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    A long, long time ago, there was a cube. A very shiny cube. One day, it gave life to far away planet. The beings it created were mechnaical and huge. The foremost and greatest of these was Metrutron Prime. He was so great and foremost-ly they named tha planet after him.

    Pretty snazy, eh?

    The called the amazing cube the AllShiny, since it was all powerful and very shiny. However, they found that the more the cube gave them, the less power it had (duh). So, they devised a way to replenish its engeries, via eating a sun via a Sun Eaterer (a massive machince capable of harnishing the energies of a star), which inturn was powered by the Sun Matrix, which containd its own awesome power.

    Awesome.

    This worked swell, and they pretty much agreed "Hey, we can do this on whatever star we choose, as long as there's no life on the surrounding planets, capiche?"

    And they agreed upon this.

    Except for one of them. His name, was Icarax. He thought that due to the amazing-ness of their race that they should have the choice of whatever star they wanted. On one planet they thought was life less, they almost activated the Sun Eaterer, although that planet contained life. Icarax hid the life from them, until they discovered it.

    Now, some of them agreed with Icarax, believing in their own superiority. Banding together under Icarax, they called themselves Deceptikuta.

    However, Metrutron Prime knew this was wrong. He took the Sun Matrix upon his person, keeping it away from Icarax and his forces. This angered Icarax, who led his Deceptikuta on the attack, killing and slaughtering their now ex-brothers, and exterminating whatever natural life on the planet they found.

    Metrutron Prime, being the mightiest of them, led some of his mighty friends on a counter attack, and they fought on the terrain before the Sun Eaterer. There, Icarax murdered his brothers, talking their energy one by one until Metrutron Prime himself faced Icarax. Newly over powered, Icarax beat down Metrutron Prime until Prime, using the last of his energies, threw Icarax back and forcibly transformed (transmoced as they call it) into a square shaped sarcophagus. They then brought Icarax's mini tomb back to their home planet and buried him there, hoping he would stay trapped forever, prophesing that "Icarax would remain imprisoned as long as a Prime lived."

    Metrutron Prime and the last of his brothers then formed a tomb out of their own bodies around the Sun Matrix, hoping to keep it safe forever from Icarax. The inhabitants of the planet, who called themselves "Matoran" built a pyramid around the Sun Eaterer, for no apparent reason.

    Life on Metrutron (the planet) continued peacefully, flourishing, until during the reign of High Lord Protectinator Makutatron and Lord Protectinator Matanui Prime, that a simple excavation unearthed Icarax's box. This box was then brought to Protectinator Norik Prime, friend of Matanui Prime.

    Icarax corrupeted Norik, who in turn (on orders from Icarax) gave Icarax's sarcophagus to Makutatron, who was normally a rather angry person, and became a raging sociopath who decided he needed the AllShiny for absolute power. And with this power, he could release Icarax (after killing the last of the Primes of course).

    Matanui Prime however, knew this was wrong, and stood against Makutatron. War happened, Metrutron got wrecked, AllShiny got launched into space, Makutatron followed it, both crash landed on Matoran planet (coincidently, the same planet where the Sun Matrix and Sun Eaterer were located), and Norik Prime, with amazing space bridge technology he got from Icarax, was shot down in his ship, which activated the space bridge stuff and landed him on the moon above the Matoran planet (bloody coincidences..)

    Matanui Prime and his Autotoabots then left Metrutron, searching the cosmos for the AllShiny. Strong energy signatures eventualyl led Deceptiktua forces to the planet, but the Autotoabots followed.

    Meanwhile, in Ko-Wahi on the Matoran planet, an explorer by the name of Captain Ithinkimbald found, frozen in the ice, a giant metal man.

    Meanwhile, in Po-Metru, the AllShiny was found by Po-Matoran, and they built the Canyon of UnEnding Whispers around it. The newly found giant robot (which was Makutatron), called "Project Frosty" by the Matoran (which the Matoran invovled called themselves Sector Six), brought him to the Canyon.

    Captain Ithinkimbald's glasses, which had been imprinted with the AllShiny's location, was kept by his family had passed down, until his great-great-great-great-great grandson Jaller Ithinkimbald tried selling them on bBay.

    What happend next is something I like to call Transonicle.

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  1. And you're gone too... sigh...

    1. MetaStriker

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      I second ibrow's comment...sigh...one less person to read my basically dead comedy.

