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#41 Offline Indigo Individual

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Posted Feb 03 2013 - 04:32 AM

There are a lot of buildings taller than the Empire State Building, it's just famous because of King Kong (and other appearances in films).

Thanks, I was going for something between that and the Sanctuary from Skulduggery Pleasant.

Destiny is on the Marked's side.
Unfortunately, no one else is.

I'll edit that when I can. :P

Referring to the vision at the end, which I was worried some might find too convenient.

Wotz, there are buildings that big that no one cares about. Someday there will be a skyscraper in London, and no one will care.


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"I never asked for this. I never asked to be a god."

 

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#42 Offline Indigo Individual

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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 04:56 AM

I can double-post here, right? That's a rule, isn't it?

I think it is...

But, anyway, first off: an apology. I'm sorry there have been month-long gaps between chapters and I'd like to say it won't happen again, but that would be lying and y'all deserve better.

On another note, new chapter. Be happy. That's an eighth chapter. Lovely.

 

And then, in order to apologise yet more, a preview of something I'm working on that might never become a reality, but still.

 

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"I never asked for this. I never asked to be a god."

 

"I'm your enemy's enemy."

Marked: Chapter 9 (Coming Soon)

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#43 Offline Taka Nuvia

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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 05:11 AM

Ah, I missed out on posting something regarding chapter 7 D: Sorry.

 

Anyways, good to know you're still updating this every now and then.

 

Story-wise, both 7 and 8 have been good chapters. ^^ It's interesting to see the characters in interatction, and that's a good thing because your story is character-driven :3


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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 05:36 AM

It's 'kay. :)

The gaps are twice as long because the chapters are four times as long. :P

I'm glad, and Marked is definitely character-driven.


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"We're not like them... we're something more... something better..."

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"I never asked for this. I never asked to be a god."

 

"I'm your enemy's enemy."

Marked: Chapter 9 (Coming Soon)

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