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#1 Offline goldenlewa

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 07:18 PM

Here is Tahrikon a Toa of Fire and also my self MOC there is a storyline behind him but I don't have the time currently to write it all up

 

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#2 Offline Flaredrick: Forgotten One

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 07:23 PM

He looks really good. I like how his wings are used for other purposes. Though I'm wondering is why he has gears on his legs.


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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 08:08 PM

Though I'm wondering is why he has gears on his legs.

Why not? :lol:

Overall this looks pretty good; obviously the torso and legs are the strong suits of the MOC. I feel that trans-bright-orange eyes would go better with the parts on the torso than the current trans-lime eyes.


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#4 Offline goldenlewa

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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 07:21 AM

@Flaredrick Thanks I really appreciate it! I put the Gears on there to bulk his legs up as well but I also thought they looked unique so I kept them

 

@Chro Yeah I see what you're saying considering I used Bohrok Orange Eyes for part of his armor, I will probably make a second more streamlined version as storyline-wise he can change modes and I'll use the Piraka Etepiece to represent his laser vision



#5 Offline Tomaku

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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 08:55 AM

It looks nice! I really like the way you included those Bohrok arms/legs in the torso :)



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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 09:17 AM

I like the construction of the torso and the legs. I think the upper arms could be improved, though - as is, they look quite skinny in comparison to the rest of the MOC. I would also change the bohrok eyes on the torso from trans-orange to a more contrasting color, such as trans-blue or trans-green.

 

Overall, though, good job on this MOC.


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Posted Feb 08 2013 - 09:09 AM

I like how the blades are multifunctioned, being used as blades(obviously), a board, or wings. I also liked how you put a lot of armor on him. Anyways, nice job.

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Posted Feb 13 2013 - 09:16 AM

Really good MOC like the mask, it make me think of my former selfMOC. Leg don't look that good i think the custom lower leg look some work on but it still ok. Arm look good but i don't like that metru upper leg armor sticking out. the wing is easy but good with the MOC and the body look really great like the use of the Bohrok arm/leg and i don't like the bohrok eye in that color it do not help the MOC with the color and i hope i get some in dark red.


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