  2. Basically what I was going to say, but then again, an epic/comedy can be quite a good read, with good action and some jokes that are really funny. So far so good I say!MTL
  3. Actually, I have read it, and started the pm, but just haven't finished it.Suppose I should do it, shouldn't I? :PMTL
  4. This single sentence gave me the greatest idea to use in the chapter.. At least! It's one word: ManiacToaLaco. GET IT RIGHT !Good chapter, guess I'm doing the next...MTL
  5. Well.. that's a creepy baby...Also, cooking, apparently.MTL
  6. Why thank you!He's got the powwaahhhhhhhh YEA!Also!TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 28 (technically 27.5)THE STAND OF THE AUTOTOABOTS (and how ManiacToaLaco wrote a chapter that was too long) The Wreckinators brutally killed the Deceptikuta they came across, often ganging up on a single drone, one of them grabbing on it (usually JackaL) as another (usually iBrow)sliced at it, or shot at it (usually done by LesoSpinn). They were in the middle of doing this when a Deceptikuta Gunship flew over, firing its weaponry. LesoSpinn was knocked to the ground and the drone escaped. The Gunship was then shot down, Blue Flame having saved the Wreckinators for once.Jodkra and Johnson also did their share, firing away at Deceptikuta, knocking them over or out right killing them, usually damaging them enough for Blue Flame or Vakama Maximus to finish it.Jaller continued to the Pillar, slipping by the fighting Autotoabots and Deceptikuta. A Fenrakk Walker nearly crushed Jaller, but the Wreckinators actually jumped onto it and started tearing it apart. Jaller saw the Pillar, lying on top of a pile of rubble. Jaller began climbing up on it, and he reached the top of the pile when he came face to face with Kongu."Of all the Matoran to run into..." Kongu said."Kongu, get out of the way, the Autotoabots need to destroy that Pillar." Jaller said. Kongu took out a gun and pointed it at Jaller."I can't let you do that, Jaller." Kongu said."Why?" Jaller asked."Well, because... uh, they won't let us live otherwise." Kongu said, "Ya, I'm sure that's it." He said again, although he didn't sound so sure, and he lowered his gun a bit. Jaller took the opening and jumped Kongu, knocking him over. The two tussled for a bit, trying to keep the gun away from the other. Kongu pushed Jaller back a bit and aimed the gun, but Jaller punched it out of the Le-Matoran's hand and it landed on the street below. Kongu kicked Jaller back, then went back up and grabbed the Pillar and angled it upright.The Pillar glowed and had electricity cover it, but nothing really happened."Guess it needs to be closer to the others or something.." Kongu said. He heard a noise behind him.Yes, aside from all the gun shots, explosions, robotic yelling and metal scraping against metal, the noise he heard was the one behind him. He spun around and saw Jaller back on the pile of rubble."I just saved the whole of the world! Do you think you're a he-" Kongu started to say as Jaller punched him square in the face, making Kongu fall back and hit the Pillar. He screamed as he was electrocuted, then his body limply fell off the rubble."Waited too long for that." Jaller said under his breath as he went forward to the Pillar. So close...Nihiscream and Thunderstrike landed nearby."That's MINE boy!" Nihiscream said, grabbing the Pillar. In his other hand he held Ramembolt's head, which he promptly threw at the Autotoabots, with intent to demoralize them. The result was LesoSpinn, standing on top of the Fenrakk Walker the Wreckinators had been attacking, shooting Thunderstrike's head right off. The blue Striker's body let off a few shots from his machine gun as it fell to the ground. Pohatubee grabbed Jaller and got him out of there as Tahkan Metra tackled Nihsicream, punching and pounding.Flufskiron flew down, transmoced and threw Tahkan off of Nihiscream."Escape with the Pillar!" Flufskiron said as he picked up Tahkan again and threw him back at the ground. Nihiscream transmoced and escaped with the pillar, just as Flufskiron ordered. Dakama Prime ran up, punching at Flufskiron, but without his trademark axe there was considerably less that Dakama could do to Flufskiron, who struck him back, then grabbed him and forced him to the ground. Placing one large foot on top of Dakama's upper body, Flufskiron was suddenly hit by a rocket from Johnson. Flufskiron fell to one knee, hurt, but then got back up."Phoenix, follow Nihiscream!" Kopatchet said to Phoenix Prime, who saw Nihiscream flying up to the top of the Coliseum. Phoenix teleported just as Kopatchet was shot by Flufskiron, who had turned his undamaged arm into a cannon. He had also revealed all the other weaponry on his body, shooting at the Autotoabots. Deceptikuta flocked to his side or started striking on weakened Autotoabots."Kill them all!" Flufskiron yelled. Suddenly he was shot and sent flying. Looking in the direction of his assilant, he saw that it had come from a Fenrakk Walker. "What?" Flufskiron said as the Fenrakk Walker blasted apart his troops. "Shoot 'em Braindox! Give 'em a taste of Wheeldax's powah!" Wheeldax yelled, his barely 2 foot tall body sitting on top of the Fenrakk Walker's head. Braindox was a bit behind, having hacked into the machine's wires. Braindox was making exploding noises with his mouth, even as the guns on the Walker's head made actual exploding noises with the Deceptikuta's bodies.Dakama got back to his feet and fired at Flufskiron, who had been already highly weakened. Dakama was grabbed by several Deceptikuta, whose grip he struggled out of, only in time to get punched in the face by Flufskiron."Die and become!" Flufskiron yelled, hitting Dakama's body. The Wreckinators opened fire on Flufskiron, forcing him back, just as a Deceptikuta Fenrakk Walker attacked them."Fire on that one Braindox!" Wheeldax commanded Braindox. Their Walker fired on the Deceptikuta one, distracting it for the Wreckinators. Tahuswipe wheeled under it, slicing at one of its knees as Jodkra fired Johnson at its head. JackaL took his cannon and shot at some exposed wiring, and then smoke began to come out of it. The Walker fell just as Tahuswipe escaped from underneath. "Beautiful kill." Tahuswipe said.Flufskiron had moved towards some of the less battle-capable Autotoabots, knocking Kopatchet into a building, then kicking Crashinator aside when the little wolf tried to help Kopatchet."Shoot him!" Hewkii yelled to this soldiers. They fired, and Flufskiron turned and killed 10 of them with his Cordak Launchers. Hewkii, Hafu, the New Guy, Kamen, Steve, Turaga Vakama and a few others ran for cover, the Deceptikuta coming to help Flufskiron proving to be too many for them. Taking his cannon arm, Flufskiron fired at the nearby Blue Flame, hitting him."Raagh!" Blue Flame said as he fell, his side badly damaged. He did a quick look over; he was not fit for combat any longer. He looked at Flufskiron, who now had several Deceptikuta crowded around him."LesoSpinn!" Blue Flame yelled to the green Wreckinator."Blue Flame!" LesoSpinn said, dodging a missile."Pass me some of your grenade lines!" Blue Flame said. LesoSpinn, almost gracefully, dodged another explosion and passed two of his grenade lines to Blue Flame. Blue Flame caught them both. "Thank you." Blue Flame said, "Now distract them!""iBrow! Jackal! Wreck 'em!" LesoSpinn yelled, throwing several of his remaining grenades at Flufskiron's group. A few Deceptikuta went down and several others stumbled. iBrow, JackaL and LesoSpinn fired their primary weapons at Flufskiron in an atempt to distract him. The red giant fired what he could as the Wreckinators fired on him. Blue Flame painfully transmoced and drove past the Deceptikuta, ending up behind Flufskiron. He transmoced again and climbed up his back."No!" LesoSpinn yelled when he realized what Blue Flame was going to do. LesoSpinn went to shoot Flufskiron in the neck when another Fenrakk Walker came out and attacked them. The Wreckinators began to destroy it, as fast as they could to try and help Blue Flame, who was right behind Flufskiron's head."Get off of me!" Flufskiron yelled, shaking, then reaching up with his right arm to pull him off."No." Blue Flame said as he wrapped the two grenade lines LesoSpinn had given him around Flufskiron's neck, then activated them. They all exploded, killing Blue Flame instantly.Flufskiron fell to his knees, all the armour and most of his componets removed from his entire upper body. The lower part of his right arm was gone and the only descernible feature on his head was his remaining optic. LesoSpinn turned around, dodging one of the Fenrakk Walker's legs, and fired, blowing apart Flufskiron's head and causing his body to fall forwards on a pile of rubble and Deceptikuta parts."Avenged." LesoSpinn said sternly. JackaL finished off the Fenrakk Walker, his eigth one that day.THE TOP OF THE COLISEUMSwiftinock was trying to shut down the other Pillars, to no avail. Sure, he wanted the Matoran dead, but transporting in Metrutron? That didn't even make sense!"Shut off! Shut off!" Swiftinock yelled, pressing buttons. At that moment Nihsicream flew up, transmoced and placed the Pillar near the edge where it had been before it had been shot down. The turret-combiners had transmoced into their individual forms and watched uncomfortably."What are you lookin-" Swiftinock started to say when Nihiscream placed it in its place. MEANWHILENorik drove onto a bridge, thinking himself free from the battle, when Matanui Prime jumped him, kneeing him right in the side of the truck (ouch). Norik transmoced and got his sword and shield out, swinging at Matanui then knocking him back with his shield. The two stared at each other for a moment, before Norik spoke: "I give you Metrutron, your home, and still you choose the Matoran?" Norik asked."I want Metrutron saved, more than you know, but I will not have it at their expense!" Matanui said.Norik brought his sword to the ready, "Then you shall have nothing!" he yelled as he jumped at Matanui. Matanui blocked the hit with Dakama's axe then swung with Phoenix's sword. Norik blocked it and swung low. Matanui jumped back, then Norik jumped up and brought his sword down. Matanui dodged it and sliced as Norik's leg, tripping him. Norik fell onto his face and Matanui brought Phoenix's sword down, slicing right by Norik's head. He held the axe above Norik's head, but hesitated. Norik got back up, using the motion to attack Matanui once more."Always the bravest of us," Norik said, stabbing at Matanui, "You could never make the hard decisions!"Matanui sidestepped the stab and brought Dakama's axe down. Norik just blocked it with his shield. "You launched the AllShiny into space and doomed our world!" Norik said, Matanui dodging a hit that would've removed his head."I did all I that I had too to keep Makutatron from the AllShiny!" Matanui said, getting a hit on Norik. Norik spun his sword and pushed Matanui back."You brought our war to this planet!" Norik said as he pressed the attack on Matanui, hitting him, "And now the Matoran must pay for you folly! Our planet WILL survive!" Norik said as a great blue beam of light shot forth from the top of the Coliseum and into the sky."Wha-?" Matanui Prime said as he watched it touch several Pillars lined up in the atmosphere. The Metrutronians fighting in the streets stopped and watched as in the sky a massive hole appeared, or at least something that looked like a hole."Nihiscream! You fool!" Swiftinock said, pointing his sword at Nihiscream. Phoenix Prime teleported in behind them, then stopped and watched.The hole as it turns out, was not hole. It was a planet. "Metrutron." Vakama Maximus said, watching in awe and terror. At the PEST hangar, all the Matoran inside had gotten onto roof to watch, Hickory having had to carry 12345 up in his wheelchair because there wasn't an elevator or anything.Norik watched Matanui looking up in terror, then with his sword sliced upward, removing one of the windows from Matanui's chest. Then he brought his sword back down and stabbed Matanui right where that window had been. Matanui cried