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[Toajaller1]

Feel free to post anything you want about to the story. Ill post a new chapter every couple of days so make sure to check for it. I hope you like it! Update: tahu's mission will be the first part of a trilogy. Keep your eyes open when tahus misdion is over for
1 the war of spherus magna

2 the mata nui quest

(and sorry for any spelling/grammer errors i have no computer so i type it on my ipod and it doesn't always show errors)

One more thing. When I add more to te story, I dont make a new post. I just paste it onto whats already there. Sorry for any confusion

Edited by Toajaller1, Nov 25 2012 - 05:40 PM.

[CeeCee]

I just want to say, I really like you writing style.
I love Tahu's character as well.
The only thing is, is, that you need to put an enter in every time a new person talks, as it gets confusing at times.

Keep up the good work.

[Toajaller1]

Yeah i dont have a computer so i type everything on my ipod so thats why it doesnt enter. When i copy and paste it

[CeeCee]

Yeah i dont have a computer so i type everything on my ipod so thats why it doesnt enter. When i copy and paste it

Oh I see. That sucks