Soaring Champion
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 03:49 PM
Behold! The dreaded Ice Vulture! It comes sweeping down from the skies of Bara Magna to hunt wandering Agori.
http://www.brickshel...VA/MOCS/558.jpg Click for photo. (Image was to large. 
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This is my first Avian MOC, The legs to me are kind of meh. The wings, in my opinion, are pretty good. The body, in my eyes, is incredibly built. It actually started out as an idea to build an ultimate rahkshi mech. But it turned out drastically different.
<Toa Zaknaver ^^^Click For My Epic: The Advendtures of Sandstorm^^^
(Credit to Strack for the sprite. Visit his rayg topic. It's really cool!)
If you can create and render 3D models for a video, please PM me! I also need voice actors.
Toa Team Alpha Assembly: Complete
Rivera (Topic Established), Nukovac (Topic Established), Sandstorm (Topic Locked), Metalicus (Revival Topic),
Xirax (Topic Established), Vohan (Topic Established), Planachar (Topic Established), Kirana (Topic Established),
Muhaki (Topic Established)
If anyone can help make sprites for a game that I'm making, please PM me! You could have a character in the game!
Lightning Voyager
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 03:57 PM
not that bad for your first avian moc. the wings are pretty cool-looking, and the body is solidly built. only thing I have a bit of trouble with is the feet. all birds have clawed feet instead of flat feet. other than that, it's pretty cool
you're done for (dead)
humans I hunt for
droppin' through the roof
never knocking on the front door
did you read it all???
Fluidic Master Nuva
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 04:03 PM
That's a pretty nice one. I like the wings and the body. The legs and feet look a bit awkward IMO, though.
Soaring Champion
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 05:35 PM
not that bad for your first avian moc. the wings are pretty cool-looking, and the body is solidly built. only thing I have a bit of trouble with is the feet. all birds have clawed feet instead of flat feet. other than that, it's pretty cool
Yeah, but I didn't figure out how to attach claws on this one in enough time.
That's a pretty nice one. I like the wings and the body. The legs and feet look a bit awkward IMO, though.
getting him to stand up is pretty hard.
<Toa Zaknaver ^^^Click For My Epic: The Advendtures of Sandstorm^^^
(Credit to Strack for the sprite. Visit his rayg topic. It's really cool!)
If you can create and render 3D models for a video, please PM me! I also need voice actors.
Toa Team Alpha Assembly: Complete
Rivera (Topic Established), Nukovac (Topic Established), Sandstorm (Topic Locked), Metalicus (Revival Topic),
Xirax (Topic Established), Vohan (Topic Established), Planachar (Topic Established), Kirana (Topic Established),
Muhaki (Topic Established)
If anyone can help make sprites for a game that I'm making, please PM me! You could have a character in the game!
Scavenger Va
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 07:26 PM
Decent MoC if I do say so myself.
Creative wing design, and it does look pretty darn cool. The torso is pretty solid, and the MoC overall looks pretty nice. The legs, as the others said, are pretty iffy, but you are going for an avian vibe. Birds do have pretty skinny legs.
Bit off-topic, but I am also on a YMCA swim team. Mind saying what state that is from? Don't have to answer, just curious.
Edited by Phantomesque, Mar 18 2013 - 07:27 PM.
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Lightning Voyager
Posted Mar 18 2013 - 07:53 PM
not that bad for your first avian moc. the wings are pretty cool-looking, and the body is solidly built. only thing I have a bit of trouble with is the feet. all birds have clawed feet instead of flat feet. other than that, it's pretty cool
Yeah, but I didn't figure out how to attach claws on this one in enough time.
you want to take your time when building MOCs. unless it's a contest and you have a deadline, you should take your time and figure out what works best for what you have. take a day, a week, 2 weeks, whatever. just make sure it pleases you in every way that it can.
you're done for (dead)
humans I hunt for
droppin' through the roof
never knocking on the front door
did you read it all???
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