out in pain as Norik removed his sword then smashed him with his shield so that he fell over.Norik Prime looked up as Metrutron slowly began to appear fully, its destroyed cities visible even from where they stood."Look at it Matanui, our once beautiful planet, now a desolate ruin. Using the resources of this planet and its people as slaves, we can repair our home." Norik said."Please, Norik, find another way.." Matanui pleaded, precious fluids leaking out of his chest wound."Possibly your final moments, and you waste them begging for the lives of these vermin?" Norik said, "Icarax was right about you being weak."Matanui was in shock, "Icarax? You...." Matanui began to say."Yes I was the first desciple of Icarax, and it was I who had him come in contact with Makutatron." Norik said."So this... this is all your doing!" Matanui said, looking up at Norik, optics full of hate."In a way, yes. However, that is behind us now with Icarax being dead, surely along with your Autotoabots. Now, onto the future. Metrutron lies before us, ready to be reborn," Norik said, looking down at Matanui, "You were my friend once, Matanui. I give you a choice: join me in the rebirth of our home and admit how wrong you were to fight, or die here with your pets." Matanui's optics were hate filled, to be sure, "After all these years of fighting, after all the innocent Metrutronians, our brothers, who have died following my lead against the tyranny of Makutatron, you think that I'd beg for my own life now that my time has come?," Matanui said, his voice unwavering and hard as steel, "No Norik, I will not." Norik tilted his head a bit, then sighed. "Very well Matanui. I'm afraid you'll be stuck with that decision," Norik said as he dropped his shield and raised his sword above his head, "for the rest of your life!" and he began to bring it down. Matanui looked him right in the optics, intent on spending his last moments in some defiance.Suddenly Norik stumbled, having been shot. He was shot again, falling to the side, then shot once more, dropping his sword."This is my planet!" Makutatron roared as he placed his shotgun away, picked Norik off the ground and threw him into the side the bridge, then punched him in the chest, ripping apart his armour."Makutatron! What are you doing! Stop!" Norik cried out. This only angered Makutatron more. Makutatron grabbed him from behind the neck and threw him back to ground, kicking at his upper body and beating on him."Makutatron." Matanui said, standing up and holding Phoenix's sword. Makutatron looked up at him. Matanui passed him Phoenix's sword. Makutatron growled menacingly and stabbed it though Norik, then pulled up, lifting him off the ground and throwing him back down. Norik grunted in pain.MEANWHILESwiftinock and Nihiscream turned around to find all the Turret-Combiners dead, Phoenix Prime standing above them, two of his swords in hand."Oh, you." Nihiscream said, turning a hand into a rocket launcher and firing. Phoenix teleported behind them, stabbing through Nihiscream, not killing him though, then swinging at Swiftinock, who blocked with his own sword. Phoenix pulled his sword out, hit Nihiscream again when he turned around, then teleported behind Swiftinock. Swiftinock however, expected this and had his sword ready, hitting Phoenix in one of the wings on his back."Almost, Autotoabot!" Swiftinock said as Nihiscream started hitting Phoenix with his saw. Phoenix swung and broke Nihiscream saw, kicked him back, then fought with Swiftinock, who proved to be a surprisingly good swords-bot.ON THE GROUNDJodkra aimed Johnson at the top of the Coliseum, ready to fire and take out a Pillar."Does that look good?" Johnson said, refering to their aim."Yes.." Jodkra responded. Johnson noticed that his targetmaster partner sounded uncertain."Then let's do this!" Johnson said."No!" Jodkra said at the last moment, moving Johnson down."What are you doing?!" Johnson asked, mad."I think that if we break a Pillar," Jodkra said, "That it would destroy Metrutron before it could get all the way through the Space Bridge.""So? None of you have lived there for millenia! It's a dead world! And if it makes it through, the gravity at least would destroy both planets!" Johnson said."It's our home!" Jodkra responded, "I can't just destroy it.." Anymore complaints they had (which was a lot, most likely) were drowned out by many explosions. A Deceptikuta ship, 170 feet long, had wedged itself above the street and was now firing on the Autotoabots and Matoran, now that most of the Deceptikuta who had been there were dead. The street was covered in holes, rubble, destroyed Gunships, Deceptikuta bodies and wrecked Fenrakk Walkers. "Move! Move!" Dakama Prime yelled, helped Tahkan up. Hewkii, Hafu, the New Guy, Kamen, Turaga Vakama, Steve, Jaller and the remaining soldiers ran with Pohatubee, Kopatchet, Vakama Maximus, Jodkra, Johnson, Tahuswipe, Galcee and the Wreckinators, who could do nothing against the huge ship above them."Run away!" Wheeldax said, he and Braindox jumping off of their Fenrakk Walker as the ship fired on it and destroyed it. Surprisngly, a few Matoran jets flew by and shot at the ship, distracting it long enough so the Autotoabots and Matoran below could escape.BACK ON TOP OF THE COLISEUMPhoenix was aware of Metrutron becoming ever more present in the sky. He was also aware that Swiftinock and Nihiscream were proving to be too much for him. Well, Swiftinock at least. He could expect Phoenix's teleportations. Nihiscream, not so much. Teleporting between them to try and surprise them, Phoenix found one of his swords getting knocked to the ground by Swiftinock. Phoenix teleported again. Swiftinock and Nihiscream turned in the direction which Swiftinock thought Phoenix Prime would go, which was beside the large computer they had built up there. What they found instead was Phoenix stabbing Swiftinock through the chest, pining him to the computer. Phoenix, as it turned out, had only teleported three feet to the right."Get him!" Swiftinock said as he tried to free himself from the sword."Afraid not!" Phoenix said as he grabbed Nihiscream's wrist when the Deceptikuta tried to stab at him with his sword, then elbowed him in the face, sending Nihiscream stepping back. Phoenix did a round-house kick to Nihiscream's face, making him fall on his back. NEARBYOmega Kaita, who had been in combat with the Deceptikuta ships, looked at Metrutron, then the Coliseum. Having no feelings towards Metrutron what-so-ever (he had only been built during the war) he raised his massive cannon arm, slightly damaged by the Drill Dragon, and fired.THE COLISEUMBy a stroke of luck, Phoenix had landed his roundhouse kick in such a way that he ended up facing the direction Omega was. Without even time for a one liner, he teleported out of there."Where'd he..." Nihiscream began to ask as he saw Omega's shot head towards them. Transmocing into his jet mode, he sped out of there as fast as he could.Swiftinock still struggled, trying to get off of the sword. "NNNIHHHIISSSCCRRREE-" Swiftinock yelled as Omega's shot hit the top part of the Coliseum, destroying it, the five control Pillars. the Sun Matrix and Swiftinock instantly. Rubble rained down onto the street, a large piece of the Coliseum landing on a Deceptikuta ship below and sending it down. The great blue beam of light that was being emitted from the top of the Coliseum suddenly stopped and retreated right into Metrutron. When the beam hit, there was a huge explosion on the planet, which then began to implode, pulling itself back into the Space Bridge that had brought it there. Freak zaps of power went down and struck most of the remaining Deceptikuta ships, dragging them up into Metrutron's demise. The Metrutronians, Agorians (just Johnson), Rahi and Matoran standing on the planet watched as Metrutron disapeared, the Space Bridge then collapsing in apon itself, removing all trace it had been there, dragging the most of the remainder of the Deceptikuta ships with it.The Autotoabots and Deceptikuta stopped fighting and just stared at the place their home had been, now lost forever. The remaining Deceptikuta capable of flight transmoced and flew off, among them Sleedat and Nihiscream. Many who remained who had chosen alternate modes transmoced into them and tried to find a place to hide, while those who didn't dropped their weapons and surrendered, their morale destroyed with Metrutron. A few Gunships and actual Deceptikuta ships flew off as well, leaving behind the other soldiers.THE BRIDGE"Noo.." Makutatron said as he dropped Norik Prime to ground,"Metrutron.. the AllShiny... the Sun Matrix.... it's all gone. There's nothing left to fight for." Makutatron walked forward, kicking Norik once more and taking his shotgun out, throwing Phoenix's sword to the ground.Matanui eyed Makutatron's shotgun suspisiously. He breifly noted Norik grabbing at something, but he focused on Maktuatron."We need a truce! All I want is to be back in charge..." Makutatron said, then pointing at Matanui, "Besides, who would you be without me, Prime?" "Time to find out." Prime answered. Except it wasn't Matanui Prime who answered. Norik Prime turned over, his rust cannon in hand, and fired at Makutatron, taking him by surprise. The shot hit him in the chest, then Norik shot again and hit just near the first shot. He shot once more and hit just below the first two. Makutatron clawed at the shots, snarled then aimed his shotgun at Norik and fired, hitting him in the shoulder. Norik cried out in pain as he dropped his gun and his arm fell limply to his side.Makutatron dropped his shotgun and fell to his knees, grabbing at his chest as it rusted apart, turning black, then orange, then falling away. He fell forward and hit the ground, his head coming off and rolling once, his optics dark.Matanui solemly looked at Makutatron's body as it crumbled away."It's done. Makutatron is dead." Norik said, looking at his unmoving arm. "Now Matanui, we must begin to rebuild."Matanui turned, angry. "You think that just killing Makutatron amends all you've done?" Matanui asked."Do not mourn the past." Norik said, "You must understand though, Matanui. All I ever wanted was the survival of our race. You must see why I had to betray you.""You didn't just betray me. You betrayed yourself," Matanui said, "You betrayed Metrutron.""No! Icarax said we could protect our home-" Norik said, shocked at the accuesation."Icarax? Norik, didn't you know? Icarax could only be killed by a Prime. I think when you were shot down on Metrutron, that was no accident." Matanui said, clutching at his chest wound."No, that's.." Norik began to say, realizing that there seemed to be some truth in Matanui's statement."In a way, you too are a victim of this war." Matanui said.Norik, with his still-usable arm, grabbed Phoenix's sword lying nearby. "And you shall be its last!" he said angirily, as he summoned the last of his strength and jumped at Matanui.In a split second, as Norik sailed through the air, sword in hand, Matanui reached back, got his gun out, brought it forward, and fired, hitting Norik square in the chest and blowing him back. Norik landed on the ground hard, dropping Phoenix Prime's sword. Matanui walked over and looked at him. Norik's chest armour had been completely removed and now his chest was a mess of burning, wrecked wires. Norik made a coughing sound, locked optics with Matanui for a second, then looked up at the sky where Metrutron had been. "I'm.." Norik said, his voice weak. "Sorry." Then his optics dimmed, and Norik Prime was dead."So am I," Matanui Prime said, "My friend." and with that he raised up, disengaged the gun from his hand, and dropped it behind him.The war of the Metrutronians was over.END OF CHAPTER Fun commentary: Whoa! That's alot of stuff that happened there! Well, first things first: alot of characters died there! The total named dead are Flectadok, Dreadinock, Ramstrike, Ramenbolt, Rumdox, Hydraxhide, Shockvak, Barritax, Kongu,Thunderstrike, Blue Flame, Flufskiron, Swiftinock, Makutatron and Norik Prime. That's 3 dead Autotoabots. Also probably close to 200 DecI felt said about killing off Hydraxhide, but at least he got to shoot a lot first. Originally, Jodkra was going to sacrifice himself to kill Flufskiron, but Johnson's character works so much better with Jodkra that I couldn't do it, so I was going to kill LesoSpinn, but the Wreckinators were best as a trio. So Blue Flame got the short stick. Speaking of the Wreckinators, they may have come across as a bit vicious: that's good, because that's how I intended it. They do not show mercy. And iBrow did feel bad about Ramenbolt's death, but he's seen more Autotoabots die more painful deaths than that, and there were Deceptikuta to kill. And Norik may have truly felt sorry at the end, but if he had lived he would've still thought himself in the right. And Makutatron... well, do you think that he'd have gone for peace? And Nihiscream and Sleedat did escape, as well as with many Deceptikuta, so SEQUEL HOOK! Also, there are still Deceptikuta in the city, which will be resolved next chapter. And then Transonicle 3 will be done! It took five years to get to this point! Wow! And there might be a forth one even! MTL
