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#1 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 04:04 PM

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This is something that I cobbled together for fun. I got the inspiration from Doctor Who Season 1 Episode 2: The End of the World spider robots. It features:

 

Autonomous walking mode: http://www.brickshel...VA/MOCS/008.jpg

Storage mode: http://www.brickshel...OCS/storage.jpg

Gun mode: http://www.brickshel...VA/MOCS/010.jpg

Mind Control mode: http://www.brickshel...VA/MOCS/009.jpg (Yes, that's me :) )

eye can be used for recording as well as espionage (laser).

Integrated bomb system

 

As always, I am open to any C&C! (Should I send this to BrickFair?)


Edited by Phantom Terror, Mar 21 2013 - 04:13 PM.

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#2 Offline Dual Matrix

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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 05:01 PM

I can see what you're going for here, only the disign looks rather very simple doesn't it?

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#3 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 05:09 PM

I can see what you're going for here, only the design looks rather very simple doesn't it?

I see what you did there. What goes around comes around.


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#4 Offline Takua Dragonstar7

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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 06:00 PM

I agree with Dual Matrix, it looks simple but I like how you made the legs so they're a flexible and stuff.



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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 07:27 PM

Nice! I love the spindly appearance, and the body is amazing yet simple. My only complaint is that the Mahri blades seem huge in comparison to the thin legs, I'd suggest using smaller tooth pieces instead.


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#6 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 21 2013 - 07:52 PM

The problem with that is that it won't support the weight of the body.


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Posted Mar 22 2013 - 06:21 AM

I disagree with everyone else. The legs don't really look so simple. Well sorta simple. No offense though.


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Posted Mar 22 2013 - 07:04 AM

Well i have to admit i like the moc. i mean it is simple but pretty good. I like how the eye flips down to do the gun bit. The legs are pretty neat.

i give it 3.5/5


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#9 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 22 2013 - 12:12 PM

I disagree with everyone else. The legs don't really look so simple. Well sorta simple. No offense though.

 

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Posted Mar 22 2013 - 03:40 PM

Small, simplistic, and carries that sense of menace present in most spiders. Despite the small size, it actually looks pretty good. Though I must agree with Dralcax--the blades on the legs look huge in comparison to the body.

 

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#11 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 25 2013 - 09:32 AM

Thanks! Even though the body is small and compact, it's heavier than the rest of the body. The legs with the tiny baraki teeth parts don't hold the weight of the body. So the mahri nui daggers were necessary.


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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 02:08 PM

cool moc!

 

 

 

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Posted Mar 27 2013 - 07:20 AM

Looks like loads of fun!  It's simple, but I'm glad you didn't try to add more, it would have detracted from the aesthetic you have going now.  Reminds me of Doris from Meet the Robinsons.  Maybe something in the technic holes in the last black part of the legs?  Trans-red or light bley studs would look good.


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#14 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Mar 27 2013 - 07:55 AM

Thanks! I never thought of that. I'll make sure to do that before I send it to BrickFair.

 

EDIT: What's light bley?


Edited by Phantom Terror, Mar 27 2013 - 02:12 PM.

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If you can create and render 3D models for a video, please PM me! I also need voice actors.
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