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[CeeCee]

This was some what experimental. Im still knew to this but I hope you all like it. 

 

Sometimes I Dream

 

I am not your usual dreamer.

 

Or Maybe I am.

 

Because you can never really know what someone dreams about.

 

When I watch you sleep,  I like to pretend I can,

 

I pretend you dream the things I dream but I know it not to be true.

 

If you could see my dream, what would you do?

 

Would you shun me from your life?

 

Suppress me from you memory until I’m nothing more than a blinking light?

 

There are some dreams you can never forget though.

 

Do you dream the same things as me?

 

I can not be who I want to be because who I want to be cannot be.

 

It’s a sad and lonesome truth but it’s one I live with.

 

Sometimes I dream for hours.

 

I let the wave a sadness wash over me,

 

Then let the fires of rage flow my blood through my blood and I let it spill.

 

I know you can’t dream like me and the things I dream about.

 

Sometimes I dream of you,

 

And I dream maybe, just maybe, that you dream of me too.

Edited by Commander CeeCee, Feb 10 2013 - 07:14 PM.

[SkyLandOceAnna]

I think that was very interesting. I like your choice of words and the idea you placed in your work. Thank you!

[CeeCee]

Thanks for the kind words

[Flaredrick: the Sniper]

It's really good. I like how some lines made it sound poetic.

[CeeCee]

Thats probably becuase it is a poem XD

 

Thanks anyway though TFO!!!