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  1. At first I thought it looked kind of bad, but then once I looked into it it seemed to get better. I mean, it has Morgan Freeman and Will Ferral in it. How bad can it be? (to answer that: bad. But I don't think it will be terrible)
  2. yep, did this on the computer TPBM's favorite character is gali
  3. Name: Shadow Destiny http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10088&do=findComment&comment=563801 Review topic: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10089 Number of chapters: 13 Thank you for your time, I will enjoy the feedback
  4. yeah, I'm planning on another book, thank you for the feedback!
  5. IC:kurkaiThe tunnels were very small, and with our submarine being on the larger side, more then once I had to rush to the back because of the breech alarm. We explored 3 underwater caves, with no result. I could see that cedoka was getting impatient as we entered the fourth tunnel. About a bio in, I almost triped on something. "Cedoka! You have to see this!" I yelled. I stumbled upon a mask of quick-travel. It was of the finest quality, most likely made in metu-nui. "I knew that he was a thief , but all the people I had talked to said that he stole from science and medical facilities, not from mask making foundries," I said "Ever since he snitched on another skakdi on zakaz, he worked for the hunters. I think he was exiled from there for being 'too rebellious', but I never thought he was a high end thief. I think we either stumbled upon his hideout, or a stash of a completely different type...."
  6. Ic: kurkaiI paused for a moment to answer cedoka's question. "Well, it appears that the tunnels are start at this passage here," I said, pointing to the map. "We have 19 hours of air. But I believe that he is hiding in an air pocket because no one has seen him since he bought the submarine. If there is an air pocket, it would most likly be down one of the least explored areas. This would also explain why ga-matoran haven't already found him. So lets start at doom viper's nest, and work our way up."
  7. IC:kurkai"Ok, ok I'll give them to you," the ga-matoran whimpered,"the map is in the back room, and take sub 27-a, she's my finest..." We took the sub and the map. We then set off into the unknown
  8. IC: KurkaiI watched as the matoran a face turned from a scared to a paniced look."ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT, I left one part out," turis exclaimed, "He said he wanted a map of the underwater tunnels under the koro, and said if a toa of plasma were to come by, to direct him away from the tunnels!" So he knew I was coming, I thought, interesting
  9. IC:Kurkai We traveled to the docks where I showed him the man who sold him the sub. "She's right over there, a Ga-Matoran named Turis, let's...... interrogate her..." I walked over. "Hello how may I help you?" she said, smiling. I responded with an upper cut. "Evidently, you didn't tell me everything that I needed to know last time," "Please, don't hurt me... I swear I told you everything I could!" she wimpered "I won't hurt you anymore, but my friend Cedoka will," I said, leaving Cedoka to ask her some more questions
  10. IC:kurkai I looked at cedoka and smiled, "Under one condition," I said, "I get first punch."
  11. IC: kurkai boy he's questioning.... I thought to myself. "Just us, I came here looking for people who may know about his location. As for the cave, It's just a hunch but as I've said before, I searched the entire ocean and didn't find him. I know he stole some money and 'rented' a submarine. So I believe that he used the sub to get to some sort of cave system below."
  12. IC:kurkai I shook the toa of crystal's hand firmly. "Hi Cedoka, I'm Kurkai, let's get started shall we?" I said. I still didn't know if I could fully trust him, but I would need help finding my turaga anyways. "Ok, so from accounts from my village and others, this guy is a Skakdi, black, and has impact vision, and a chainblade. I believe he is working for the hunters. I followed clues out to this island from the core, and then I heard that he took a custom submarine, and escaped into the sea. I looked for months out there and found nothing. So I believe that he is hiding in a submerged cave under this village."
