BobTheDoctor27

Entry name: Nelvik Main Picture: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Matoro1/WIP/2014/November2014/Nelvik/btd27_nelvik_05.jpg Gallery: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=550326 So this is Nelvik, a female Steltian lawyer creation of mine. I was experimenting with TECHNIC liftarms a while ago and this was the end result. She has a small role in my fanon storyline but I'm very fond of the creation itself. On a side-note, the photography conditions here are not as professional as I'd have liked them to be. With it being winter now the days are very short and Scotland isn't the sunniest place to live. My regular studio was too dark to make use of. This was literally the best I could do. Anyway, I hope that this creation is at least worth consideration.

Woo! I see chapter 6 has been updated, and with it I feel prompted to post some feedback. Yours is a strong story arc and I feel it deserves more discussion that it's getting at the moment. Having read the story in its earliest stage, Chapter 6 always struck me as an engaging installment with some masterful camerawork that I remain very fond of. The images do seem blurry and unfocused in some instances, which add to the illusory effect and there is a great contrast going on between the two varying perspectives. It was interesting to see Kalvost the Skakdi reappear and I loved how he seemed to be dozing when the red warrior chained him up. It made for quite a comical effect. I liked how he kicked Solunus aside but I noticed how you moved Solunus between the shots on my second reading. It's not very noticeable, but it looks a little awkward. Still, that's only a minor, personal grievance. Regardless, I don't think that there is much to detract from the overall concept. Your use of setting is, once again, very appropriate. I particularly liked how you used the backdrop behind Nuva in these pictures. From what I can gather, this chapter does draw into question which characters are really the bad guys. Nuva speaks of liberation and is polite towards Theran whereas Solunus speaks of sacrifice, infection and revenge. He seems like a dictatorial, secretive, rude, violent and bitter individual who has promiscuous intentions. Solunus really is developing into another complex character and appears to be abusing his power. As Range pointed out in Chapter 7, he always seems to be absent or late. Doesn't strike me as a great leader. He does well at all the public speaking but he keeps to himself a LOT and doesn't reveal much to his followers, which aroused my suspicions. His questionable depiction here consolidated my doubts. Another excellent installment, though it feels strange not to see the other Farside Toa in the crowd. It's a little isolating as there aren't really any links back to the original story in this chapter apart from Nuva, Gringat, Solace and Sycco, hardly any of which had much screentime before. Since their leader is missing it makes me wonder what happened to Range, Merall and Brorag in the gap in between the chapters. It also leaves the unanswered question of where's Range? Did the Forgotten Warrior just leave him unconscious? Did Merall and Brorag manage to save him but not Theran? Minor grievances, but they're the only real faults I can think of. As always, you fail to disappoint. Another great chapter and some amazing character development.