Posted Oct 17 2011 - 08:00 PM
Not hard to defeat, but difficult to fight? Sounds like they're a challenge, but once exhausted, are no longer a problem. Right? I ran across some similar issues throughout the chapter, but those issues aside, I really like this epic. The characters feel solid and have a good sense of who they are. I would have mentioned having a problem with the constant back and forth between the past and future scenes, but given this epic's title, I assume you're leading up through a series of similarities that will culminate in something big. Looking forward to more! -Ced
Strievers weren’t too hard to defeat – once defeated, they vanished into a poof of smoke – but they were difficult to fight.
Posted Oct 17 2011 - 08:51 PM