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#201 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted May 15 2013 - 06:33 PM

Dear Tahu Stars,

 

I must regretfully inform you that my hypothesis regarding the deaths of Pohatu Mata and Kopaka Mata was… incorrect. Lewa Mata has assured me of that.

 

That said, I am not weary in the slightest. Yes, the Hero Factory capture did not work as planned. However, I do not think it is of much concern. I’m not certain how much attention you pay to your army, but the words fly to me that you and your army waste time in the Kitchen of all locations – and that you spend your days foolishly eating jellybeans. Never mind that, we’ll see in the end. 

 

While your army spends its days eating candy – I don’t think I really want to ask how you’re eating in the first place – those sets I trust the most even now undertake a massive project with the Vezons, and when it is complete… you will never know where we came from. I do bid you good luck.

 

Hero Factory has fallen back as of late. It worries me, when they have pressed the advantage for so long. I don’t believe they have fallen back by chance… no, something is coming. I would advise you to prepare yourself, but you’re probably too busy eating jellybeans to even notice.

 

You really are a fool.

 

-Tahu Mata

 

Chapter 3 – Only a Name

 

“Where… where are we?”

 

It was three weeks since the snowstorm. Not a second went by that Nex didn’t remember the encounter that had taken place during it.

 

Watch yourself, kid. You still haven’t mastered that glazed look you get when we talk.

 

Perhaps he was simply crazy. After all, it wasn’t like he could be provided with any proof that other sets heard weird voices inside of their heads. Then again, Nex 2.0 wasn’t weird so much as… mysterious.

 

I said watch yourself, you dope. Pay attention, this is going to be VERY important.

 

“Hey, Takanuva Stars.” Nex said, reaching forward and grabbing the Toa on his shoulder. “Where are we?”

 

“I’ll be able to answer that for you in a moment.”

 

Nex nodded, gulping nervously as he stared around the massive room – if he was correct, it was even larger than the Basement, the largest room in the house. There were no windows to be seen anywhere, but the room was pleasantly warm. He spotted Rocka and Evo by one of the walls, speaking with a Titan he didn’t recognize.

 

“Hey Nex, I’ll be back in a second. Stay here, will you? I just need to introduce you to someone.”

 

“Yeah, sure, whatever.”

 

He turned and watched Takanuva Stars as he entered the crowd of sets. The Stars Toa stopped next to two sets that Nex 2.0 silently identified as the Glatorian Strakk and Kiina – and it was immediately apparent that Nex’s phantom ally felt an animosity to both sets.

 

Which was strange, because as far as Nex remembered, Kiina had never factored into anything at all. Within seconds, Nex felt the familiar feeling as though a warm wave of water had washed over him, and he drifted away.

 

*-*-*-*

 

He discovered himself face to face with Nex 2.0 in the same all black space as before – presumably his brain, but Nex didn’t quite care to find out.

 

“You called?”

 

“Yes kid, I did.”

 

“What for? Is it about the Glatorian?”

 

“If you know what’s good for you here, keep your mouth shut.” For the first time since he’d met him, Nex 2.0 looked anxious. Almost as if –

 

“You’re hiding something.”

 

“You figure stuff out fast, kid. But you don’t need to know what I’m hiding just yet… just trust me. When the time is appropriate – and I believe that time will be coming soon – you’ll be told everything.”

 

“And what if I refuse? What if I make you tell me now?”

 

For a split second, Nex detected a glint in the eye of Nex 2.0, a shadow that flitted across the older hero’s face. He took an involuntary step back, but Nex 2.0 appeared normal once more. He appeared satisfied.

 

“Kid, I’m just going to tell you this once – and that is… you have no idea what you’re dealing with.”

 

*-*-*-*

 

Nex returned to consiousness as Takanuva Stars slapped him; he was still standing (thankfully – the first several times, he’d collapsed outright), and he’d obviously been completely out of it.

 

“Nex, are you alright?” the Toa asked.

 

“Yeah, I’m fine.” Nex said, shaking the fuzzy feeling out of his head. “Sorry about that, I just dozed off a little. What’s up?”

 

“Nex… can you keep a secret?”

 

Of course I can keep a secret, he thought. It’s not like Nex 2.0 isn’t in here or anything.

 

Shut up! Respond!

 

“Of course I can. I’m already keeping one for Rocka, Evo, Avak and Ehlek.”

 

Takanuva Stars nodded, appearing relieved as he glanced knowingly at the two Glatorian, and the Titan he’d seen earlier with Rocka and Evo.

 

“So who’re these wackjobs? I suppose they’re the ones throwing the party?” Nex asked.

 

Takanuva Stars winced and the blue Glatorian, Kiina, raised her trident threateningly. However, Strakk held her back with a calm hand, and the Titan chuckled.

 

“He has spirit. I like that.” the Titan said. “Let’s hear him out.”

