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#1 Offline cyan-king

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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 03:08 AM

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oi, the big HF villain guy is SwampTonic, and the Vortixx is Alex

 

i'll do topics for both on request.



#2 Offline Canis Lupus

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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 08:23 AM

This Revamp looks good. It has a ton of armor and has an ice shield on the back, from what I can tell. Alex, is way too skinny and tall. All of him, arms, legs and body should be thicker. As for SwampTonic, he seems like he has a mermaid body shape. Can't tell much about him from the picture.


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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 10:53 AM

Simple but effective. The purple actually looks good; reminds me of the first few HF comics in which Breez had purple instead of red. I feel like she could use a pair of daggers or something.
 

SwampTonic looks good. It has a ton of armor and has an ice shield on the back, from what I can tell. Alex, is way too skinny and tall. All of him, arms, legs and body should be thicker.

You know, you could actually comment on the MOC which this thread is about... :/


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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 11:10 AM

SwampTonic looks good. It has a ton of armor and has an ice shield on the back, from what I can tell. Alex, is way too skinny and tall. All of him, arms, legs and body should be thicker.

You know, you could actually comment on the MOC which this thread is about... :/

I didn't see that one picture with SwampTonic; I actually thought the Breez revamp was called that...  :P Going to edit my post right now. 


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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 11:44 AM

The revamp is pretty good, the SwampTonic one's legs look a bit small, and the Vortixx looks skinny. Don't get me wrong, you still did a good job.

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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 02:01 PM

This Revamp looks good. It has a ton of armor and has an ice shield on the back, from what I can tell. Alex, is way too skinny and tall. All of him, arms, legs and body should be thicker. As for SwampTonic, he seems like he has a mermaid body shape. Can't tell much about him from the picture.

 

lol, skinnyness was intentional, and vortixx being too tall? is that even a thing? oi, i'll make a topic for SwampTonic, like i did on eurobricks, so holdup.

 

The revamp is pretty good, the SwampTonic one's legs look a bit small, and the Vortixx looks skinny. Don't get me wrong, you still did a good job.

 

lol, SwampTonic has no legs, and Alex's skinnyness is intentional, i make all my male vortixx that thin.



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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 03:28 PM

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.


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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 03:59 PM

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.

Dude, that's just his style. If he thinks that Vortixx should be extremely skinny then who are we to stop him? XD


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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 04:03 PM

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.

 

true, true, but arent vortixx tall? i mean, look at roodaka.

 

and breez is human sized in comparison, so yeah, she's gonna look short compared to Alex



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Posted Mar 16 2013 - 05:00 PM

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.

 

true, true, but arent vortixx tall? i mean, look at roodaka.

 

and breez is human sized in comparison, so yeah, she's gonna look short compared to Alex

no, not saying that Vortixx aren't tall, it's just I know how tall Breeze is, the size that i'm used to, so I think "woaaah".


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 01:24 AM

 

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.

 

true, true, but arent vortixx tall? i mean, look at roodaka.

 

and breez is human sized in comparison, so yeah, she's gonna look short compared to Alex

no, not saying that Vortixx aren't tall, it's just I know how tall Breeze is, the size that i'm used to, so I think "woaaah".

lol, like toa sized?



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Posted Mar 18 2013 - 02:14 PM

 

 

dude, that is one tall vortixx. it seems a bit thin though, especially around the waist area. perhaps putting armor or something similar there would make it more stable.

 

true, true, but arent vortixx tall? i mean, look at roodaka.

 

and breez is human sized in comparison, so yeah, she's gonna look short compared to Alex

no, not saying that Vortixx aren't tall, it's just I know how tall Breeze is, the size that i'm used to, so I think "woaaah".

lol, like toa sized?

yeah, around that height.


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