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#1 Offline Zorglorfian

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Posted Nov 12 2012 - 08:56 PM

Hey guys, remember that Narwhal I posted several topics down? Here's what I made with the remaining pieces:

http://www.brickshel...ry.cgi?f=493557

"General Beta served as a trainer for decades, training heroes to be the best they can be. Called 'General' because of his loyal army of heroes ready to defend him at the drop of a Hero Helmet, Beta is as tough as his title. No-nonsense and brash, Beta fights villainy with his Lightning Gun and his Laser Claw, a devastating combination for evildoers everywhere!" $15 - $20 suggested retail.

I'm writing a story about my own Hero Team that'll be out by the summer, so stay tuned!

Please use constructive criticism, keeping in mind that this is leftover from a request MOC, as well as the fact that I build things like a set and do not use that much innovation... Comment away, have fun, and thank you. : )

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Edited by Zorglorfian, Nov 12 2012 - 08:56 PM.

Credit to Moist! from the Spectral Avohkii Enterprises for the super sig!

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#2 Offline Vox The Shadow of Reality

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Posted Nov 13 2012 - 06:56 AM

well i must say it is a very colorful moc. i especially like the way u did the right and with the helmet on there plus the furno helmet on the the arm is a good addition. and i'm really really glad u put those feet on the back because i hated the way most hero factory set left that annoying gap above the shoulders.
I give it a 8.5/10 mainly just because i feel the legs are a bit to long compared to the rest of the body

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