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#1 Online Chro

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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 09:10 PM

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(Not really a Phantoka MOC, but it's a similar idea.)

 

 

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 12:11 AM

This looks great. Reminds me of a republic commando (probably cause I'm listing to Vode An.) But what I really like is the tubes going through the eyes of the Pakari.


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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 09:54 AM

Thanks, Ric. I'm not too familiar with the appearance of Republic Commandos, actually. I did feel that the tubes were fitting of a low-oxygen environment, like high altitudes.

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 06:33 PM

Yeah, that's why he(or she?) wears the winged jet pack. And the knives on the armor make it look more of what I said. Now I feel like making one.


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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 10:21 AM

Yeah, that's why he(or she?) wears the winged jet pack. And the knives on the armor make it look more of what I said. Now I feel like making one.

Eh, no backstory or specified gender here, haha. I assume the commandos have wrist blades, then? Cool.



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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 06:53 PM

As always Chro, marvelous. I especially like the contrast of colors you have going on in this; the trans-orange with nui-jaga blue looks high-tech and spectacular. His wings (a function... *faints from joy*) also look techy and like they can get this guy moving pretty fast. The flames coming out of the wristblade in one of the shots was a nice touch, along with the unarmored skeleton shot (though the skeleton just makes me insecure about my own custom building potential. :P) Super job!


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Posted Feb 05 2013 - 08:35 PM

Thanks Freezerburn! :lol:
The wings aren't really a function, I suppose; they're just collapsible (or can fold back... whatever).
Yep, there was certainly an emphasis on speed for Taxir. ;)
Don't be insecure, haha. The point of the skeleton shots are to provide inspiration! I always say, and I know many agree, that the best place to start off from (or if not start, improve from) is by basing your MOCs off of others' designs, then changing it up to suit your needs. :)



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Posted Feb 07 2013 - 09:05 AM

Colors are great in this! I've used trans-orange and silver on one of the MOCs I have together right now. Well done overall. The build is superb. Probably my favorite of your MOCs. :)


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Posted Feb 08 2013 - 10:48 AM

Thanks Meiko! Yeah, trans parts are so fun to work with in MOCing. :lol:



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Posted Feb 13 2013 - 08:56 AM

Amazing MOC love the custom head on the new HF mask, the armor on the body look awesome but the body look odd. the arm are easy but fit greaat with the MOC. and love the leg and foot, i do like the use of the star foot and the use of the HF armor on the upper leg.


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