Archives. http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=733 Quote "Ten thousand futures have I looked at. A hundred thousand. And in only one does mankind finally unite, and flourish...and survive. Only one. Doomworld." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allanon Loke Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 Good prologue. It sets the stage nicely with background information. Will there be a lot of the canon characters making appearances? Quote My New Story Topic Dynamics - my new epic. Chapter 1 up. "I am sorry for that, though I have never heard a smell called rude." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vakama35 Posted October 15, 2011 Author Share Posted October 15, 2011 Good prologue. It sets the stage nicely with background information. Will there be a lot of the canon characters making appearances? Well, I said it's from the Archives; the only difference is that I'm posting the last four chapters here, as they are all fully written. Check out the Archived forum if you want to see Chapters 1-46. Quote "Ten thousand futures have I looked at. A hundred thousand. And in only one does mankind finally unite, and flourish...and survive. Only one. Doomworld." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aderia Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 Hey! I remember this epic back from the old forums! And yeah, it was a doozy, at least, lengthwise. It’s a shame you only have the prologue here on the new forums, though. I remember reading it, though not faithfully, and generally, I remember good things. I really have no nitpicks for this prologue, nor do I have commentary on the plot, since all I have to work with is about 150 words of background. One thing I do like about Reformed Spherus Magna stories, since I’m not the biggest fan of Spherus Magna itself, is the creativity and perspective that each author puts into his or her story. All the reformed SM stories I’ve read have been more or less diverse, they’re really awesome to compare.I'm not entirely sure, at the moment, about the rules in the Library about re-posting old stories, but this is something I could read again, and I'd love to be able to review more substantially. But for the time being, all I can say is that I hope the other 45 chapters of your epic are as error-free as your prologue. Quote (disclaimer: none of this banner art is original, I just smooshed it together in gimp. Torchic, Matau) Those pesky firespitters... Library | The Sculptors and the Smelters | The Ternion | Review Topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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