Submerged!
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 03:25 PM
Here is my golden lion MOC made for BBCC 64: Golden Guy
Gallery(when public): http://www.brickshel...ry.cgi?f=522255
Yeah I know I didn't have the right inspiration for the name so I chose an easy and understandable nickname
He (mostly his head) is based on the Legend of Chima lions.
Comment Criticism and Cookies are appreciated.
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Defender of Mata Nui
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 03:51 PM
He certainly has some interesting designs, but the limbs seem a bit small for the body and I don't like how the Glatorian head's forehead is showing.
Also, I don't remember seeing you officially enter this, you should do that.
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Stone Champion Defeated
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 04:33 PM
Pretty okay MOC. My one criticism is that the legs look out of proportion with the rest of the build. Maybe try to beef them up a bit. Otherwise, I like it. 
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Exo-Armored Toa
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 06:41 PM
His legs look a bit thin, as Meiko said. The body armor looks a bit, um...too beefed. But if that armor is what your going for, then good luck.
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Posted Feb 08 2013 - 08:32 AM
Toa
Posted Feb 09 2013 - 09:59 PM
Nice MOC. Still I liked that old signature better. That signature reminded me about my old days.
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Tohunga
Posted Feb 09 2013 - 11:49 PM
To everyone criticizing the legs and/or beefy body, just think "Mr. Incredible." 
I like it. The color scheme of black and gold looks really good. It's not very hard to make a good-looking figure with these kind of arm and leg pieces, but the body seems unique enough. I like the use of the Olmak. I agree, though, that the helmet could probably look a little more like a helmet.
I also like those tubes with spikes. And the sword. Even though the sword doesn't say much for the design, given it's simple.
He looks pretty good to me.
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Submerged!
Posted Feb 12 2013 - 01:57 PM
To everyone criticizing the legs and/or beefy body, just think "Mr. Incredible."
Yeah everyone, just think that
No, the real reason behind him having non-beefy legs is simple: I had used all my new gold and by so couldn't add more armor.
Nice MOC. Still I liked that old signature better. That signature reminded me about my old days.
No problem, after the contest it's coming back
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 06:47 PM
Nice MOC man! I really like the head design 
Submerged!
Posted Feb 20 2013 - 05:27 PM
"I've been out for too long, betrayed by friends, feared by enemies.
I will return..."
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Exo-Armored Toa
Posted Feb 20 2013 - 08:44 PM
I can see why you went with this model, and not the old one.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
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