Okay here's the review topic to Chronicles of Masuko. Thanks!
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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 11:22 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Really captured the mystery/horror vibe with the coin.
One little thing, though it is extremely insignificant. I sort of twinged at the word "dwelt." I think I would have stuck to a simpler word; for some reason, dwelt felt a little bit forced.
But the rest of the diction easily made up for that. I mean, "good bad guy" ? Absolutely brilliant!
Posted Mar 30 2013 - 10:45 PM
Okay, so I haven't posted in a while. The next chapter will be up soon, most likely tomorrow, but if something weird happens and all Karzahni breaks loose... I have no idea.
EDIT: Okay, it's up!
EDIT: And now there's chapter 3.
EDIT: Chapter 4 is now up, too.
EDIT: Chapter 5 is up... and it's getting preeeeetty creepy.
EDIT: Man, haven't updated this one for a while. Chapter six is up. Also, I have a surprise that'll come for you later. Might lighten up the monochromatic look of the epic so far.
EDIT: Okay, now come read chapter 7 everybody!
EDIT: And now chapter 8. BTW if anybody aside from Flaredrick and I is actually reading this epic please leave a comment. While yes I am partly trying to just keep this topic alive I also want to update those who may be really reading this.
Edited by ToaOfAwesome, Jul 25 2013 - 03:53 PM.
Read my epic, The Chronicles of Masuko!
Or my comic, Mackron: The Vulture Warrior!
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