Inhabitant
Posted Jan 15 2013 - 06:09 PM
Chaos and disaster
Affect many lives
Never knowing
When it will occur with the
End of the day bringing new hope for
Survivors as sunlight fades
Tomorrow is upon us
A new dawn approaching
Rendering actions of yesterday
To become the past
Opening new opportunities
Veering our course in new directions
Entering your new path
Remembering
Just the lives lost
Once cherished
Halo-bound now
No one could’ve seen it coming.
Wordsmith <3
Tohunga
Posted Jan 15 2013 - 10:32 PM
Hmm... Interesting. Nice poem, but why doesn't it rhyme?
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Everyone seems to be saying that Star Wars Episode VII is going to be lousy. If you're part of the 8% (or whatever percentage it is) who still cling to the hope that it will be awesome (which mostly hinges on the question of getting Hamill, Fisher, and Ford back) then may the force be with you.
Happy Star Wars Day. (as of May 4th)
My written works on BZPower thus far:
comedy - Mask of Light: What You Didn't See
short stories - Dancing With Shadows - Lonesome Spirits - The Golden Mask - Bionicle Hero
Epic - The Protar Chronicles (on hiatus right now, unfortunately)
Inhabitant
Posted Jan 16 2013 - 07:13 PM
Thank you Takuaka for your comment. I do hope you liked it even though it didn't rhyme...I'll do another one in the future that does rhyme for you. 
Wordsmith <3
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