 

“Nex… I’d like you to meet Kiina, Strakk, and Makuta.” Takanuva Stars said.

 

“Nice to meet you.” said Strakk.

 

“Put the attitude away rookie, or I put it away for you.” Kiina ordered, passing over greetings. “If you tell anybody up above about what you’ve seen here, I will personally see to it that you are publicly dismantled.”

 

Apparently having nothing else of importance to say, Kiina immediately turned around and vanished into the crowd of sets, leaving behind a very perplexed Nex.

 

“Eh, don’t mind her.” said Strakk. “She’s always a grump. It comes from being in charge of all this. It’s a rather stressful job.”

 

“What is all of this? What is she in charge of?”

 

“Nex…” Takanuva Stars said with a slight smile. “If you’ll allow me… I’d like to welcome you to the Resistance.”

 

Ooh… now this is going to be fun indeed.

 

Nex wasn’t quite sure he was entirely okay with the emotions attached to what Nex 2.0 had just told him, but he didn’t have time to worry about that – Takanuva Stars was already whisking him away from Strakk and Makuta, towards Rocka and Evo. The gold and yellow heroes stared at them as the two approached them, their faces carefully neutral.

 

“I’m not quite sure I want to meet these two just yet.” whispered Nex.

 

“Nex, you have an apology to make. And they have an apology to accept.” said the Toa. “Besides, I had to, and you were just gonna break the rules and free them anyway. So you’re already sort of even.”

 

“Not really.”

 

“Well, have it your way, numb nuts.”

 

“Numb – what? I don’t understand anything about anything right now.”

 

“You’re not supposed to. Well, technically you are, but we don’t care enough to fill you in.”

 

“That’s splendid, Takanuva. I feel really appreciated.”

 

“You’re not supposed to be appreciated. You’re supposed to be valuable.”

 

See what I mean, kid? You’ll never be worth more than a penny to these people. And none of your stupid remarks about a penny being worth something, because it isn’t worth anything!

 

“I’m worth something.” Nex mumbled.

 

Shut your mouth, you’re gonna blow it.

 

“You’re what?” Takanuva Stars asked.

 

“Nothing.”

 

They had reached Rocka and Evo. As far as Nex was concerned, the rest of the sets in the room had all stopped talking, because it sounded as if, well, there were no sounds. The four stared awkwardly at each other for several minutes. Evo coughed and Takanuva Stars scratched his head, before nudging Nex with his elbow.

 

“Say it!” the Toa hissed.

 

“Fine.”

 

Nex stood straight and cleared his throat importantly. He tried to ignore the fact that Evo had just rolled his eyes at him.

 

“I would like to formally apologize for my previous behaviour, should it have in any way offended you.”

 

Rocka snorted and looked away. The other three glanced at him and Rocka waved them off, turning around and doubling over as he began to silently laugh.

 

“Are you alright?” Takanuva asked.

 

Evo, watching Rocka with a confused expression, began to chuckle. He glanced over to Nex, and then Nex began to laugh as well. A befuddled expression remained firmly on the face of Takanuva Stars as the three heroes began to laugh outright, Nex clutching his stomach as he doubled over and Rocka falling to his knees as he shrieked, while Evo bent with his hands on his knees, trying to remain upright. The sets gathered around them began to watch as the three heroes lost it completely, forming a circle.

 

ENOUGH!

 

Nex froze, the last laugh stuck on his face for a split second before it was gone and he jerked up, standing straight and at attention.

 

Enough of this humiliation! You are disgracing us!

 

To the sets around, Nex’s eyes went strangely blank as he was sucked down into himself.

 

*-*-*-*

 

Nex landed on the firm black floor and fell to one knee to balance himself on the landing, inadvertently kneeling before Nex 2.0 in the process. The older set smirked as Nex scrambled to his feet.

 

“I’m not humiliating anyone!” Nex said. “I was just laughing with my friends!”

 

“Your… friends?”

 

“Yes!”

 

“They aren’t your friends. You have no friends. Even I’m not your friend.”

 

“Well, you’re stupid, so you don’t count.”

 

I’m stupid? Kid, you’re the stupid one. You have no idea what you’ve walked into. You’re nothing but a stepping stone for me, you hear?”

 

“I’m a what?”

 

“A stepping stone, you fool. You’re just a transition phase. Soon I’ll be able to take over you completely – and then after that, I’ll be strong enough to return to myself again.”

 

“And… and what happens to me?”

 

“Who cares? If you perish, I don’t mind, because it means I live.”

 

“But… I’m like… an advancement of you.”

 

“Oh are you?”

 

“Yeah!”

 

“Prove it, kid. We’re gonna fight right here, right now. If you beat me, fine, you’ve proven your point for now. If I win… well… let’s just say things might get nasty.”

 

“No. I don’t need to prove anything to you.”