  7. 'Allo!This was orignally two chapters, but I felt it worked better as one (and that you all wouldn't want to wait another 2 weeks for the next part of the battle. As such, this chapter is HUGE! just over 12000 words long: the longest chapter of all three Transonicles.Also, this is not the final chapter! There will be one more after it! An epilogue of sorts!This chapter also isn't that funny, but I did some things in that should at least make you chuckle a bit. Like three little parts. The rest, ACTION!EDIT: Chapter was too long, I have to upload it in two parts...TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 27DARK OF THE MOONTHE TERRAGATOR, FLYING ABOVE METRU-NUIDreadinock stood in the Terragator's control room, looking at the statuses of his ship. The weapon systems, due to the imcompetence of his subordinates, had overheated themselves, but now atleast they were getting back on track. Damage levels were minimal, so that was good at least. Most of the Matoran jets appeared to have been shot down, or had moved to different parts of the battle field. Omega Kaita would most likely have been killed by the fleet now, so Dreadinock didn't worry about him.In fact, the only thing he was worrying about truly was the "fleet" that Norik Prime was going to transport in. To Dreadinock's knowledge (which was a lot, considering he was leader of the Deceptikuta fleet) there was no other fleets. Maybe a few ships here and there, but most of the ships had arrived after Icarax's failed revenge and Nihiscream's failed atempt to take control.The amount of Deceptikuta ships that had been brought down was larger than it should've been, but they could be rebuilt after the battle."Dreadinock, three Gunships flying by." Flectadok said."So? They're probably chasing a Matoran jet. Don't waste my time Flectadok." Dreadinock said. He was seriously considering getting rid of Flectadok.Flectadok looked a bit sad. "Sorry. Do you want us to prepare a shuttle for you? To escape?" he asked.Dreadinock nearly killed Flectadok right there. "Escape? You overestimate our foes. The only thing we need to worry about is Omega Kaita, and not for much longer!" Dreadinock said angirily."Fine. Should we close the blast doors at least?" Flectadok said. The blast doors usually covered the entrance between the control room and the little landing strip outside it. They had been opened so repairs to the guns on the landing strip could be made easier."Don't bother. The guns will be back online soon enough." Dreadinock said. He looked out the opening to the landing strip. He saw the three Gunships Flectadok had mentioned. He was about to turn away when he noticed that the canopy on the lead Gunship's cockpit had been broken open. Inside sat a black and silver Metrutronian, with a few purple parts and a large scar on its chest.Well, the first thought that went through Dreadinock mind was that he had really good eye sight. The second was "CLOSE THE BLAST DOORS!", which he also yelled. He had ran back to his normal spot when the three Gunships began to shoot, hitting the blast doors as they came out of the wall and destroying them. The lead gunship actually flew into the opening, its pilot jumping out as the ship skidded through the control room, crushing one of the drones stationed there. The second Gunship did the same, this time a black and white Metrutronian with one arm a different colour and type than the rest of it jumping out. The third Gunship followed suit, its pilot green with little rocket pods on its shoulders, several strands of smoke (and normal) grenades hanging from him and missing an optic."LesoSpinn! Blind 'em!" iBrow yelled as he fired his shotgun and brought down a Deceptikuta."Much obliged!" LesoSpinn yelled as he first threw his smoke grenades, covering the room in smoke, then his frag grenades, blowing apart several Deceptikuta and many computers."Find Dreadinock an' kill 'im!" JackaL yelled, precisely blowing apart Deceptikuta with his super-powered cannon arm."THIS!" iBrow yelled, firing his shotgun once more, killing a Deceptikuta. "IS!" he yelled as he put his shotgun away and took out his axe and hammer. "FOR!" he yelled as he took said axe and hammer and began axeing and hammering away at the first Deceptikuta he came across. "MY!" he yelled as he jumped off of that Deceptikuta, stuck his axe into the head of another, then hit the back of his axe with his hammer, sending it all the way through the Deceptikuta's head. "SSSHHHIIPPP!!!" he yelled as he removed his weapons, struck a Deceptikuta in the lower torso with his hammer, then removed its head with his axe.JackaL and LesoSpinn stood side-by-side, firing with their cannon and rifle, respectively. They had long ago programmed their optics to see through the smoke created by LesoSpinn's grenades, so they expertly took out Deceptikuta as they tried to flee. With all the smoke created by the fires, explosions and the crashed Gunships, LesoSpinn's smoke grenades were just overkill.Which was the Wreckinator's favourite word.iBrow hacked and hammered his way through the Deceptikuta, the simple drones and pilots no match for his millenia of combat expertise. He came across Flectadok, trapped in his chair because of rubble. Flectadok attempted to free himself, but a good swing from iBrow's hammer to Flectadok's forehead ended the Deceptikuta's struggles."Dreadinock!" iBrow yelled, "You better not be dead yet!""Behind ya!" JackaL yelled. iBrow moved in time to just dodge Dreadinock's sword. iBrow turnd back to face Dreadinock, his axe and hammer at the ready.And it was at that moment that iBrow realized just how huge Dreadinock was. iBrow was around 23 feet tall. Dreadinock was twice that.And iBrow wasn't worried at all."You will not leave this ship alive!" Dreadinock said, moving to stab at him with his sword, but stopped when JackaL fired his cannon and hit Dreadinock in the leg, blowing it apart. Dreadinock fell."How'd ya miss the rest of him? Usually you'd hit 'em in the head." LesoSpinn asked JackaL."Quit yer belly-achin', I'm sure iBrow wants a one-liner or somethin'." JackaL said.iBrow buried his axe into Dreadinock's shoulder, then put his hammer away and took out one of his knives."Tell me Dreadinock, do you know what my ship was called?" iBrow asked Dreadinock."It matters not. It's scrap now." Dreadinock responded, his voice filled with rage, "As this insect-hive of a planet will be.""Wrong answer." iBrow said as he forced his knife through Dreadinock's neck, then continued with his entire arm, removing the Deceptikuta captain's head. Putting his axe back on his back and his knife back on his utility belt, and picked up Dreadinock's head."What looks important that I can stuff this down?" iBrow asked JackaL and LesoSpinn. The other two Wreckinators did a quick search before JackaL found something. Breaking off the grate that covered it, JackaL looked down a shaft that led to a whole bunch of gears and things."Stuff it down 'ere." JackaL said. iBrow walked over and threw Dreadinock's head down it. The Terragator suddenly made a groaning noise."Ooh I think we broke somethin'!" LesoSpinn said."Break anything that looks important! Send this ship down!" iBrow commanded. The Wreckinators ran to the controls and ripped, tore and shot at them. The Terragator suddenly moved, it's front end angleing down.The Wreckinators ran back out to the landing strip as pieces of Deceptikuta, Gunship and computers slid past. They saw that the Terragator was falling into a canal, the end the were standing on leading the fall."Well Wreckinators, it was glorious." iBrow said."A real pleasure it was." LesoSpinn said."I hope they kill Norik." JackaL said. The three Wreckinators fist bumped as they prepared for the end.Suddenly, a silver, weapon covered Ussanui flew by, transmoced and Tahkan Metra appeared before them, Phoenix Prime teleporting beside him."Need a ride?" Phoenix asked them."For once ya show up!" JackaL said. Phoenix transmoced into his phoenix mode, and LesoSpinn and JackaL climbed onto him. Tahkan Metra transmoced into his Ussanui mode and iBrow got onto him. The two took off, flying away from the crashing Terragator. The ship landed in the canal, which was only like 20 feet deep, and crushed its front end. The remaining 280 feet of the Terragator fell back into the canal, breaking apart and smoke bellowing from it."Again, I was hoping it would explode." Tahkan Metra said."It's burnin' a bit." iBrow said.Nearby three F-22s appeared nearby. One had Metrutronian tatoos on it."Tahkan! It's Nihiscream!" Phoenix yelled."I see them." Tahkan replied."Strikers, shoot them down!" Nihiscream said to Ramstrike and Thunderstrike. None of them knew that Skystrike had been killed last chapter, by Wipeout none-the-less."Get out of here Phoenix, I can evade them!" Tahkan said to Phoenix."But, well, right, fine." Phoenix said, about to protest, but then thinking of JackaL and LesoSpinn on his back. He teleported the three of them out of there while Tahkan sped up.Missiles went past them, hitting buildings."What if we get the atenttion of Gunships?" iBrow asked him, considering how much worse this situation could get."What if?" Tahkan replied, "How about you try and shoot th-ARRGHH!" Tahkan said as missile exploded inches from them, damaging Tahkan. Nihiscream, Ramstrike and Thundstrike got closer, their shots getting more accurate."Get ready to bail!" Tahkan said as he began to descend, smoke coming from his engines.Just as Nihiscream prepared for the fatal shot, Ramstrike was shot down. He transmoced, but was shot several more times. He plummeted into a building and promptly exploded."What the?" Nihiscream said as he was shot too. He transmoced sooner though, and fired back at whatever was hitting him. Thunderstrike transmoced aswell and fired in the direction of the mystery assilant. Their missiles struck something invisible, which then became visible, revealing a stealth bomber, which transmoced into Ramembolt."RUN TAHKAN!" Ramembolt yelled as he activated the jets on his back and tackled Nihiscream in mid-air. The two tumbled out of the sky."Ramenbolt?" iBrow said. At that moment Thunderstrike turned and shot at Tahkan again. Tahkan, already damaged and losing altitude, sped to the ground."Bail!" Tahkan said. iBrow jumped off and Tahkan transmoced, hit the pavement and skidded. Painfully, he got back up. "We need to help Ramembolt." Tahkan said, doing a brief look-over of his damage."It's just Nihiscream. He can barely fight one-on-one and will probably run away." iBrow said, scanning for Deceptikuta."Against you maybe, but Ramembolt can't fight at all!" Tahkan said. He atempted to transmoc, but he just fell to the ground pitifully. He transmoced back into robot mode. "I can't.. I can't fly. My engines are shot." he said.At that moment Phoenix Prime teleported in with JackaL and LesoSpinn.MEANWHILENihiscream and Ramembolt landed on top of a building, then continued rolling right off of it. They fell to the bottom of an alleyway, then onto a road. Ramembolt