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#1 Offline Phoenixfire

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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 06:55 PM

This is it! Same name and characters just a whole new story origin and more.
I give credit to bladetitan974 and all the contributors to RZMIK. I also give credit to the contributors of the UAKN kit(~the Ultimate Accessory Kit: Nerogasis~)

Beginnings of war:

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Episode 1


Episode 2


Episode 3

 

Episode 4

 

Episode 5


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Edited by Phoenixfire, Apr 25 2013 - 09:23 PM.

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#2 Offline Lime Paradox

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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 09:40 PM

ANYWAY the switch to RZMIK is kind of disappointing; the Chimoru was part of the charm for me

 

Please tell me you'll at least be using Chimoru expressions on RZMIK sprites or something

 

It's nice to see the same old explosions return though

 

But you're kind of supposed to actually make at least one comic before starting a topic, so you MIGHT want to do that before this gets closed =(


Edited by -Windrider-, Feb 20 2013 - 05:43 PM.

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#3 Offline Ayel Hyland

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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 12:58 PM

You misused my bullet sprite.

 

That's yours? I'm pretty sure I've seen that bullet in like every late-90s computer game that used pre-rendered models of bullets.

 

Anyways, I'm not going to try to attack your series, but let it be known that I think your attitude towards this is awful and won't help Phoenix get any better. Acting like you're better than someone else is never a good way to provide criticism; practically none of what you have said is anything close to constructive. And you may think you are better than Phoenix, but not everyone agrees with that sentiment, as already proven by my friends.

 

And sure, you say you've already tried the "nice" way with him before but now you're fed up with his "lack of quality." Guess what? People learn at different rates and just because you can master something in a certain amount of time doesn't mean Phoenix will. It will take him time to improve, and he needs to learn that on his own, not being told by someone that "I'M NOT LOOKING AT THIS UNTIL IT GETS BETTER."

 

Finally I hope you realize that some people hate Dark709's style so saying yours is better than his (and suggesting that Phoenix's should be as well) probably won't go a long way with some.



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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 05:52 PM

Episode 1 my first episode. Sorry it took so long i had school and this was rushed.


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#5 Offline Phoenixfire

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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 10:17 PM

Episode 2 Yay new episode!


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#6 Offline Flaredrick: Forgotten One

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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 10:52 PM

Looks good so far. The first episode was weird.


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#7 Offline Phoenixfire

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Posted Feb 20 2013 - 11:31 PM

It was meant to be wierd. :D

Edited by Phoenixfire, Feb 20 2013 - 11:39 PM.

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#8 Offline Flaredrick: Forgotten One

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Posted Feb 21 2013 - 06:11 PM

I see......well can't wait.


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#9 Offline Phoenixfire

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Posted Feb 22 2013 - 11:21 PM

Episode 3

 

Characters

 

New episode and a character sheet. Also I am doing devain art now because a problem with brickshelf.


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#10 Offline Phoenixfire

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Posted Mar 23 2013 - 07:51 PM

Episode 4 ! yay!


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#11 Offline Chath

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Posted Apr 17 2013 - 08:31 AM

It might help if you enlarge the rz sprites a bit.

 

It might just be me, but I'm having a little difficulty seeing what's going on.

 

I hope you enjoy making the rest of the story.


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Posted Apr 25 2013 - 09:23 PM

Episode 5 ! Sorry for the long delay. Who knew elementary school could be so hard :P

 

~edit~

Quality is messed up dunno why.


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