 

Nex turned his back on the older hero and began to walk away. A second later he heard a little whoosh of air, and he sidestepped just in time for Nex 2.0 to crash in the ground where he’d been. Then, ignoring a rather strange desire to remain where he was, Nex leapt back into conscious thought.

 

*-*-*-*

 

Nex came to still standing as rigid as he’d left, with Strakk, Rocka, Kiina and Takanuva Stars all examining him. Strakk started as Nex suddenly came to life, flexing his arm to stretch it.

 

“He’s back!” the Glatorian said. “Or… well… were you gone?”

 

“In a way, yeah… I suppose you could say that.”

 

“If he’s going to do that in the middle of a battle, then we can’t trust him.” Kiina said, her eyes narrowed as she glared at Nex.

 

Nex stared right back. However, Kiina’s glare was too fierce, and he looked away a moment later. The female Glatorian snorted derisively and turned away.

 

“Figure him out.” she ordered to Strakk. “If he can’t fix himself, he can always be used as spare parts.”

 

A deep fury rose up from within Nex, aided with a mighty push by the inwardly smirking Nex 2.0. Nex snarled and lunged forward, grabbing Kiina by the shoulder and hauling her back towards him to give her a piece of his mind. However, the Glatorian swept his hand away and within seconds had him pinned against the wall, with the point of her trident at his throat.

 

“I’m warning you, Nex.” she whispered in a voice so quiet it was deadly. “One wrong move and I will remove you. Do you hear? You’re just like Nex 2.0… uncannily so. Something isn’t right with you, and I intend to figure out what it is.”

 

With that, she wrenched her trident back, spared Nex one last disgusted look, and then stalked away. The crowd of sets obediently cleared a path for her, stumbling over each other in their haste to back up. Nex glared after her silently, until Takanuva Stars nervously approached him.

 

“So… shall we continue on?” the Toa asked. “There’s uh… there’s a lot more to show you.”

 

“Very well then.”

 

As Nex followed the Toa through the crowd, he could’ve sworn he heard one last remark from Nex 2.0 echo in his mind.

 

Don’t you worry, kid. Revenge is on the way.

 

*-*-*-*

 

Kopaka Nuva frowned as he sat in his shadowy perch above Pohatu Nuva, watching as the Toa Nuva of Stone was approached by both Gali Nuva and Onua Nuva.

 

“You wanted to talk with us, Pohatu Nuva?” Onua Nuva asked.

 

“I did… I do. I’ve just been wondering how you two are faring with how Lewa Mata is running things.”

 

“It’s not mightily different, is it?” Onua Nuva responded. “There’s just less fighting.”

 

“What about you, Gali?”

 

“The same for me. It’s certainly a more relaxing life right now.”

 

“So… you two don’t think anything seems… off?”

 

“What’s off about it?” asked Onua Nuva.

 

“Kopaka Nuva barely even talks to any of us anymore, and when he does, he’s angry – not to mention that more than half the time he’s missing. I wouldn’t be surprised if he’s listening right now, but ALMIGHTY knows I’m not gonna find him if I look.”

 

“Now that you mention it, things do seem odd.” said Onua Nuva thoughtfully. “The Piraka and Barraki are always flitting from place to place, and several sets have vanished altogether.”

 

“It’s too quiet. There’s no resistance, yet there seem to be an awful lot of sets unhappy with Lewa Mata in charge.” said the Toa Nuva of Water.

 

“That’s what I’m afraid of.” Pohatu Nuva said. “I feel like we’re walking right into some sort of ambush, but Lewa Mata refuses to believe it and even if he did, we can’t tell where it’s coming from.”

 

The three Toa Nuva began to walk away as they continued to converse about the issues at hand, and a few moments later their voices were indistinguishable to the white Toa Nuva hiding above. Frowning even more than he had before, for the suspicions of Pohatu Nuva were far closer to the mark than he’d realized, Kopaka Nuva slid into the shadows to report back to Kiina and Strakk.

 

To Be Continued.


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#202 Offline MT Zehvor

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Posted May 16 2013 - 06:20 PM

Nex 2.0 is a creeper.

 

Good chappy. Also Kopaka Nuva should get a spin-off comedy about him doing spy stuff.

 

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Posted May 17 2013 - 08:02 PM

MT is correct.

And, Yay! Proof that Makuta and Takanuva Stars are in the resistance against Lewa Mata.


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Posted May 20 2013 - 07:34 AM

Nex 2.0 is a creeper.

 

Good chappy. Also Kopaka Nuva should get a spin-off comedy about him doing spy stuff.

 

-MT

 

I have so many spinoff ideas already I can't contain them all! I do believe I have Kopaka Nuva scheduled for a bit more spying however, so perhaps that will quench your thirst just enough for you to clamour for more.

 

MT is correct.

And, Yay! Proof that Makuta and Takanuva Stars are in the resistance against Lewa Mata.