rolled off of Nihiscream, then turned and punched Nihiscream in the head. Nihiscream stumbled back a bit, then dodged Ramembolt's next punch."You'd do well to run while you still can, Autotoabot." Nihiscream said, turning one hand into his missile launcher.Ramembolt jumped at Nihiscream again, "There's no use running today!" he said as the two rolled. Ramembolt ended up on the other side of Nihiscream, who got back up and fired his missiles."How true." Nihiscream said. Ramembolt clutched at his shoulder and all its revealed wires, then turned invisible. If he had had eyebrows, Nihiscream would've raised them."A neat trick, Autotoabot," Nihiscream said, turning his other hand into his saw as he turned his missile launcher back into his hand. He spun several times, and struck something behind him. Ramembolt turned visible once more, cluctching at his other shoulder which had gotten the saw to it."Too bad it's no use here." Nihiscream said as he turned his other hand into a sword and stabbed through Ramembolt's back. Pulling it out, he turned that arm back into his hand and grabbed the top of Ramembolt's head. With his saw, he severed the poor Autotoabot's head and ended his life. Ramembolt's bulky body dropped to the ground, while Nihiscream examined his head."Truly the universe favours those who persist." Nihiscream said.MEANWHILEHafu, Kamen, Steve, Nuhrii, Takua (carrying President Dume), Turaga Vakama, Jaller's parents and 4 PEST soliders (carrying Wipeout between three of them)made their way through alleys, heading towards, well, something."Stop!" Wipeout said. The group stopped."What?" Hafu asked."What's your plan for when we get attacked by a Deceptikuta?" Wipeout said, "While carrying around me, the knocked out President and two old people? And Takua?""Well, that is a bit of a problem.." Hafu said."Drop me, the President, Jaller's parents and maybe Takua in the bottom of some building. We'll be safe there until.." Wipeout said."Until the end of the battle?" Takua asked."At least we won't slow you down that way. You'll kill more Deceptikuta without us burdening you." Wipeout said.Hafu looked to Kamen and Turaga Vakama for some sort of input, but Kamen averted his gaze and Turaga Vakama offered none."Wipeout, you're right but.." Hafu said, "I just don't like leaving you guys behind like this.""Just do it. No need for us to slow you down." Wipeout said."Don't we get a say in this?" Jaller's mom asked."You'll be safer with Wipeout." Kamen said."Alright. Find a building they can stay in!" Hafu said.ELSEWHEREThe Wreckinators, Tahkan Metra and Phoenix Prime found what remained of Ramembolt's body. His head was gone and his chest had a hole in it. Nihiscream was nowhere in sight."Poor kid." iBrow said. He turned back in the direction they had come from."Is that all you can say, Wreckinator? If he hadn't intervened, we would've been blown apart up there!" Tahkan said angirily to iBrow."No matter what I say here, Metra," iBrow said, refering to Tahkan by his rank, "he'll still be dead. He sacrificed himself for us, and I appreciate that, but standing here and mourning will do no good for him."Phoenix put his hand on Tahkan's shoulder. "He's right. We should move." Phoenix said.Tahkan shrugged his shoulders. "Fine. I can't fly now, so I'll stay with the Wreckinators. What are you going to do?" Tahkan asked Phoenix. Before Phoenix could answer, a Gunship flying above saw them and began to fire."I'll take it out while you guys escape!" Phoenix said as he teleported, disappearing in a ball of flame and reappearing above the Gunship. Taking one of his swords out, he brought it down through the Gunship's canopy, stabbing the pilot."Let's move then!" iBrow said as led them away. With one last look at Ramenbolt's body, Tahkan followed the Wreckinators away.ESLEWHEREBraindox and Wheeldax snuck across a street, going around piles of rubble bigger than them."Well, they gotta be around here somewhere..." Wheeldax said."They ain't." Braindox said."Well I can see that!" Wheeldax snapped, turning around and slapping Braindox."Oh." Braindox said, "We're looking for Autotoabots, right?""Yes! Why would you even need to ask that you stupid moron?" Wheeldax said."Because that." Braindox said, pointing ahead. Wheeldax turned around and saw a Fenrakk Walker's gun-covered head aimed at them."Well sonnuva Piraka." Wheeldax said, putting his hands up.A BUILDINGWipeout watched over Jaller's parents, Takua and President Dume, who was beginning to wake up."Where... where am I?" President Dume asked."Tell him we're in a giant sandwich!" Takua said."No!" Jaller's mom said, "Mr. President, we're in Metru-Nui.. it's sorta..""Just tell him everything's fine." Wipeout said."Ah! A talking robot!" President Dume said."If I screamed and said 'Ah a talking pile of meat!' would that offend you?" Wipeout said, "I'm here to protect you guys until... something.""He's one of the gooder ones." Takua said, who then looked up, "Hey, an airvent. Neato.""Neato?" Jaller's dad said.At that moment the airvent was broken down, and Rumdox jumped out, less than a foot tall."Die before the glory of the Decep-" he yelled just as Wipeout turned his arm into a machine gun and killed the last of Soundprah's Deceptikuta minions."That was annoying." Wipeout said."Great scott! That was amazing!" President Dume said."Ohkay." Wipeout responded, mildly amused by President Dume's amazement.ELSEWHEREHewkii, the New Guy and the rest of their team ran down a street near the canals. They had seen the Terragator fall, and that helped with morale a lot.They ran until they got to a bridge that had been raised."I didn't even know we had bridges here." The New Guy said."Watch yourselves," Hewkii said, looking around."We got movement behind us!" a PEST soldier said. The entire team, 10 in total, spun around with their guns aimed."Hafu?" Hewkii said, bewildered."The Secretary of Defense?" The New Guy said, bewildered as well."Hewkii! The New Guy!" Hafu said. Following him was Kamen, Steve, Nuhrii, Turaga Vakama (the Secretary of Defense) and the remaining 4 PEST soldiers with them. They had dropped of Wipeout, Jaller's parents, President Dume and Takua off in a building, which happened a few minutes ago incase you weren't really paying atenttion and just skimming through this.Hewkii fist bumped Hafu. "Where's Jaller? Didn't he go with you?" Hewkii asked him.Hafu shrugged his shoulders. "He went missing when we got attacked by a big Deceptikuta. Hahli with him. We did rescue his parents though, and the President." Hafu said."The President was running around down here?" the New Guy asked."He wasn't running, I was carrying him. I carried him out of the Coliseum before the Deceptikuta could force him to shut-down Metru-Nui's military. Then I met up with Hafu and his men." Turaga Vakama said, his awesome shotgun-cane in hand."Where is he now?" Hewkii asked."He's safe in a building with Jaller's parents, Takua and Wipeout." Hafu said."Takua? Who?" The New Guy asked."One of Jaller's friends. He was helping us, but he wasn't very helpful, really." Steve said."Why is Wipeout staying with them? He could sure be of help with us." one of soldiers who showed up with Hewkii asked."Deceptikuta broke his leg off. He didn't want to burden us carrying him around." Hafu said."He was like 500 pounds! I nearly put my back out!" one of the soldiers who had carried Wipeout said."Huh." Hewkii said."There's something in the water!" Kamen yelled. The assembled Matoran (18 in total) and Turaga (just one of these) went to the edge of the canal and looked down a flight of stairs. Several Matoran wearing under-water breathing apparatuses (also known as "oxygen tanks") came up, each holding guns. There were 15 of them at least.One of them took his apparatus off. "Morning'!" he said."It's more around 1 O'clock." Nuhrii said."Oh." the Matoran who had removed his apparatus said. "We'll, we're some Navy SEALS stand in. We're here to help.""Awesome!" Hafu said. The amount of Matoran now ready to battle was 33. 34 if you counted Turaga Vakama, but why would you do that?"Should I introduce all my men here?" the leader of the Navy SEALS stand in asked."No." Hewkii said."Okay." the Matoran responded, a bit saddened."Alright, the Coliseum is that way," Hewkii said, pointing across the canal, "We need to get that way."THE PEST HANGAR"Are you seeing this?" Nuparu asked 12345."I'm seeing this. I think they want across that bridge." 12345 said, "Hickory, tut es weh! Schnell!""Do you even know vhat dat means?" Hickory said, "Because I don't zhink you do.""Oh, whatever. Get that bridge down now for them!" 12345 said."Vell, let's zee," Hickory said, typing furiously away at the computer, "Ve have an achtzehn digit zecurity code to it, vhich zhoult be hard-""Got it!" Nuparu said. There was a cheer throughout the room."But, but, vhat!?" Hickory said, flabbergasted."Good work, Nuparu!" Turaga Nokama said, giving him a pat on the head.BACK IN THE CITYThe Matoran watched as the bridge came down, opening their path."Deceptikuta?" The New Guy asked.Hewkii looked around and saw a traffic camera looking at them. He gave it a thumbs up. "Let's move! Move!" Hewkii said as he led the way.They ran across the bridge and quickly made it to the cover of the buildings on the opposite side."I can't beleive we haven't been attacked yet down here." The New Guy said."Come on!" Hewkii said, leading the way again. They saw a few bodies of some Deceptikuta drones lying infront of a building."Autotoabots?" Hafu asked. They ran up and found several normal, run of the mill Matoran military soliders."Yea baby! Now we're talkin'!" Hafu said happily."Come with us!" Hewkii said. The 10 or so Matoran soldiers followed the larger group, the total number now in the 40s."Deceptikuta up ahead!" one of the soldiers said. It was true, they could see several Deceptikuta gathering in front of a building."Snipers, get in that building. Anyone who still has their parachute, with me. Rest of you, get on the ground floor and wait for the eyes to get taken out!" Hewkii commanded. They did as such.One Matoran going on the ground floor looked to Matoran beside him. "Does he mean the eyes on the Deceptikuta? We have to wait for them to shoot them out?""I-I-I guh-guess so." the other Matoran said. Hafu led the remainder of his team and several of the Navy SEALS stand ins into the building."Aim for the eyes, you'll screw 'em up." Hafu said."Because they won't be able to see?" one of the soldiers asked."Well, yes, that too. But I was thinking that it would scramble their circuits or something." Hafu said."Aren't they called optics?" another Matoran asked."Optics, eyes, same thing." Hafu said."They call 'em optics, we call 'em eyes." another Matoran said."Oooh ohkay." a different Matoran said.Hewkii and the parachuters made their way to the eigth floor. "Get ready! Don't jump until the snipers have shot!" Hewkii said.Below, the Deceptikuta appeared to be arguing. Barritax was pointing fingers for the Autotoabot prisoners' escape."If YOU had been doing your job and had been on watch, those Autotoabots would be dead, and Soundprah wouldn't be!" Barritax said to a Deceptikuta."If you had all just killed the Autotoabots instead of standing there talking to them, they'd be dead!" The Deceptikuta said."Don't blame this on me! It's YOUR fault!" Barritax said. 6 Deceptikuta watched the confrontation, not watching for Matoran.Then Shockvak walked by."I have heard of your failure, Barritax. The Autotoabots escaped you and Flufskiron. Where are they?" Shockvak asked, looking down on the much shorter Deceptikuta."Who? The Autotoabots or Flufskiron?" Barritax said, then adding, "And it was his fault!" pointing to the Deceptikuta behind him."Preferably both." Shockvak said."I don't know!" Barritax said, turning back to the other Deceptikuta for a second. Flufskiron flew by, transmoced and landed beside Shockvak."Shockvak! Where have yo-" Flufskiron began to say."Now!" Hafu said. The snipers fired. Flufskiron was hit in the left optic, destroying it. Barritax had one of his optics blown apart, and most of the Deceptikuta standing there lost an optic or