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[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

Whoa, where can I get one of those. That hallway must be really dark for the guard not to see him.

[Axilus Prime]

Seems like the plot might get even more multi layered with all these characters.

 

The special effects are good, I can't really make blazing lights that look that good.

 

And the background was awesome. Where'd you get that?

[Ptolemy]

Google is a wonderful place XD
And yeah, the plot will be pretty heavy for awhile.

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

I use Bing or mine, though they never come out large enough for my comic making ability.

[Ptolemy]

I'm working on a comic for tonight...and all I have to say about it is that one of our fine PGS's wont come out of this alive.

Edited by Ptolemy, May 09 2013 - 06:43 PM.

[Ptolemy]

New comic! 

Chapter 2 finale.

Sorry for the load time.

So, due to school and the time to find a new set off backgrounds, the next chapter wont be out for a week or so, maybe longer since I'll be in Colorado for a bit soon.

Until then, leave a post or two, throw around some theories, and get ready, since yet another PGS  will be dying here soon!

 

So until then, I'll be focusing on Deranged, since its much easier to make comics with that then this is, gotta keep the masses happy.

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

So, Axilus died here, by Helios cause he confronted him. And this is the past, so how did he come back to life? Right?

[Ptolemy]

No, it's the present. Loganto is just continuing his telling of events that led to the crash, while Axilus faces Helios.

[Kazi the Matoran]

I'm very confused.... The story seems interesting, but it's jumping all over the place too much, and I'm having great difficulty understanding things and keeping track of who is who. If you could help me out, that'd be great!

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

oOOOh. That makes perfect sense.

[Ptolemy]

I'm very confused.... The story seems interesting, but it's jumping all over the place too much, and I'm having great difficulty understanding things and keeping track of who is who. If you could help me out, that'd be great!

Sure can! I'm currently unable to do so, but since that was the chapter 2 end I'll make a summary comic, which will have quick bios on all the current characters and recap what's happened.

[Ptolemy]

Heres a recap PSA, that shows current characters and their relation to each other. Chapter 3 will start soon.

[Kazi the Matoran]

Everything makes sense now, thank you. I look forward to Chapter 3!

[Axilus Prime]

Holy slag, I died!

 

Or at least got seriously injured. I hope I survived though, that was a disappointing ending for me.

 

Still, the legends are getting more interesting...

 

And yeah, that chart clears things up. Good stuff.

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

I already can't wait for Chapter 3.

[Ptolemy]

With chapter 3 I intend on focusing more on Helios as a person(?). So there will be some pretty slow seeming parts, but they play an important part. I'm deciding though how far I should make him go, such as targeted executions, sabatages, etc., or straight up biocide.

(Ps, biocide is a real word)

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

Biological Genocide? Sounds interesting.