 

You'll find that Lewa Mata's army is mostly composed of all of my favourite characters. Strakk, Kopaka Nuva, Rocka, Evo, Takanuva Stars, Makuta... all of them are the good guys. =P


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Posted May 20 2013 - 09:05 PM

If we don't get a Kopaka Nuva spin off, I at least demand a TF2 Kopaka Nuva skin for the Spy.

 

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Posted May 24 2013 - 12:32 PM

^this.

And where has the chappy gone?


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Posted May 24 2013 - 12:40 PM

If we don't get a Kopaka Nuva spin off, I at least demand a TF2 Kopaka Nuva skin for the Spy.

 

-MT

 

If I had the skills to do so, I would.

 

^this.

And where has the chappy gone?

 

You mean Chapter 4? I'm not 100% sure you guys are going to like what happens here, but ok:

 

 

Dear Tahu Mata,

 

I like to believe that I am not in fact a fool, thank you very much. I trust my troops and they trust me. With regards to the rather consistent hate mail I have been receiving from some of your men, I am surprised you haven’t realized how many are trying to think of ways they could stab you in the back. So watch your back before I am forced to grovel in the dirt and watch it for you.

 

Let’s forget I said that, because let’s be honest – someday, I am going to kill you. Does it matter so much if you die and I am then forced to unite the Bionicle sets under one banner versus the Hero Factory sets? Of course not. Well, not to me, at any rate. Who cares about you.

 

Wait a moment… what was that? I’m sorry, I’m not quite sure why I wrote that down. If you’re wondering, the ceiling is now cracking. Wait! No! What? This can’t be good… that’s… that’s the Bedroom.

 

And that’s Von Nebula crashing to the floor. What is this madness?! What is… wait… no! He’s huge! I cannot waste any more foolish words on you, Tahu Mata! My army and I must fight back!

 

-Tahu Stars

 

Chapter 4 – Incumbent

 

Nex tried to ignore the buzz at the back of his mind as he sat down on the floor, resting with his back to the wall. Evo and Surge plopped down on either side of him, and then Rocka and Takanuva Stars did the same.

 

“You know, this is nice.” Takanuva Stars said.

 

“What’s nice?” asked Evo.

 

“This. Just sitting here, relaxing, chatting a bit. I’ve never really gotten to do it before now.”

 

“Yeah, I forgot – you’ve been at war for your entire life pretty much, right?” asked Rocka.

 

“Indeed I have. A set needs to just kick back and relax every now and then, you know what I mean?”

 

“Yeah, I think I do.” Nex said quietly.

 

It had been several weeks since Takanuva Stars had (with some difficulty, Nex had noticed) inducted him into the Resistance. So far it had been fantastic, except for one set in particular….

 

“Hey Nex, what’s up between you and Kiina?” asked Rocka. “Every time she’s around you, it’s as if a fly just flew up her nose.”

 

“Don’t even get me started.” Nex said bitterly.

 

“Kiina has an issue with Nex being Nex.” Takanuva Stars said, with an air of one frustrated but out of control. “Her problem is that he bears a strong resemblance to our old friend Nex 2.0 – she’s not the only one, unfortunately.”

 

“But why? I don’t get it.” said Rocka. “It’s not like you’re housing Nex 2.0 inside your brain or anything.”

 

“Uh… yeah, I suppose.” said Nex.

 

Oh, if you only knew the irony in that statement of yours, Rocka….

 

Hey kid, shut it up. You still glaze over like a bozo or something whenever we speak.

 

I wasn’t talking to you.

 

Whatever.

 

Nex shook his head to clear it as Takanuva Stars stood up. The hero did the same, knowing it was high time the two of them returned to Lewa Mata.

 

“I guess we’ll see you guys tomorrow, or the day after.” Takanuva Stars said.

 

“Yeah, see you later.” said Rocka.

 

“Good luck!” Evo called.

 

As he and Takanuva Stars edged their way towards the exit, Nex began to hope against hope that they would fail to run into Kiina – which, of course, she turned up as soon as he started thinking about her.

 

Someday I am going to kill that Glatorian, honestly.

 

Don’t worry kid, it’s not far off….

 

Nex shivered and shut Nex 2.0 out as Kiina held out an arm to stop him and Takanuva Stars, an aggravated Strakk and Kopaka Nuva standing right behind her.

 

“Where do you think you’re going?” Kiina asked, her voice raised slightly in accusation.

 

“We’re leaving, as most sets tend to do sometimes.” Takanuva Stars said, his voice guarded. “We’re allowed to leave this room, you know.”

 

“For now, perhaps.” Kiina said, her eyes glinting with malice. “I don’t tolerate traitors, however.”

 

“What’s that supposed to mean?” asked Strakk, evidently starting to get fed up with Kiina’s attitude.

 

“It means I don’t trust someone, Strakk. I don’t trust someone at all.”