two. Shockvak, with his one optic, somehow made it through that whole shootout, just getting a shot right beside it."Now!" Hewkii said, launching himself out of the window, his team following. They pulled their parachutes and glided silently and softly downwards, their guns at the ready."What? What?" a Deceptikuta yelled as it took its gun out and just started shooting. Shockvak aimed his cannon arm at the building in the direction the shots came from and fired. Hafu cringed as the Matoran several feet from him were blown to pieces by Shockvak's shot.Shockvak was preparing for another shot when he got a parachute to the face. A Matoran soldier missed the ground by that much."Pants!" The Matoran yelled."What is this?" Shockvak said as he reached up to get the Matoran's parachute off of his face. The Matoran, who was behind Shockvak's head, had a bad feeling about this situation, but he decided to make the most of it. Taking his gun, he fired into the back of Shockvak's head. The shots went through and came out just below his optic."Arrghh!!" Shockvak said, grabbing the Matoran in his hand and throwing him into a building. The rest of the soldiers, meanwhile, had landed and had begun firing away at the unprepared Deceptikuta. The soldiers who had been hiding on the ground floor snuck out, a few of which with Nujack's boom-sticks and other PEST weapons, found vulnerable places on the Deceptikuta like ankles, stuffed them in, and let 'em blow. The Deceptikuta fell, and extended firing into their heads finished them.Kamen loaded his rocket launcher with his last rocket, and aimed it at the giant, bright red body of Flufskiron."Don't miss, c'mon, don't miss," Kamen said, and fired. Flufskiron was stomping furiously, trying to step on a Matoran, when he was hit square in the chest by the rocket. It did no serious damage, but did put him off balance.After around minute of this, Shockvak, Flufskiron, Barritax and one Deceptikuta were all that was left. They had crushed a few Matoran, but now the Matoran's shots were more concentrated.At that moment however, the Wreckinators and Tahkan Metra showed up."Third time! Kill 'em this time!" JackaL said, refering to Shockvak and how this was the third time they'd met him on this planet. Tahkan headshot the remaining nameless Deceptikuta, and Barritax transmoced and escaped. Shockvak turned to fire at them, getting a shot, but JackaL's cannon was strong enough to throw him back. Flufskiron activated his shoulder mounted Cordak launchers, shooting at the Wreckinators. The Wreckinators spent enough time dodging the shots that Flufskiron allowed himself to transmoc and escape. Shockvak watched him fly off angirily, when suddenly he was shot at again."Kill him!" iBrow yelled.Shockvak turned back, his cannon fully charged, and fired. The shot hit the ground between LesoSpinn and JackaL, sending them flying, rolling and knocking iBrow over. Shockvak ran off, sending a few more shots at them. Tahkan fired several rockets at Shockvak, who then transmoced into his tank mode and continued to escape down the street, Deceptikuta pouring onto it farther along and covering him."Get back here!" JackaL yelled, getting up and firing. Deceptikuta Gunships flew by and fired at them, allowing Shockvak to escape."Again? REALLY?" iBrow yelled, firing at the Gunships."These things show up just so everyone else can run away!" LesoSpinn said."Move!" Hewkii said. The Matoran ran in the direction Shockvak had gone."Follow them! Keep them covered!" Tahkan said to the Wreckinators. Tahkan did not personally care much for Matoran, but he appreciated whatever help they could give.The Wreckinators tried to adavance, but the Gunships pinned them down. Suddenly, they began to get shot down.Tahkan, the Wreckinators and the Matoran turned around to see Kopatchet, Pohatubee, Vakama Maximus, Galcee, Jodkra (with Johnson, in rocket launcher mode, sitting on the top of him) and Blue Flame drive up and transmoc. Jaller and Hahli got out of Pohatubee and Crashinator ran up and transmoced."Well about time you tinheads showed up! We almost got all the killin' done!" JackaL said."Oh, you shouldn't have." Jodkra said, holding Johnson."Autotoabots, attack!" Kopatchet said, beginning to fire, killing a Deceptikuta that had showed up.FARTHER DOWN THE STREETFlufskiron, standing in the middle of the rubble-covered street, spoke some orders to some Deceptikuta when he saw a purple Metrutronian tank drive right down the middle of the road."Shockvak!" Flufskiron said as Shockvak transmoced into his robot mode."Flufskiron, I see you ran rather early." Shockvak said, looking over himself. He was heavily damaged, the Wreckinator's weapons having done their job."You can see! I lost an optic back there! Not all of us are used to only seeing with one!" Flufskiron said, pointing to the wires sticking out of where one optic used to be.At that moment one of the Deceptikuta near by had its head blown off. Flufskiron, Shockvak and the three nearest Deceptikuta turned in the direction of the disturbance.Hydraxhide ran out, gun's a-blazin'."This is for Mataus!" Hydraxhide yelled, shooting at Shockvak. Shockvak stepped back a bit, Hydraxhide not letting up on his firing and preventing Shockvak from shooting back. The Deceptikuta nearby shot at Hydraxhide, who shrugged off their shots.Flufskiron jumped at Hydraxhide, his fist turned into spikes, and swung at the Autotoabot. Hydraxhide moved from the first hit, fired at Flufskiron (knocking off a piece of the Deceptikuta's armour) but was hit with the second swing, causing him to drop his gun. Hydraxhide still had his cannon, though. He spun back and aimed his cannon right at Flufskiron's arm, shooting it and blowing apart the spikes."This is for Nujack!" Hydraxhide yelled. Then Hydraxhide raised his leg, (the one with cannon in it) and fired, knocking Flufskiron back. Hydraxhide was about to finish him off when Shockvak fired a shot from his massive cannon arm, sending Hydraxhide falling."As logic dictates, there is no kill," Shockvak said, aiming his cannon again, "Like overkill." and fired. Hydraxhide was sent into a building, his chest nearly completely destroyed.Flufskiron stood back up, walked over, turning his other hand into spikes, and punched/stabbed Hydraxhide in the chest. He then leaned his head in close to Hydraxhide's."All those years of fighting," Flufskiron said, "And it seems you went down rather piti-"Hydraxhide head-butted Flufskiron."Go ahead Flufskiron, make my day." Hydraxhide said, grimacing and raising his cannon again.DOWN THE STREETJaller and Hahli ran off to the side, near a phone booth (which are apparently in Metru-Nui now) as the Autotoabots and Soldiers advanced dowe the street, in intense combat with the Deceptikuta forces. Even the Wreckinators could only advance so far.Jaller watched the fighting, then saw movement in the sky. More Deceptikuta? he thought, controlling the urge to say 'Chuck Testa.'Nope, the being was blue, red and silver. He flew past a clock tower (which Metru-Nui has now, apparently) and launched himself forward. In preparedness for the impending awesome, the clock skipped ahead an hour."MATANUI!" Jaller yelled, just as something exploded nearby.Above, Matanui Prime in his jetpack-thing flew down to the battle field, coincedently just as the Autotoabots below made a push forward. Matanui shot with the guns on his arms, firing at the Deceptikuta below. Getting to the ground, the Wreckinators killed the Deceptikuta right where Matanui landed, clearing his way. He landed feet first, right near a Deceptikuta which he blew apart with his gun, and used his momentum to slide forward, stabbing a Deceptikuta, lifting its body and firing, blowing it apart. He got shot a few times which destroyed his jetpack, but he carried on, doing a spin to remove the remnants of his jetpack and dodge a few shots, shooting at the next Deceptikuta, which survived the shots but did not survive the subsequent chop to the head. He moved more, shooting a Deceptikuta in the lower torso, spinning around it and shooting it in the back of the upper torso, killing it. Continuing, he stuffed his gun into the next Deceptikuta, shooting and accidently blowing apart his gun. It mattered not, since he immediatly turned that hand into a sword, chopping through the Deceptikuta.The next Deceptikuta fired on Matanui, who returned fire with his remaining gun, brought his sword up and stabbed through it then brought his gun to its head and shot, blowing apart the Deceptikuta's head and once more ruining his gun. He dropped the gun, grabbed the Deceptikuta and threw its entire body to the side, stabbing at the next Deceptikuta which caused it to drop to one leg, then finished it off as he moved past. He turned his other hand into his sword and sliced apart the upper body of the last Deceptikuta as it got up from a sitting position, apparently thinking it had been safe to sit.As Matanui put his swords away and continued to run forward, Flufskiron and Shockvak watched in some horror. Flufskiron fired several of his weapons, which exploded around Matanui, and all it did was make him look awesome.Shockvak took a shot right at Matanui, who jumped and rolled right over it. He hit the ground, continued his roll and on the way back up activated his "special knuckles.""RRRRRAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!" Matanui raahhhed as he punched right through Shockvak's side. He turned back, punched Shockvak in the face, dodged a punched from Flufskiron's spiked hand, elbowed him right in the elbow, then uppercuted Flufskiron. Flufskiron fell back and Matanui turned back to Shockvak, pounding on him. Shockvak swung with his cannon arm and knocked Matanui back, and Flufskiron was about to stab at him when an axe hit Flufskiron in the shoulder. He cried out in pain as Dakama Prime removed his axe. Flufskiron turned around quickly and knocked Dakama over, then Matanui kicked Flufskiron in the back of the knee, then launched himself from that and hit Shockvak with his shoulder. Shockvak continued to fight however.Then a silver, smooth vehicle drove up, transmoced into Tahuswipe and in an act of awesome, jumped and sliced apart the tube that went between Shockvak's cannon and his back. Tahuswipe landed, turned and shot one of his swords out and into Shockvak's back.Shockvak's cannon arm shook violently and made a bad noise. Matanui saw that it was going to overload, so he grabbed the arm and aimed it towards the top of the Coliseum.THE TOP OF THE COLISEUMNorik Prime removed the Sun Matrix from the last control Pillar, placing it on the computer terminal that had been built up there."Now it's done. Commencing transport of Metrutron..." Norik said, turning back to the Pillar.Swiftinock turned around as he heard that, shocked. "METRUTRON?" he said, optics wide."Now you know." Norik said, just about to activate the Pillar.Matanui fired Shockvak's cannon, and the shot struck just below the Pillar, destroying the little spike thing that it hovered above."NOOO!" Norik said as he watched the Pillar fall to the ground below. Angirily, he took out his double-headed sword and shield. "Matanui, you forget your place!" he said as he jumped off the Coliseum, stabbed his sword into it, and began the long descent down. Swiftinock watched uneasily, not sure if a crisis had been averted or not.Shockvak pulled his cannon arm back, then swung at Matanui with it. Matanui stumbled as Shockvak activated the blade on his other arm and went to impale Matanui. Suddenly, he had Dakama's axe in the back of one-eyed head. Grunting, Dakama put his foot into the small of Shockvak's back, pulled, and brought Shockvak's head and most of his spine out. He flicked it off of his axe and Shockvak's head landed on the ground nearby. Shockvak's headless body fell to ground and Tahuswipe wheeled by to get his sword back."How illogical." Shockvak said as Dakama took out his gun and shot, blowing apart Shockvak's head and ending him once and for all.Dakama, Matanui and Tahuswipe focused on Flufskiron, knocking off pieces of the Deceptikuta's bright red armour, then one of the