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The games Y and X both look cool, but to me, it just doesn't feel like Pokemon. I'll buy it anyways and give it a shot, but I'm mainly not sure about the graphics. But I'm open to change.

Haven't been able to spot the Easter Eggs yet, but still looking! The map is amazing by the way.

Really can't wait for all you're planning especially the movie! And yes, the water chunk was pretty funny!

Did you mean the "Reign of Six Kingdoms"?I would suggest truncating or modifying this, as this isn't really about the Vortixx, just one of them. To be about all of the Vortixx, needs to be expanded a little more. The bolded part is repetitive. I suggest changing the second one to "Vaana engineered weapons". Slightly more specific and less repetitive. Also, I would refer to the fact that Vaana is a Vortixx somewhere in here, so it is less of a jump for the reader to later grasp what you're getting at. This paragraph is a bit awkwardly constructed. When you switch which character is doing things, always make a new paragraph. For example, here:"Vaana inspected a group of new ones (travellers, scouts from other scattered clans, warriors, peacemakers) coming in through the rusted iron gate. The gate slammed across the side of the wall, causing a tumble of small boulders to roll onto the sandy ground. He watched Ceran welcome the newbies through our gates, and quickly pulled one aside. Vaana was unsure of why Ceran had pulled him aside, but knowing his leader's hostile motives, he decided to stay away.Ceran wasn't the smartest leader, and the whole clan knew it. But based on how often Ceran sharpened his blade, most knew to back off.Vortixx knew battle, they knew speed. They knew tactics. They knew how to win in war. But if you dare to look into the eyes of a Vortixx, you'll see."Also, I think you may be better off be using dashes (-) around "travellers, scouts from other scattered clans, warriors, peacemakers" instead of parentheses. () The first part of this is very good. Very empathetic. But I'm not quite sure how you got from "Vaana was an engineer" to "This is the Vortixx." You might want to clarify that.Thanks for the input. This was my first story, so I apologize if it was a little short and slightly sloppilly put together. :)I've decided to expand on the story slightly more, and make a conflict too.

Metru size for sure.

Probably always leg/arm joint pieces.

Whenua's dual-weapons. By far.

I used to use them as battleground when playing with them, or I'd just set them up for effect!

I ordered a bunch of the Matoran 2nd generation Kohlii sets about a year back, so probably those!

I would take Tahu Mata. Best set evah. Or Lewa Mata.

Brutaka and Axonn were always my favorites. I really liked the giant axe xD

I wished to have seen the 'final battle' Makuta, and I guess Tuyet.

I loved the Bohrok and the Barraki. I like it when Bionicle takes something completely new and original and makes it awesome. Basically, all the villains were like that; so I could sit here all day and give each one credit.

I personally liked all of the 2001 set masks. There was just such... originality to them that can't be missed.

I would not have liked this, for a few reasons. As I believe in respecting other's opinions, I'll (try) to answer in the most un-bias way! -Bionicle wasn't meant to be some sort of mystery where you can look back and say: "Oh my gerd... really?!?" There are a lot more plot-twists available to this.-The main goal of Bionicle was for Makuta to die and Mata-Nui to win. If Makuta was killed, and then Mata-Nui revealed that he was evil, won't this just make for a bad story ending? I mean, we all like a happy ending!