 

“Spit it out, already.” Takanuva Stars said, sounding frustrated and, Nex noted, a little afraid.

 

They were supposed to meet Lewa Mata at precisely eleven in the morning in the Bedroom for a meeting. They had roughly three minutes left.

 

“Him.” Kiina said, pointing to Nex and then glaring at him as though he housed all of the world’s problems. “He’s just like that other freak, Nex 2.0.”

 

“Kiina, watch your tongue.” Strakk said.

 

“Watch your tongue, Strakk. Or I’ll watch it for you.”

 

“Kiina, that’s enough. Actually, it’s way more than enough. There was never any point at all.”

 

Kiina whirled around and grabbed Strakk by the neck. Kopaka Nuva was already reacting, but she kicked him to the floor and then dropped Strakk, who crumpled upon landing.

 

“Remember how powerful I am.” the female Glatorian snapped. “I tore Nex 2.0 to pieces, and he only survived because I made him beg, like a dog, for survival. And you-”

 

Here she turned back to Nex, poking him with her finger,

 

“I’m going to do the exact same thing. You don’t deserve to live.”

 

“Get your hands off of me.”

 

It was the first time Nex had spoken to Kiina directly – perhaps even around her at all. Naturally, she didn’t listen.

 

“Get your finger off of me, or I will make you regret it. You’ve made Takanuva Stars and I two minutes late already for our meeting with Lewa Mata. You know how suspicious he is these days – and if he catches on to us because of it, you can be sure that in the name of ALMIGHTY, I will make sure you go down with me.”

 

Before Kiina could respond, Nex pushed Takanuva Stars on and then shoved her out of the way. Kiina tried to leap at him, but was restrained – barely – by Strakk and Kopaka Nuva as the other two sets exited the room.

 

They had reached the Living Room before Takanuva Stars spoke, as they reached the seven minutes late mark.

 

“Oh man, this isn’t good.” Takanuva Stars whispered. “What do we do?”

 

“Maybe Lewa Mata will believe us when we say Meltdown and Rotor sidetracked us?”

 

“Or perhaps he knows now why the two of you vanish so often, and has decided to arrest the two of you and sentence the both of you to death.”

 

Nex and Takanuva Stars froze and glanced at each other, contemplating just making a run for it.

 

“I wouldn’t bother making a run for it.” Lewa Mata said, guessing their thought processes accurately. “You won’t make halfway to the Basement before the sets I have stationed around capture you.”

 

“Maybe we could talk about it?” Nex asked hopefully as he turned around.

 

Kid, you really are stupid.

 

I’m not stupid! I’m stalling for time.

 

No point stalling for time, kid. His mind is set. It’s fight or flight. Or surrender, except that if you surrender I will take over and we will fight. Which makes it just fight or flight.

 

“Furno, what are you doing here?” Nex asked, ignoring Nex 2.0 as the red Hero stepped into view.

 

“Lewa Mata brought me along to arrest you.” Furno said. “You’ve joined the Resistance… that’s against all of the rules.”

 

“Actually, it’s only against the third rule.” Nex said. “Sets are not allowed to join the Resistance.”

 

“Except that the Resistance goes out of its way to break every single rule on that chart.” Lewa Mata muttered.

 

“Oh, right… yeah, I guess that is problematic. Guilty by association.”

 

Fight! Now! I know that look, he’s about to attack!

 

Nex hadn’t even finished processing what Nex 2.0 had said before he was flipping backwards, narrowly avoiding Lewa Mata’s axe.

 

“Furno, you get Nex! I have a bigger traitor to deal with.”

 

“I’m not big enough?” Nex asked.

 

Lewa Mata ignored him and began to duel Takanuva Stars – the Toa of Light immediately began to lose ground. Unfortunately for Nex, he no longer knew what was going on. He was fading back until he was surrounded by blackness, and before Furno could react, he was (although he did not know it yet) now battling Nex 2.0.

 

The most ruthless set the House had ever known.

 

*-*-*-*

 

“Kiina, what was that back there? Honestly, you were acting like… like… well, some sort of psychological version of Nex 2.0.” Strakk said.

 

“I told you to watch your mouth, Strakk. I’m in charge, not you.”

 

Kopaka Nuva rolled his eyes, glancing back to the sets One and Two, the most prominent remaining members of the Skrall Stars line, back in the crowd. Judging from the looks on their faces, they agreed with him. He tuned back into the conversation of Strakk and Kiina as they arrived at the meeting place, where Makuta was already waiting.

 

“You are late.” the Titan said. “And, judging from the looks I see on Strakk and Kopaka Nuva, not for a good reason.”

 

“Any reason of mine is a good reason!” Kiina snapped. “It was that fool hero Nex, and his friend Takanuva Stars. Traitors, both of them.”

 

“You have no reason to believe that, Kiina.” Kopaka Nuva said coldly. “Listen to yourself. You sound insane. Start listening to reason, or we’ll stop listening to you.”

