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Story Topic
Shining City is an epic involving Turaga Dume's past as a Toa, and how he became who he is today. This is the first in a line of stories.
Long ago, Dume was a Toa like any Turaga once was- and he was brash and hot-headed. However, when a second Avohkii was discovered, a teammate claimed the glory. Now he must fight his friend and become the wise protector he was destined to be.
Review below and stuff.
Edited by ninjamonkey3000, Mar 04 2013 - 02:34 PM.
