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So, I have recently been working on writing an overall story for a way of bringing back Bionicle (the story in any case). I'm PRETTY sure that this is where it should go. Now I know that it is fraught with mistakes and things-that-could-never-happen. But why else would I put it on the most knowledgeable community about Bionicle? So that you all could point them out to me and give me ideas for revisions, of course! So, here it is, in its entirety of mistakes and strange occurrences. But I think the story is workable, so please post with comments, critisism (constructive), revisions, ideas, etc. And a note about footnotes: some may be missing, as this is my second draft and some of them got deleted. EDIT: I don't think this goes agains the S&T rules, as this is merely MY idea of one way it could be brought back. In the time before time, before any islands were raised in Mata Nui's dormant body, before any planets were in the universe, before Toa and Turaga alike, there were the Great Beings. They had always been there, and always would be there. And they looked upon some of their newest creations, the Staff1 of Division2, the Staff of Energy, and the Staff of Weather3. Seprately these staves wielded great power, but when brought together by the Toa wearing the Kanohi Elras, the mask of energy, it would bring such power as had never been seen before. An (at the time) unforseen problem was the fact that any being could use the staff4 once it was bound. This was a disastrous mistake, though, not entirely a mistake. Even in this pre-history evil lurked. During the forging of the spears it, though not having a physical body, bent it just slightly to its will, just enough for it to create this weakness. But having done this, its energy was sapped, and could do no more for many millennia. But it would return. But tens of thousands of years have passed since then. Mata Nui killed the Makuta, or so he thought. But there was peace. After slaying Teridax (or so he thought he did). After slaying Teridax and undoing the shattering, all the Toa, Turaga, and Matoran celebrated Mata Nui5 for many months. But after that, not much was seen or heard of him6. Before he left, he gave them the Mask of Life to put in the newly constructed Great Temple on Spherus Magna. When Aqua Magna fell back into Sphereus Magna, it crushed the Great Spirit Robot underneath it. Mata Nui assumed that Makuta was dead. The shell was full of energy, and the pressure exerted by the planets kept him alive, alive enough that he could wait until someone would come save him. And someone would. The Dark Hunters had heard of what had happened, and, knowing what a powerful ally Teridax could be, wanted him on theirs side. The Toa incarcerated all of the Dark Hunters. All the Dark Hunters they could find, that is. They didn't know of another exit from the body. The Dark Hunters rummaged around the planet, searching for items they needed. One of the items was the Mask of Life. They stole it from the Great Temple and brought it back inside the Great Spirit Robot. Using it, they powered up the robot enough to fix itself and fly to a nearby planet before crashing into the ocean there. The force exerted on the planet because of the Robot breaking out caused it to explode, re-doing the Shattering. Teridax put his spirit into a small cube called the Yukax before rigging the Robot to morph itself into a smaller size. The Shadowed One carried the Yukax out of the Robot before it convulsed upon itself, making a rather ramshamble-looking empty body for Teridax. They patched it up with some of the materials they collected from Spherus Magna. Using the Yukax and the Ignika, Makuta went into the body. He was alive again, and a side effect of the process was that the Mask of Life was now tainted by the evil it helped bring about. Which also meant that Mata Nui was now corrupted as well. The Toa weren't aware of this, but there was an overall feeling of unrest. The Toa tried to soothe this, and they did. They assured the Matoran that nothing was wrong, that Mata Nui must have just found something to do on another planet. They couldn't be farther from the truth. Makuta had regained most of his former energy, but kept hidden on the planet. He double-crossed the Dark Hunters and imprisoned the Shadowed One. Things kept going on Spherus Magna, but all was not well. Makuta had again spread dis-ease, this time stronger. The Toa couldn't stop it, and several matron went insane, causing destruction and dischord. The Toa hadn't seen Mata Nui for a long time, and were concerned that something had, indeed happened to him. At this time, as it had been in Makuta's plan to happen, the Toa sent out a signal summoning a seven Toa team. One of the Toa wore the Kanohi Elras. He was the only one of the seven to make it at the time. He searched all over the planets for the spears, and, having found them, bound them into the Great Spear. But not sooner had he done that that Makuta captured him and stole the Great Spear11 from him. And so begun the Days of Darkness. When, after a month, Mata Nui returned, the Toa, Turaga, and Matoran were horrified to see him team up with Makuta, becoming his 2nd in command. After a year of the Days of Darkness, the other six Toa arrived. They freed the seventh Toa, and, in doing so, accidentally freed the Shadowed One as well. He rallied most of the Dark Hunters to him again, and the Toa went together to fight the Makuta and cleanse the Mask of Life and free Mata Nui... Footnotes! 1. Duh! Spear and Spears, not Staff and Staves. 2. Yes, the same one Vezon had. 3. Whether or not, I ask myself. Perhaps it should be light? Or sound? No, it should be knowledge. 4. But there should be a staff. 5. After killing Makuta, he laid down in that protodermis again, and went exploring around on the planets and islands in spirit or Toa-sized form. 6. Oh yeah, he also gave them the Ignika, which they put in the Great Temple. 7. BTW! I didn't say it, but the Toa Mata (or rather, Nuva) were now Turaga when this happened. 8. Lol narrated by Turaga Tahu, not Vakama. 9. This section would actually be very long, providing several sets (of the Dark Hunters and the Toa guarding the Ignika), several comics, etc. I just didn't feel like writing an in depth story about it. 10. So we can use the Bionicle Symbol again! 11. There really should be a staff. Really.