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[Taipu1]

Welcome to the Escape the Mind review topic. This is a rewrite of my pre-downtime Expanded Multiverse epic. The rewrite has several aims. Firstly to try and give it a more Multiverse integrated feel, the previous version I started writing before there were any Cipher Chronicles episodes, now there's a lot more insight into the EM, I'm trying to make the story fit in a bit better. Secondly I want to make the story less complex, the previous version had 30+ chapters with no forseeable end. This version will have longer and far fewer chapters, but better structure, and will not meander all over the place with too many sub plots. The final and most important purpose of the rewrite is to actually have an ending. So many epics are unfinished, certainly mine are, and I want this one to be finished, so I'm doing it by the books. I will be updating this topic with extra info, links to the original, and general review topic extra stuff. Enjoy.

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Bios:
Credit to Dankas Bionicle Builder for the character images.

Kreth

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Kreth is the most senior member, and therefore the leader of the Escape clan. He is a glatorian of the jungle tribe and carries a sword. He is an Ex-Red Skull warrior

Slohaz

Spoiler

Slohaz is the loyal friend of Kreth and second most senior member of the clan. He comes across as unintelligent, but this is due to a severe loss of memory. He is unable to remember his past life as a Shadow Honour champion. He still weilds the large protosteel axe he did before his amnesia.

Azlok

Spoiler

Azlok is a Toa of fire with a mask of parabolic vision. He is a highly experience warrior, and has been on Barrawahi all his life. He has incredibly good control of his element, and rarely uses his Toa tool to control it.

Gapii

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Gapii is an Agori of the Ice tribe. Despite arriving on the planet by anomaly from Tanuuk, he has a quirky personality and a bright outlook on life. He carries a fireworks launcher, but is a very inexperienced combatant.

Edited by Taipu1, Nov 02 2012 - 01:51 PM.