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#1 Online Randy Disher

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 06:02 PM

Front

Front 2

Front 3

Body design

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Head

Back

Weapon

 

As usual, C&C appreciated.


Edited by Eye of Sauron, Dec 17 2012 - 06:02 PM.


#2 Online Chro

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 06:11 PM

Not bad. The upper legs are good, and the torso armoring looks nice, although the gaps around the RawJaw head bug me... that is one crazy weapon in the right hand. :lol:


Edited by Chro, Dec 17 2012 - 06:12 PM.


#3 Online Dralcax

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 07:26 PM

The head is very nice, very alien-like. The torso is decent, despite the tiny gaps, although you may want to put some tiles on the crotch area. The limbs, while creative, look somewhat slapped on. I would recommend adjusting the bulkiness in some places to make them look better. And the weapon, it seems kind of busy. Try simplifying it and make it in a similar style to the rest.


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