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[Suukorak12]

A while ago a made a self-MOC. He is a Fe-Matoran named Neekrah. Neekrah wears a silver Pakari, carries a curved blade, and is slightly hunchbacked. He is similar to the Voya Nui Matoran but the arms and head are different.

http://farm9.staticf...b62d3f21b_z.jpg

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Edited by Suukorak12, Nov 20 2012 - 06:15 PM.

[Sumiki]

Stylistically, it's pretty simple. I can tell that it was intended to be Voyatoran-style. It's very setlike, and pulls it off quite well. In fact, it looks like a better model than, say, Velika.

It's hard to find critiques on creations so small, but I have to point out the odd silver they used for those '01 masks. Shapewise, the Pakari is nice, but the silver is a bit clashy. I think it could work if you removed his tool, though.

[The Iron Toa]

Looks like a decent build from what I can see, but we need views from different angles! The tool looks good, from the front at least. The color scheme makes him more like a Matoran of Earth or Magnetism, though.

[Chro]

Nice compact build. I agree with Sumiki, although the clashy silver doesn't bother me.

Whoa what? A MOC comment from Sumiki?

[Wind Elemental]

Simple, yet nicely done. I like the Voya Nui Matoran build and the mask looks grea on it. The tool also doesn't look too bad too. Also, I thought the title said "Nuurakh" for a moment .

[Codin the Fe-Matoran]

I never really imagined any Fe-Matoran being hunched over, but it does add a nice hint of character to this MOC. I really like what you've done here.

About the colour of the mask; I don't particularly mind it, but it does seem a bit off among the other grey pieces in his joints. It all hinges on your personal opinion, but perhaps switching it with an orange or copper Pakari would look better, if you have one of those.

[Suukorak12]

I never really imagined any Fe-Matoran being hunched over, but it does add a nice hint of character to this MOC. I really like what you've done here.

About the colour of the mask; I don't particularly mind it, but it does seem a bit off among the other grey pieces in his joints. It all hinges on your personal opinion, but perhaps switching it with an orange or copper Pakari would look better, if you have one of those.

Yeah I agree, a Copper or Dark gold mask would look better here. If I could I would have made the blade gunmetal/dark silver. Thanks for the constructive criticism guys.

[KlakWest]

The mask color is a bit off, yes, but it seems like a simple and small build (in a good way). The weapon/tool is definitely cool. I like it! Nicely done!

[ShadowWolfHount]

To KlakWest for keeping his short and sweet

Well i am with him on the weapon/tool it do look cool and same with the mask it is a bit off but i can see that if you make the mask black it will be a Onu-Matoran. But it is a Fe-Maotran and i thank if you make the mask a blakc and silver Noble Huna it will look good and make the Bohrok foot silver. but that what i thank you make him what ever you want.

[Toa Solon]

Gotta love the simple design. It's a classic. Very simple, but I still like it! haha