 

It was a testament to the respect Kopaka Nuva held amongst the sets that Kiina satisfied herself with just glaring at him for what he had just dared to say.

 

“Get out.” she said at length, turning away. “Strakk and I will fill Makuta in ourselves. Stay out of my sight for awhile.”

 

“Whatever you say. You are the leader, after all.”

 

Kopaka Nuva made a semi-mocking bow to the female Glatorian before exiting the meeting area, to find both One and Two waiting for him.

 

“What is it?” he asked.

 

“Takadox and Ehlek were just wondering what you found out. Actually, so were we.” said One.

 

“Yeah, maybe we can come on the next recon mission too!” said Two.

 

“Perhaps… although it is up to Kiina who goes, and I must admit that just like you, I appear to have fallen out of her favor. Take me to the Barraki, and I will share my tale with you.”

 

The two Skrall Stars did as he asked – Takadox and Ehlek were waiting a short ways away.

 

“Hey Kopaka Nuva, what’s up?” asked Ehlek. “You’ve been spying on the enemy again?”

 

“I have… I discovered some worrying news, but of course Kiina doesn’t listen.”

 

“She doesn’t listen to anybody.” Takadox scoffed. “I mean, she was bad when she was just the leader of the Blue League, but ever since she defeated Nex 2.0….”

 

“Wait, Kiina beat Nex 2.0?” asked Two.

 

“Indeed she did.” Takadox said. “Tore him apart, had him begging for death – left him alive to shame him. Of course, a few weeks later he was good as new thanks to the Throwbots and then Lewa Mata killed him.”

 

“You know, considering how bad Kiina is, I almost feel sorry for Nex 2.0.” One said. “But not quite.”

 

“What did you find out?” asked Ehlek.

 

“Pohatu Nuva suspects something is going on – and, thanks to him, Gali Nuva and Onua Nuva do as well. But that was as far as I got with Kiina, because she wouldn’t believe it… I have worse news.”

 

“I hate to say it, but worse news probably means we’re borderline screwed.” said Ehlek.

 

“Who it is I do not know, but from conversations between Lewa Mata and Stormer XL I gathered that there is a traitor amongst the Resistance feeding them any information he can get – and it’s not Nex or Takanuva Stars, it’s someone that’s been with us since Lewa Mata took power.”

 

“Well….” Ehlek trailed off. “You know, I really hate it when I turn out to be right.”

 

*-*-*-*

 

Nex 2.0 slammed Furno’s head into the wall violently before stepping back to watch his handiwork, as the red hero staggered two steps before collapsing.

 

“That’s right, you weakling. Stay down!”

 

Furno’s response was to slowly stand back up. Nex 2.0 kicked at him, but the hero dodged away and then fired his blaster, hitting Nex 2.0 in the eye.

 

“Nex, you seem… different.” Furno said.

 

“Because I’m not Nex, you fool!”

 

Nex 2.0 punched Furno in the face and the hero went down again – however, he began to get back up, infuriating the orange hero further. Nex 2.0 stepped on him and pressed down hard, snapping one of Furno’s pipes off.

 

“You know, back in my day… sets knew the concept of staying on the ground when they lost, rather than getting up to be defeated again.”

 

“I… haven’t lost yet.” said Furno.

 

The red hero flung himself backwards and Nex 2.0 was sent stumbling backwards – however, he threw his multi-tool ice shield and caught Furno around the throat, immobilizing the hero.

 

“You have now.” Nex 2.0 hissed. “Now… let’s see how your Toa friends are doing.”

 

 

Nex 2.0 turned to watch, and he saw Takanuva Stars slam into the wall, both of his weapons gone from his hands as he slumped to the floor. Lewa Mata readied his axe, and swung down – only to snarl as his arm was blasted away, saving Takanuva Stars.

 

“Nex! You’re next! I’m going to kill you like I killed Nex 2.0… right after I kill this traitor!”

 

“You’re going to wait a moment, think rationally about the situation, and I’m going to explain my motives and what I think is best.” Nex 2.0 said, smiling maniacally. “You see, I went in there undercover – I can give you pieces of information straight from the leaders of the Resistance themselves.”

 

Lewa Mata froze, staring at him, suspicion still lingering in his gaze. Taking his silence as an urge to continue, Nex 2.0 spoke again.

 

“Now, Takanuva Stars needs to learn a lesson – but why not make it a public one? Do it in the Backyard. Announce it to every set, so that the entire Resistance can watch as we slaughter one of their friends. Undoubtedly they will try to save him, and give us several prisoners in a desperate rescue mission that shall fail.”

 

Lewa Mata nodded slowly. “Nex, you cunning little sneak… I didn’t think you had it in you – I honestly didn’t. But the brilliance of that plan astounds me. Alright, let’s do it.”