three large spikes on his back. Flufskiron got a hit on Matanui and Dakama, then jumped, transmoced and blasted off, the force of it knocking over the three Autotoabots.Matanui looked back. The Autotoabots were finishing off the remnants of the Deceptikuta on the street and Dakama was scanning the skies for Flufskiron."Hydraxhide!" Tahuswipe said. Dakama and Matanui saw the body of the weapon specialist lying against a building, his chest nearly destroyed completely.Matanui ran over to his old friend."Matanui.. did ya kill 'im? Did ya kill Shockvak?" Hydraxhide asked Matanui. Matanui leaned down."Yes, Shockvak is dead. Mataus is avenged." Matanui said."And Flufskiron?" Hydraxhide asked."He escaped." Dakama Prime said."He killed Nujack." Hydraxhide said, his voice weak."Nujack?" Matanui said, surprised. He hadn't known Nujack had died too."Matanui, there's one thing I want ya to do.." Hydraxhide said, "Kill that traitor Norik. At least.""I will try." Matanui said, not really wanting to kill his old friend."Heh. Good." Hydraxhide said, leaning his head back against the building and looking to the sky. His optics dimmed and his hands fell to the ground.Matanui lowered his head, then stood up. Fists shaking, he turned towards the Coliseum."NNNNNNOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIKKKKK!"Matanui yelled.And lo, there stood Norik Prime, double headed sword in his right hand, shield in his left."So, Hydraxhide finally died? A pity, a braver soldier there never was." Norik said."His death, Mataus' death, Nujack's death and the deaths of all these Matoran are on your hands Norik!" Matanui said, his voice shaking with anger.Norik shook his head in disbelief. "I don't understand, Matanui. You, a Metrutronian, a Prime,would give your life for these insects?" he said.Matanui launched his swords out of his hands and grabbed them by the handles which they had. "Freedom is the the right of all sentient beings." Matanui said.Norik smirked. "I was wrong to tell you a lie such as that Matanui. For that, I am sorry. For this, I am not!" Norik said as he lunged forward. Matanui lunged aswell, blocking Norik's strike and pushing him back into a building."I will trigger that Pillar!" Norik said."Then you'll have to go through me!" Matanui. Norik kicked Matanui back, who rolled back onto his feet. Norik swung at him again, which Matanui just dodged.Dakama Prime ran up, axe in hand and brought it down. Norik blocked with his shield, pushed back and went to stab. Matanui caught the blow in his swords, and Norik spun his sword out of it. Dakama went for another strike, which Norik sidestepped and then hit Dakama with his shield, making Dakama fall back.Tahuswipe wheeled by, slicing at Norik's ankle. Norik swung at him, which Tahuswipe dodged. Matanui went for another attack while Tahuswipe wheeled to the other side of Norik. Norik managed to parry and block Matanui's blows with his sword while at the same time block Tahuswipe with his shield. Dakama returned and struck at Norik, hitting him in the shoulder and removing some of the traitor's shoulder armour. Norik spun, slicing at Dakama then jumping back at Matanui."DECEPTIKUTA! Converge on my position and kill Matanui!" Norik radioed to the Deceptikuta forces. The nearest Deceptikuta gunships got there first, firing at Matanui, Dakama and Tahuswipe. Norik used this to try and run off, but the other Autotoabots had arrived. The Wreckinators began firing with their killer weaponry, some of which Norik managed to block with his shield. More Deceptikuta Gunships arrived, firing on the Autotoabots. Kopatchet and Pohatubee got a little too close, and Pohatubee got a good kick to the body and Kopatchet got stabbed through the shoulder.Matanui went for Norik again, but was thrown off his feet by an explosion from Gunships. "No!" Matanui yelled as he hit the ground, losing his weapons in the explosion. Deceptikuta jumped out and got onto Matanui, punching and kicking him while a few others began shooting at the Autotoabots.Norik put his sword away for a second and took out his rust cannon, aiming it at Dakama Prime. Jodkra saw this."Johnson!" He yelled, firing a rocket from Johnson. The shot hit Norik square in the chest, and he was thrown back."YEA!" Johnson yelled, transforming when an explosion hit nearby and sent Jodkra off his feet.Norik got up, getting shot by Vakama Maximus, Galcee and Blue Flame. He shrugged off the shots and transmoced into his fire truck alt mode, driving off."There's too many!" Dakama said, taking out his gun and firing at a Gunship, sending it down.Phoenix Prime teleported in, taking down a Gunship and landing nearby. Phoenix saw Matanui's problem. "Tahkan!" Phoenix yelled. Tahkan Metra turned and saw this aswell. Taking out his heavy chain gun, he fired on the Deceptikuta, bringing them down as Phoenix got up with his swords and chopped down the remainder of the Deceptikuta attacking Matanui."MatanuI! Norik's escaping!" Phoenix said when the Deceptikuta had been killed and Matanui was back on his feet.Matanui looked in the direction Norik had gone, the fire truck already going around a corner. Then he looked back to where he had last had his swords, and saw that they had been destroyed in the explosion. Phoenix followed his gaze and saw."Here, take this." Phoenix said, taking one of his swords and giving it to Matanui. Dakama Prime was nearby and saw this."Matanui!" he said, running over and holding his axe out to Matanui."Your axe? I can't take this.." Matanui said."Just take it and kill Norik! We'll hold them off long enough!" Dakama said, showing his gun. Matanui had a sad look on his face, then grabbed Dakama's axe."I guess this is it, huh?" Phoenix said."It is. Goodbye Autotoabots, it was an honour serving by your sides." Matanui said, looking at his friends."It was an honour living by yours." Dakama said."A nobler last stand there never was." Jodkra said, watching this."Just a little pretentious, don't you think? I'm sure there've been nobler ones." Johnson said."You're sure picky for a rocket launcher." Jodkra said."And an Agorian!" Johnson responded."And only one of those will help here." Jodkra said."Fine." Johnson said, transforming into the rocket launcher."Autotoabots! Hold off the Deceptikuta long enough so Matanui can kill Norik!" Dakama yelled as Matanui ran down the street, explosions happening everywhere."Get 'im! Chop 'is head off!" JackaL yelled.<You got the touch! You got the power!> Pohatubee's radio sang out as Matanui went past."Autotoabots! Prepa-" Dakama started to when he got hit by a missile. He hit the ground. Tahkan walked over and held out a hand."Get up, Dakama, and die like an Autotoabot." Tahkan said, not unkindly.Dakama took his hand and got back up. "I think I will, Tahkan." Dakama said, then taking his gun up and looking down the street. They saw the control Pillar lying ontop of a pile of rubble, Deceptikuta heading towards it."There's our target! Autotoabots, attack!" Dakama yelled, firing and leading the charge. The other Autotoabots and PEST soldiers followed.Jaller and Hahli were watching when Jaller turned to Hahli. "I gotta help." he said."What? You'll get squished!" Hahli said."I just gotta help. I'm not going to stand here and do nothing! Stay here, you won't get hurt!" Jaller said."So you're going to leave because you feel you can't stand here doing nothing, then tell me to stand here doing nothing?" Hahli complained."Uh.." Jaller said, then kissed her and ran off."JALLER!" Hahli said, when as explosion happened nearby and blocked him from sight for a moment."Destroy that Pillar!" iBrow yelled, firing away with his shotgun, taking down drones."Gunships!" LesoSpinn yelled, pointing up with his rifle. The sky was filled with Gunships, aiming their guns at the Autotoabots and firing.And suddenly"DECEPTIKUTA!" a huge voice yelled. Everyone turned in its direction and saw Omega Kaita standing on his feet, several Deceptikuta ships lying ruined at his feet. On his body several openings opened, revealing missiles apon missiles apon missiles. He fired them all. They traveled through the sky and struck the Gunships, blowing them apart and sending them crashing to the ground, decimating them.The Autotoabots were clear, and they continued to the Pillar, the PEST soldiers firing on Deceptikuta distracted by Autotoabots, and Autotoabots just killing the Deceptikuta in general.Jaller was running to the Pillar, intent on doing... something with it. He wasn't quite sure yet, but he was going. And then he wasn't. Barritax stood before him, slamming his fist into the ground."Hotstud232!" Barritax said, refering to Jaller's bBay username which Barritax had called Jaller by in the construction site parking lot o so long ago."Oh not you again!" Jaller said, falling and trying to crawl away. Barritax made a frightening sound then raised his fist to crush Jaller, when Pohatubee tackled Barritax. The two rolled until Barritax kicked Pohatubee off of him. Pohatubee got onto his feet as Barritax charged at him again. Pohatubee pointed his shoulder towards him, and Barritax ran into it. Pohatubee then brought his arm up, smacking Barritax back, then punched at him several times.Barritax stumbled, his arms momentarily falling to his sides. Pohatubee took his chance: punching into Barritax's chest, he turned his arm into his cannon and fired. Barritax's chest sas blown apart, his head landing on the ground near Jaller. Pohatubee pulled his arm out of Barritax's chest and the Deceptikuta's body landed behind its head.Pohatubee looked down at Jaller.<Keep close son ~~~ here there be monsters.> Pohatubee said through his radio. Jaller nodded. Pohatubee turned back to the direction of the Pillar and followed the other Autotoabots.MEANWHILEHahli stepped out of the way of a falling Gunship and hid near a building. The Autotoabots were cutting their way through the Deceptikuta, forcing themselves to the downed Control Pillar, and subsequently left Hahli alone in a bit of a dangerous spot. Turning to run down the alley behind, she then did what I just wrote and ran down it, running right into Makutatron, sitting up against a building.Hahli gulped, and decided that the little plan she had just come up with was worth a shot. She ran up infront of Makutatron, who didn't see her at first."Hey!" she yelled.Makutatron tilted his damaged head forward, Dr.Transraga still working in it. "Come to beg for mercy, Matoran? You will find none here." Makutatron said rather half heartedly."Not for myself." she said.Makutatron squinted a bit. "I recognize you. You're the mate of the boy who killed me." He said, his voice growling as he said killed."You mean Jaller?" Hahli said."Jaller? Is that what he is called? It matters not, you're all doomed anyhow." Makutatron said, calmly reaching up to his head, grabbing Transraga between two of his fingers, and crushing the little screaming doctor."Yes, we're all doomed, the Deceptikuta finally won," Hahli said, realizing how much of a bad idea this was, "And all it took was for them to get rid of you.""RAAHH!" Makutatron growled, slamming his hand down beside Hahli, making her fall over.Hahli knew she had hit the mark, by the simple fact she was still alive, "Your Deceptikuta win, but without you as their leader-" Hahli began to say, but was interupted."It is me! It will always be me!" Makutatron said, leaning in close to her."Norik and Matanui are fighting now, and if Matanui loses then Norik will have control of everything, and you'll just be a memory." Hahli said.Makutatron's optics were full of hate as he raised his fist to crush her, but stopped and fully considered the implications of Hahli's statement.MEANWHILEDakama shot a drone in the face, then ran past it, stuck his gun in the torso of the next Deceptikuta and blew it apart. A Deceptikuta jumped on him, but Dakama got it in a headlock. He held that Deceptikuta as he fired at several others, using the Deceptikuta's body to block shots at him."Tahkan!" Dakama yelled, throwing the Deceptikuta to the side. Tahkan shot that Deceptikuta to bits with his rifle as he gunned down more Deceptikuta with chain gun.Hewkii, Hafu and the New Guy ran together near Kopatchet, concentrating fire and distracting Deceptikuta when needed. A Deceptikuta jumped from the side and aimed its gun at the Matoran, firing. Kopatchet jumped in the way of the shot, protecting the Matoran but hitting the ground hard. The Autotoabot medic turned onto his back, the Deceptikuta holding its gun to Kopatchet's face. Suddenly, Crashinator, in wolf mode, jumped onto the Deceptikuta and grabbed its neck. The Deceptikuta fell to the ground, still struggling, as Crashinator ripped and tore the Deceptikuta's head right off."Well, good boy." Kopatchet said.Tahuswipe sliced at a Deceptikuta, spun around it, cut its leg, then sliced off its head as it fell to the ground. He sliced at another Deceptikuta nearby, wheeled around as he fired his shoulder cannon at it, launched one of his swords at another Deceptikuta, stabbed the other one he was fighting, then jumped onto the one he had launched his sword at, removing it and stabbing it somemore, killing it. Suddenly he was thrown back by a larger Deceptikuta, which was then shot at right in the neck by Galcee, killing it."I had that one, but thanks anyways." Tahuswipe said a she got back up."Your welcome!" Galcee said dryly as she fired on another Deceptikuta.TO BE CONTINUED: CHAPTER WAS TOO LONG (second time I've done that..)MTL
