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[ToaOfAwesome]

Okay here's the review topic to Chronicles of Masuko. Thanks! 

 

Story: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=8772

[Chronicler of the Ages]

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Really captured the mystery/horror vibe with the coin.

 

One little thing, though it is extremely insignificant. I sort of twinged at the word "dwelt." I think I would have stuck to a simpler word; for some reason, dwelt felt a little bit forced.

 

But the rest of the diction easily made up for that. I mean, "good bad guy" ? Absolutely brilliant!

[ToaOfAwesome]

Okay, so I haven't posted in a while. The next chapter will be up soon, most likely tomorrow, but if something weird happens and all Karzahni breaks loose... I have no idea.

 

EDIT: Okay, it's up!

EDIT: And now there's chapter 3.

EDIT: Chapter 4 is now up, too.

EDIT: Chapter 5 is up... and it's getting preeeeetty creepy.

EDIT: Man, haven't updated this one for a while. Chapter six is up. Also, I have a surprise that'll come for you later. Might lighten up the monochromatic look of the epic so far.

Edited by ToaOfAwesome, May 12 2013 - 05:02 PM.