 

He signaled down the Hallway, and two sets entered the Living Room. Lewa Mata pointed to the unconscious forms of Takanuva Stars and Furno.

 

“Stormer XL, you take care of Furno. Core Hunter, bring Takanuva Stars – and be a little rough with him. I want him to truly know what pain is before he dies.”

 

The two Hero Factory sets bowed low, remaining silent as they obediently fulfilled the Toa of Air’s command.

 

“Nex, you might have just handed us the victory in this war.” Lewa Mata said.

 

Oh no, you fool. And don’t you worry in there, kid. Relax for a moment. The execution will draw Kiina out – that’ll give us the opportunity we need to make sure she is killed. Then, we attend to Lewa Mata… and perhaps if we’re lucky we save Takanuva Stars as well – but only if he agrees to obey me in order to pay for what he did.

 

*-*-*-*

 

“Hey Vezok… would you mind filling me in on why we didn’t help Nex and Takanuva Stars out there?” asked Hakann as they pushed their way through the crowd towards Kiina, Strakk and Rocka.

 

“Well first of all, Kiina hates them. Second of all, Kiina hates us. Third, Kiina ordered us to only trail them, and she hates her orders being disobeyed. Fourth, Lewa Mata had backup all over the place, so it’s a wonder we weren’t caught ourselves. Fifth, something changed in Nex during the fight, and not for the better.”

 

“That was a really long sentence.”

 

“It wasn’t just one sentence, you moron.”

 

“Hey! I’m no moron, you are!”

 

“I’m a member of the Blue League.”

 

“Because you’re blue, Vezok. Honestly, don’t try that on me. We all know you’re no better at fighting than the rest of us Piraka.”

 

“I’m better than Reidak and Zaktan.”

 

“Wow, isn’t that an accomplishment?”

 

“What do you Piraka want?”

 

The speaker was Kiina, and she was already furious – Hakann took a step backward and pushed Vezok forward, motioning for him to speak. The blue Piraka turned to glare at him for a second before speaking.

 

“Nex and Takanuva Stars have been captured.”

 

“It figures. The morons couldn’t even do one thing right.” Kiina said, a look of disgust on her face.

 

“You made them late, Kiina!” Strakk cried. “This is your fault – Lewa Mata was bound to suspect something! And he ambushed them!”

 

Kiina whirled around to grab Strakk, but found Rocka’s crossbow aimed right at her face as she did so, putting the leader of the Resistance at risk of an immediate death.

 

“Lower your weapon, hero.” Kiina ordered.

 

“Only if you’ll shut your face.” Rocka ordered. “I’m sick of you and your attitude. You know what? You can’t kill all of us. We don’t listen to you anymore. It’s your fault we’re in this mess, so kiss your pretty little butt goodbye.”

 

“Hakann?”

 

“…yes Vezok?”

 

“Get backup. Just in case, you know.”

 

“…got it.”

 

Hakann turned and bolted, searching for Makuta or Kopaka Nuva, as Strakk, Vezok and Rocka readied their weapons. Kiina glanced from face to face with disgust and hatred, finally resting her gaze on Vezok.

 

“I can’t believe you’ve become so worthless.” she spat. “A member of the Blue League that I formed, that I led throughout the war! Betraying me! How could you?”

 

“You didn’t do anything except humiliate Nex 2.0, Kiina.” Vezok said. “Gali Mata, Takadox, Tarix, even Nokama Metru did more behind the scenes than you did. And even when you fought Nex 2.0, it was for the sole purpose of humiliating him. And then you let him live, so that he could continue to terrorize the House.”

 

“Your time to reign is over, Kiina.” said Strakk.

 

“You’re a corrupt core, Kiina, and you need to be removed.” Rocka added. “And then, once we’re done with you, we go to rescue our friends.”

 

Kiina’s only response was to shift her tridents and thornaxx launcher in preparation for the battle, as Rocka, Strakk and Vezok charged at her.

 

Rocka stumbled backwards as he took a thornaxx round to the chest, but he was covered by Strakk, who began to match Kiina blow for blow until he too was knocked away, as Vezok blasted Kiina in the chest with a zamor sphere. The female Glatorian hissed and kicked Vezok in the head, but the Piraka remained standing as he and Rocka both took aim again and fired. Kiina ducked underneath the shots and quickly incapacitated Vezok, leaving in Rocka’s way.

 

“Kiina, enough!” he heard Strakk yell. “Look at yourself! You’ve become as bad as Nex 2.0 himself!”

 

“NO! I AM BETTER THAN ALL OF YOU!”

 

Rocka slowly stood to his feet and was disarmed by Kiina before being kicked back – as he stood again, Kiina lost her own launcher to Strakk, but had then used her trident to trap Strakk to the wall by the neck. The white Glatorian struggled in vain as Kiina turned to face Rocka. The golden hero gulped and raised his arms in a defensive stance.

 

“Give up, hero.”