  8. Well, I had a bunch of stuff from this chapter quoted on this post... then I deleted it by accident.. then I decided you didn't need to re-read your own chapter :PHowever, I would like to congratulate on this genius little ticket: I nearly spilt my tea when I read that. I love it.MTL
  9. Yes, the length of a side effect of taking so long to get it up. A lot did get done, so I suppose that's good.There will be three more chapters: two more regarding the fighting, and then an epilogue. The first one will be somewhat long, and the last two will be considerably shorter. I was sorta disapointed that I never used Nujack though. He did have potential...The next chapter is already almost done, so expect before the end of the week. Of course, saying that it'll be a rather long time then I suppose. Eh, it'll happen atleast.MTL
  10. This brought a good smile to my face. I like it. Also, who paints a room purple and blue? Well, that's some good motivation... And that's some bad news!I like this comedy so far,ToaRobot18.MTL
  11. Wow, this got pinned? Even better. I like the idea so far, and really, the only thing I have to say is: Comment on new topics. Few things help a first time writer more than getting actual feedback, or a response even, to their stories.Of course, I'm assuming most of you know that. Or atleast, I hope ya do.MTL
  12. Even you iBrow Kermit must use a German accent!How did they not recognize Omega Turtle as soon as he said "Buh"? That alone narrowed it down as to who it could be considerably...MTL
  13. But what about... Billy Mays? He'd beat you down and clean it up with OXYCLEAN! :PBut no, seriously, Kermit died? Well, that's a twist. Although knowing the core, someone's just going to open the door and let him out so...MTL
  14. So far seems a respectable comedy, and your Makuta is a nice change, especially his Night Light's business. My favourite part was Lehrak and his green-ness. I could see my self living with Nojustlehrak as a name, but anyways...I'm interested with what you can do with this!MTL
  15. TRANSONICLE 2: REVENGE OF ICARAXCHAPTER 3COLLEGE CRAZY I SAYJALLER'S HOUSE, TA-METRU, METRU-NUIJaller and Hahli walked into the shed in the neighbour’s yard. Pohatubee spent lots of time there.And the neighbour never noticed this, oddly enough."Stay here Hahli, I need to talk to Pohatubee, mono a mecha." Jaller said as he walked into the shed. With no one watching, Hahli spat out her gum on the neighbour’s car."Hehehe." She laughed.Jaller walked up to Pohatubee. Pohatubee wasn’t looking at Jaller."Pohatubee, I’m sorry for whatever I did." Jaller said, noticing that the ‘Bee was crying, or at least his window wipers were broken.<I’m not crying Joey. Be quiet!> Pohatubee’s radio sang."I never said you were!" Jaller said. He was very confused. In the 20 minutes between this and the last chapter, Jaller had ordered Pohatubee back in the shed. And then yelled at him for putting Drain Cleaner in the fridge."Okay, Pohatubee, I said I was sorry. Not stop being a wimp and get up." Jaller said, perhaps a little too, how should I put it, mean.Within 3.125 milliseconds of Jaller saying that, Pohatubee turned his arm into a cannon, and held Jaller at cannon point."Okay, you can keep cry- I mean, having optics leaks."<Now that’s the tune I’m lookin’ for dawg!> Pohatubee’s Radio sang out.Jaller, happy that he wasn’t about to get spalttered all over the wall behind him, decided to break the news to Pohatubee."Pohatubee, I have to talk to you about the college thing…" Jaller started, but before he could finish, Pohatubee’s radio started to sing.<I’m so excited!>"Pohatubee!"<I just can’t hide it!>"Pohatubee!"<*various snapping of finger noises*>"POHATUBEE!!!!"<Was up diggity dawg?>Jaller thought of not saying what had to come next, but new he had to say it. He couldn’t just disappear, could he?He would keep that as plane B."I’m not taking you with me." Jaller finally said it. It wasn’t that bad, actually. His heart only stopped for about 6 seconds.<Say what!?> Pohatubee’s radio sang out as the ‘Bee's head sank in sadness.Ah geez, Jaller thought, no he’s sad again. What now?Jaller ran out the door."Well?" Hahli asked."Well what?" Jaller asked back."How’d Pohatubee take it?" Hahli asked again.Jaller stopped for a second. Should he tell her the truth? Naw, this won’t come back to bight me. Not all."He took it like an Autotoabot." Jaller said to Hahli."With tears and whining?" Hahli asked, again again."No, like Hydraxhide would. With dignity and pride." Jaller responded."No, Hydraxhide would've shot something." Hahli said."Fine. Like Kopatchet would." Jaller said."Kopatchet would've said something to annoy or make everyone uneasy." Hahli said, "And since Pohatubee can't talk...""FINE! Like Wipeout would!" Jaller said."Wipeout would just complain about being forgotten about." Hahli said."Well Pohatubee took it well, OK?" Jaller finally said.The two walked to the family car."Wait," Jaller said, "Since when is the car a Blue Sports car?""Since Matanui Prime told me to." Blue Flame told the Matoran."Uh-huh." Jaller said as he got in the drivers seat."What are you doing?" Jaller’s father asked Jaller."What do you mean?" Jaller asked his father back."Well, you can’t drive. Sit in the back." Jaller’s father told him."I can so-" Jaller’s dad threw him out of Blue Flame before Jaller had anything to say about it.Jaller was walking over to Hahli when he remembered something. He ran and grabbed the bag which had Ithinkimbald’s junk and the AllShiny piece."Hahli, you have to take this. It’s the last piece of the AllShiny." Jaller told Hahli as he put the bag in her purse."But didn't Matanui take one-" Hahli was about to argue, but Jaller interrupted her."Okay, second last piece. But you get the point. Now take it." Jaller told Hahli as he got into Blue Flame."Okay Jaller! I lov-" Before Hahli could finish her sentence, Blue Flame and Jaller’s family already drove away.Shaking he head, she walked back to her motorcycle. Before she got on her motorcycle, she saw the box full of Jaller’s stuff. She sighed and drove away on her motorcycle.In one of the bushes nearby, something was hiding. A little RC truck drove out.<Soundprah, this is Wheeldax. I’ve located a piece of the AllShiny! It's in the hands of one 'em blue ones!> Wheeldax radioed to Soundprah. The little RC truck had a little satellite thing, like a TV one on top of your house, which had seen the shards energy signature.Over the top explanations for useless things FTW!!!!In space, the huge form of Soundprah hacked a satellite, the ones floating around in space, and located the position of Wheeldax.<Wheeldax, follow the energy signature. I will send 41lu to secure the Matoran.> Soundprah radioed back to Wheeldax.<And the other one?> Wheeldax radioed as he drove down the sidewalk.<I’m sending Crashinator for that one.> Soundprah rad- you get the point, they're radioing each other.<Roger that,> Wheeldax was radioing just as he hit a rock on the sidewalk, <ARGH! SWEET MAKUTATRON'S OPTICS WHAT THE~~~~>Soundprah ended the transmission there.Soundprah, in space, turned slightly, and opened the ejector on his chest."Choosing cassette troop 003. Alternate form: Matoran. Planet destination: location V1 N34 W34 R43. Firing." Soundprah said as he prepared to launch 41lu.Soundprah fired an orange ball down to the planet below. He watched until it disappeared.<Soundprah. This is Nihiscream What's your status?><Wheeldax has located a piece of the AllShiny. He is in pursuit. 41lu is heading after the boy who terminated Makutatron. Crashinator is on stand by for planet fall when the location of the Autotoabot's shard is secured.> Soundprah radioed to Nihiscream.<Excellent. Do not fail me Soundprah, you know we have very few competent Deceptikuta. Nihiscream out.> Nihiscream replied.<Soundprah acknowledges.>BACK ON THE PLANET BELOWBlue Flame and his passengers arrived at St. McMarios College for Dummies."Whoa! Can’t you just smell the smartlyness? Jaller’s mom said as she did a twirl beside the car.Jaller’s dad got out of Blue Flame. "I think it smells like a lot of money a year.""Oh please, even I know you’re a cheapskate." Blue Flame said.Two Ga-Matoran walked by the group. One of them said "Did your car like, just talk or something?""Uh no I didn’t, I mean, Honk honk!" Blue Flame sa- honked."Oh. Ok." And they walked away.Jaller finally got out of Blue Flame. "So…. Has anyone seen my box?""No. Now, why don’t you head over to your dorm or something. Bye!" Jaller’s dad said as he got in Blue Flame and started the engine."Good bye Jaller!" Jaller’s mom said as she got in Blue Flame.Jaller looked at Blue Flame."What?" Blue Flame asked."Your supposed to say bye." Jaller said."Oh fine. Good bye Jaller." Blue Flame said."Don’t let Pohatubee get in any trouble, will ya?" Jaller said, patting Blue Flame’s hood."Oh, were not going back to your place. Your parents are taking the first flight out of here and going to Karda-Nui for an extended vacation while your house is being remodeled.." Blue Flame said.Jaller’s dad kicked Blue Flame. "You weren’t supposed to tell him you stupid car!!""Sigh. I can’t believe I’m taking orders from a Matoran. You know if Tahkan Metra was here, you wouldn’t-" Blue Flame was replying to Jaller’s dad when the same two Ga-Matoran from before walked by."I’m like, almost certain your car was so totally talking." the Ga-Matoran said."No it wasn’t!" Jaller said. He looked at his nervous dad."Yes it was!" the Ga-Matoran said."Dad, plan A!" Jaller said to his father.Jaller ran into the college and Blue Flame drove away.In a nearby tree, a slightly hunchback Ga-Matoran watched Blue Flame drive away, along with Jaller running into the building. She jumped out of the tree, and followed the Ta-Matoran.Jaller stood in front of the door to his room. The door was covered in gibberish and Mountain Dew posters."Uh huh." Jaller said to himself as he walked in.To his surprise was the most horrifying person ever. Almost an insane evil scientist. A fool, a terrible fool, who may or may not run several robot speculation websites on robot alien invaders, who could change form at will. A person who should have been stuck in a tree."Jaller, how long has it been? 19 chapter or so?" Takua said to Jaller."Something like that." Jaller said as Takua put his arm around Jaller’s shoulders."How could this get any worse?" Jaller mumbled to himself as Takua talked on and on about something.Oh, it would get much worse. Much, much worse.It still had another chapter of this place left to go.And Takua wasn’t going no where.Joy.END OF CHAPTERFUN COMMENTARY: I misspelt Transonicle in the title of this chapter, and reffered to Matoran as "humans" a few times. Whoopsies!MTL
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