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#1 Online CeeCee

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Posted Jan 25 2013 - 07:28 PM

Story: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=8442

 

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Edited by Commander CeeCee, Jan 25 2013 - 07:29 PM.

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Posted Jan 25 2013 - 08:39 PM

I have a feeling this has something to do with the Red Star...

 

Interesting enough prologue. I'll be keeping an eye on this.


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Posted Jan 26 2013 - 12:25 AM

Sounds good, it also sounds like the speaker has amnesia. Though the anger part sounds like my dark side. 


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Posted Jan 26 2013 - 06:35 AM

I have a feeling this has something to do with the Red Star...

 

Interesting enough prologue. I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Well, thats an interesting idea and I would use that if I were doing a Bionicle conversion, but i decided to do something different and write an off topic story.


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Posted Jan 26 2013 - 07:29 AM

I have a feeling this has something to do with the Red Star...

 

Interesting enough prologue. I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Well, thats an interesting idea and I would use that if I were doing a Bionicle conversion, but i decided to do something different and write an off topic story.

 

I should have been more clear, I meant something akin to the Red Star.


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Posted Jan 26 2013 - 07:44 AM

I have a feeling this has something to do with the Red Star...

 

Interesting enough prologue. I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Well, thats an interesting idea and I would use that if I were doing a Bionicle conversion, but i decided to do something different and write an off topic story.

 

I should have been more clear, I meant something akin to the Red Star.

Oh... I see. Well, you may be correct there ;)


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