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Grandmaster Lehvorak

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Year 12
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  • Birthday October 13

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  1. Are the links all broken? I didn't read the rest of the posts here to see, but it led me to a twitter bootstrap-like website with titles still showing things that are still under development along with a disfigured Bionicle logo on the top rleft. I would say the Solismagna website has potential but the typography used seems a little unbionicle-like and needs some fixing there . As for the 2001 website seems like it could be fixed so it won't be stuck on left align. -Lehvorak
  2. The style is similar to Avatar, which is pretty neat and the coloring is outstanding. You did a great job on this artwork. The only thing I would say is add shadows next time underneath the characters to give it the effect that they are standing on ground instead of floating. Overall good job! -Lehvorak
  3. I do see some vector art being used for this artwork, is that indent on the top of the mask suppose to be pointy? I also believe some of the areas could have been curved a little more, but overall this is good stuff for flat design! -Lehvorak
  4. Interesting, is this a vector art? Because I can see how clean the design is, but I am trying to figure if you rasterized it because it seems very pixelated. -Lehvorak
  5. I suppose it could be the eyebrows, for in a heavily abstracted style like the one you're using any small detail can make a huge difference; they might be a tad bit "too pronounced" for a feminine appearance. (Saying 'might', because who says all female characters need thin eyebrows to be feminine, seriously.) Tamaru's head is a tiny bit off-center, I think it should be shifted a bit more to the left side. Generally, your art style is very nice, and the characters look cute. I'm also very fond of Macku's necklace. :3 Those hints of shading on Hafu's shirt (is it Hafu? I guess so) are well-done, and a cel-shade type of shading like there would work well with the other characters as well. Also, the variation of nose shapes while staying true to the nature of your art style is impressive, I like them. Thank you Takanuvia(I can't believe Takanuvia commented on my tiny inferior thread)! Now I see the eyebrows thing and Tamaru's head, I see it more of a shoulder issue though, the shoulder should be moved so his head gets centered, otherwise it will be pretty small I think. That was a really helpful comment, thanks once again! Hmm about making Macku look more feminine.... Maybe it is the neck size... or could be the body itself that could use some tweaking? Like usually female bodies have that triangle S-curve shape (Hopefully you know what I'm talking about ). Overall, I don't believe the eyebrows has no effect on this matter since in anime/manga the character's eyebrows usually gives it more character than making them look male or female. I mean look at Satsuki Kiryuin from Kill La Kill Reference Link: Satsuki Kiryuin So hopefully that helps a bit Continue to play around with it or something, and keep up the good work comrade! EDIT: Had to fix a typo! -Lehvorak
  6. The cross-hatching feel gives it a nice touch to it and It reminds me of a political cartoon drawing. I do like the overall concept of it and feel like seeing the rest of the body, instead of just a close-up on the head. The direction of the breathing triangle things... don't know what you call it... next to the mouth seem a little out of place compared to the other contours in the sketch. I feel like you could fix that in a way to make it blend with the drawing, because the way it looks like now, it seems like it was just slapped on to the mask compared to how everything else was placed around the mask. Overall, not bad! -Lehvorak
  7. Hey there people/staff of BZP, It has been a while since I have been here on BZPower, and I am still trying to transition back into here. What are the new signature regulations? Because I remembered you used to have a certain sized banner and you can only have a limited amount of external links that can be linked on your signature. I was wondering what are the acceptable external links and what are the unacceptable external links (Ex: I noticed Deviantart is an acceptable website and some YouTube videos), because I need a whole rundown or list of what can be linked here or what is not acceptable, because I don't want to break any rules. So, can you help answer my question? Thanks! -Lehvorak
  8. I am trying to figure out if you are trying to make Kopaka float or have him stand on the ground, because right now it appears he is floating in mid-air. If you are trying to ground him, he needs to have a shadow underneath him. Also, I think what would help is having some highlights to your work aside from all darker value. It will give an idea where that light is facing and might help make your work stand out more! Overall, good job! -Lehvorak
  9. This Kanohi mask is really well drawn, you got the shapes right! And the simplicity of it stands out perfectly! My curiosity is since you are starting digital art, have you look into vector graphics because I think having this kanohi in vector graphics would look more appealing instead of rasterized. -Lehvorak
  10. These sketched concepts has some potential! I like how it is turning out from the way it looks, and I can't wait to see the finished final pieces if you plan on doing them. How long do you think you it will take before you get to the final stages? -Lehvorak
  11. This art piece is pretty well made and very appealing, and even capturing the feel of the motion. I really enjoy the color palette you chose for this art piece and the style seems so unique! It would be nice to see more works from you again! Nice job! -Lehvorak
  12. Your monochromatic artwork always amuses me Taka! I have no idea how long has it been since I seen your artwork, but I can see a lot of improvements compared to the last time I seen it. I have to say you really portrayed the view point really well from the top. I can see now why you say you take as much time with your artwork now hahaha! Have you considered having a whole portfolio of your works or actually study illustration before? -Lehvorak
  13. This artwork is pretty appealing, especially the way you blended the colors with one another, thus giving the values and a texture on the mask. Even if the lineart is rough, I still like that kind of style because it gives that spray paint graffiti look to it. I also see you are trying to do a 3/4 body view for your artwork, which the proportions seem slightly off because you can see the chest armor kind of facing almost towards us while the rest of the body is doing the 3/4 view. It's okay, just gotta practice that a little more and you will get it! Plus drawing a view like that while the figure is kind of leaning can be hard. Overall, you did a splendid job! Can't wait to see more works from you! -Lehvorak
  14. This sketch has potential! I really like the concept a lot! The details are coming along really well, are you planning on inking this? Also the type-face (The title that says Tahu) could be a little bigger. Overall, nice stuff you got here! -Lehvorak
  15. Holy smokes I look at the front page and everything is all cluttered up but it is good to see you are still up and running Gav! It has been a while. I like how your latest comic looks, a lot has improved . -Lehvorak
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