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#1 Offline maxthethrax

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Posted Feb 10 2013 - 02:22 PM

Hello and welcome to the Bohrok Chronicles.

 

This is the first story:

Red Krana Xa:Do you think that we need to go to the heads of the bohrok?
Lehvak:Hey :(!
Lehvak Kal:Do you want me to tell you who must ...BLORP... Red Krana Za is on me!I must give tea to the Bahrag!
Lehvak:But...BLORP!Dark Grey Krana Za is on me!I must gove tea to Red Krana Xa!
Kohrak:Hey,guys,do you ....WHAT?!?!?!
Red Krana Xa:Ha ha ha,your friends are on my control and i will delete Mata Nui!Ha ha ha ha,ha ha ha ha ha....
Kohrak:No you don't!
(attacking the krana and making it on jelly)
Kohrak:Now you've been arested!

This is the second:

 

The Bohrok are on a vacantion!
First Tahnok Kal says,that he want's hotdog.
:I want hotdog!
Then Lehvak says:
Lehvak:I want hotdog,too!
Tahnok Kal:But i wanted a hotdog first!
Lehvak:Yes,but i wanted it second
Tahnok Kal:I first!
Lehvak:Second is first!
Tahnok Kal:No!Im first!
Lehvak:The second is winner
Tahnok Kal:I'm second.
Lehvak:Well,im first and I will get the hotdog first!
Tahnok Kal,Gahlok Kal,Lehvak Kal,Pahrak Kal,Nuhvok Kal and Kohrak Kal:No you don't!
Lehvak:OK!

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#2 Offline Chro

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Posted Feb 10 2013 - 03:16 PM

Perhaps this'd be better suited for the comedies section, no? ;)



#3 Offline Hahli Husky

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Posted Feb 10 2013 - 03:57 PM

Moved to Comedies, the home for humorous stories such as this one. :) Since the 300-word rule is going to be abolished soon, I'm just going to leave this open.



#4 Offline Dude w/ a Hat

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Posted Feb 11 2013 - 02:07 PM

 Since the 300-word rule is going to be abolished soon, I'm just going to leave this open.

.....What?


"You should never underestimate an opponent. Nor should you underestimate their arrogance."

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#5 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Feb 11 2013 - 02:59 PM

 Since the 300-word rule is going to be abolished soon, I'm just going to leave this open.

.....What?

 

Currently the Comedies forum has a rule that every chapter of a comedy must be at least 300 words. Currently your comedy with both stories together is just under 170, but HH is saying that it can stay, because the 300 word rule is going to be removed.

 

So your comedy would have been closed, but it hasn't because the rule isn't going to be in place anymore.

 

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Posted Feb 11 2013 - 09:41 PM

 Since the 300-word rule is going to be abolished soon, I'm just going to leave this open.

.....What?

 

Currently the Comedies forum has a rule that every chapter of a comedy must be at least 300 words. Currently your comedy with both stories together is just under 170, but HH is saying that it can stay, because the 300 word rule is going to be removed.

 

So your comedy would have been closed, but it hasn't because the rule isn't going to be in place anymore.

 

-ibrow

Well.

 

Wrong guy.


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#7 Offline Dude w/ a Hat

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Posted Feb 11 2013 - 10:48 PM

Eh, I did not write this. Just puzzled because they're removing the Sparta Rule, as I like to call it.


"You should never underestimate an opponent. Nor should you underestimate their arrogance."

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#8 Offline maxthethrax

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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 03:46 AM

Yay!My comedy topic can be here!


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