You misused my bullet sprite.
That's yours? I'm pretty sure I've seen that bullet in like every late-90s computer game that used pre-rendered models of bullets.
Anyways, I'm not going to try to attack your series, but let it be known that I think your attitude towards this is awful and won't help Phoenix get any better. Acting like you're better than someone else is never a good way to provide criticism; practically none of what you have said is anything close to constructive. And you may think you are better than Phoenix, but not everyone agrees with that sentiment, as already proven by my friends.
And sure, you say you've already tried the "nice" way with him before but now you're fed up with his "lack of quality." Guess what? People learn at different rates and just because you can master something in a certain amount of time doesn't mean Phoenix will. It will take him time to improve, and he needs to learn that on his own, not being told by someone that "I'M NOT LOOKING AT THIS UNTIL IT GETS BETTER."
Finally I hope you realize that some people hate Dark709's style so saying yours is better than his (and suggesting that Phoenix's should be as well) probably won't go a long way with some.