  13. Name: Surara (1997) Species: Ba-matoran Gender:Male Appearance: Purple, with black mixed in. His mask is purple, with 2 black 'tears' running down to it's end. His tissue is also black Power suit: Damaged, it is blue and gold with flashing lights of both colors attached to the shoulders. It provides data on the main core of the ship, and an alarm will sound in the suit if it becomes too unstable. When the user says the word za, it activates an attack sequence that can fire a laser to destroy solid protodermis. When the users says mno, it powers down. When the user says yeai, it goes into defense mode, and a bubble shield pops up around the user. The shield will stay active for 3 minutes, or until it takes a mediocre amount of damage, such as a single energy blast. Abilities: none, other then being stable on his feet, and a slight atonement to gravity. personality: He is very cautious, very timid, and scared. He dislikes open fighting, but enjoys quite conversation. He enjoys quite things, but when it comes to combat, he will only fight if he absolutely has to. He is also very loyal, preferring to stay with a group rather then wandering alone. He is extremely smart, but has forgotten many things on the voyage.
  14. thank you, I haven't started work on it but I'm probably going to do a sequel
  15. The man seemed charismatic, and I knew I had to find justice for my kidnapped turaga. "Well, there is one person who you can kill.... I don't know him, but he kidnapped Turaga Lyra. I want him dead, in the most gruesome way possible..." there will be justice.. I thought. "If you can help me find him and kill him, I will give you a reward."
  16. hmm doom viper! lol just kidding I would probably want a dermis turtle, or a keetongu.
  17. Lol in 2009 my mom kicked my brother and I out of the house, so we played in the pool with ackar and vastus
  18. IC: Yuria it was apparent that no one noticed me. I left the toa of earth and the Fe-matoran to themselves, and began wandering. Pretty soon, I was lost. I tried to make it back to my drill but I couldn't find it. it seemed as if there was no way out. I decided to take a chance "Help!" I shouted, no response. "Help!" I shouted again, no response. "HELP!!!!!!" I shouted as loud as I could.... OoC: Yuria is open for interaction from anyone
  19. OOC: Guess it'll be me then! IC: Cedoka I step quietly into the bar. As I stand in the entryway for a couple seconds, I take a quick glance around the room. A couple of toa occupy the seats near the walls, and plenty of skakdi sit at a table not too far from where I stand. "Wow, lot's of people here today." I think to myself as I walk across the room. "At least there aren't too many people at the bar. It's about time I get a drink." One of the wall lightstones shines on my silver armor, causing it to glint brightly, drawing more attention to myself than I would care for. After passing a table full of skakdi, I sit down next to a Toa of Plasma at the bar. I look over at him nonchalantly as I sit down. He has a drink in his hand, and it is obvious that he is scanning the room for something. "Not very good at hiding it." I smirk to myself. The bartender walks over and looks at me questioningly. "I'll have what he's having." I say and I gesture towards to the Toa of Plasma. The plasma toa looks quickly at me but then turns away again. The bartender nods and he walks away to get my drink. I turn towards to the Toa of Plasma again and examine his orange and yellow armor. "Something about him intrigues me, but I can't quite put my finger on it..." "Here you go!" The bartender shouts as he hands me my drink. I sip it quietly for a couple more seconds until my curiosity gets the better of me and I turn towards the plasma stranger again. "What brings you to these parts?" I ask him. It was weird seeing another toa talk to me. I eyed him strangely. should I tell him? I thought. He could know where my turaga is. But then again he could be here to kill me... "What's it to you," i said
  20. IC: Kurkai I sat at the bar and ordered a drink. "Surprise me!" I said. I began to scan the bar for anyone that may know about my missing turaga. Maybe that skakdi know? Maybe that matoran? I decided to finish my drink before I went to ask anyone... OOC: Kurkai is open for interaction from anyone!
  21. Ic: Yuria Evidently, they still had not noticed me. I heard their conversation and was intriuged. "You know," I said, "for the right price, I can find this guard for you? Make all of your lives easier?" I waited for a reponse. If they say yes, I would be able to get some money to buy some food. If not, I would have to.... persuade them...
  22. probably the bordahk staves, and also the toa metru/hordika leg platings
  23. IC: Yuria I continued to walk through the caves, I spotted a building. I went inside in search of anyone that could tell me where I was. I entered a room and saw a toa of earth and a fe-matoran talking. "Where am I" I demanded they both looked shocked, evidently I had interrupted them
  24. IC: Kurkai I continued looking around the island, untill I found a bar. "There MUST be someone in there that knows about turaga ginka," I said. Then I entered the bar
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