 

“No… somebody is going to stop you. I just need to slow you down.”

 

Kiina charged and punched at him. Rocka slapped her arm away and swung a fist into her gut, but Kiina grabbed his arm and slammed him onto the ground. Rocka pulled  Kiina down with him and rolled so that he was on top, punching her in the face once before he was thrown away. Before he could stand Kiina had kicked him in the head and he was sprawling backwards, before she pulled him back and then punched him in the face. Rocka stumbled backwards out the door to the meeting room and into the grand room where most of the Resistance stared as he collapsed backwards.

 

“Kiina… stop it….”

 

Kiina responded by stalking out the door and grabbing Rocka by the chest, lifting him up and then spinning him around before throwing him into the wall. Rocka felt the strength leaving his limbs as he struggled to get up and Kiina stalked towards him. He saw two blue feet out of the corner of his eye and paused before gazing up to see Surge standing in front of him, his sword to Kiina’s throat. A second later, Makuta lifted the blue Glatorian up by the neck.

 

“Kiina, we hereby relieve you of duty.” said Surge. “You will be given the opportunity to redeem yourself and earn a place back in this Resistance when we rescue Nex and Takanuva Stars – until then, it’s off to the Vezons with you. They’ll keep you nice and isolated, and maybe you’ll finally decide to listen to what we’ve been trying to tell you.”

 

As Kiina was led away, Surge crouched down and helped Rocka to his feet.

 

“You know Surge, I never saw you as the kind of guy that would do something like that.” Rocka confessed.

 

“Well, I had to – Makuta isn’t any good at it and Kopaka Nuva went off somewhere. The only other guys were you, Vezok and Strakk – so, it went to me.”

 

“Well, regardless… thanks. I’m not sure where I’d be if you hadn’t stepped in.”

 

“Your face would be a whole lot uglier, I can tell you that. And trust me, you already need all the help you can get.”

 

“What’s that supposed to mean?!”

 

“Uh… nothing, Rocka. Nothing at all.”

 

To Be Continued.

 

Clocking in at about 3600 words, this chapter has become the second longest in the history of Tahu vs. Tahu - overtaking the 3100 words long finale to TvT: Aftermath, but still shorter than the 5000 word monolith that is the finale of TvT: Deconstruction.

 

The season's first real battle begins in Chapter 5, and then we'll move into the second story arc of the season.


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Posted May 24 2013 - 01:31 PM

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You mean Chapter 4? I'm not 100% sure you guys are going to like what happens here, but ok

Wrong reason, but correct.

Why isn't Core Hunter in the resistance?


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Posted May 24 2013 - 02:01 PM

That is one messed up quote post, RG. xD

 

Anyway, Core Hunter isn't in the Resistance because Lewa Mata got to the second wave of 2012 first - with the sole exception of Nex, every single wave 2 set from 2012 is evil.

 

Expect Core Hunter, Stormer XL, and XT4 all to play significant roles in certain events.


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Posted May 24 2013 - 08:55 PM

Wait a moment… what was that? I’m sorry, I’m not quite sure why I wrote that down. If you’re wondering, the ceiling is now cracking. Wait! No! What? This can’t be good… that’s… that’s the Bedroom.

 

And that’s Von Nebula crashing to the floor. What is this madness?! What is… wait… no! He’s huge! I cannot waste any more foolish words on you, Tahu Mata! My army and I must fight back!

I love how Tahu Nuva takes the time to narrate all of this. :P

 

 


“Kiina, enough!” he heard Strakk yell. “Look at yourself! You’ve become as bad as Nex 2.0 himself!”

 

“NO! I AM BETTER THAN ALL OF YOU!”

Kiina slowly becomes Richard Sherman.

 

Dramatic chappy. I'd be interested to know (and you can not answer this if it's spoilerific), will slowly becoming insane due to war become a common theme in the series?

 

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Posted May 25 2013 - 12:27 AM

 

Wait a moment… what was that? I’m sorry, I’m not quite sure why I wrote that down. If you’re wondering, the ceiling is now cracking. Wait! No! What? This can’t be good… that’s… that’s the Bedroom.

 

And that’s Von Nebula crashing to the floor. What is this madness?! What is… wait… no! He’s huge! I cannot waste any more foolish words on you, Tahu Mata! My army and I must fight back!

I love how Tahu Nuva takes the time to narrate all of this. :P

 

 


“Kiina, enough!” he heard Strakk yell. “Look at yourself! You’ve become as bad as Nex 2.0 himself!”

 

“NO! I AM BETTER THAN ALL OF YOU!”

Kiina slowly becomes Richard Sherman.

 

Dramatic chappy. I'd be interested to know (and you can not answer this if it's spoilerific), will slowly becoming insane due to war become a common theme in the series?

 

-MT

 

 

Well, technically speaking, I don't think anybody is quite there anymore, except maybe some of the newer 2012 sets.


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