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#1 Offline The Swimming Beard

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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 05:37 PM

Gallery Feedback appreciated.

Edited by SmoothJazz, Jun 30 2013 - 10:27 AM.

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#2 Offline Draven

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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 06:02 AM

I don't see why this hasn't gotten attention yet. This is a great MoC.

 

I really like the claw hand HF piece being used as the chest armour. The arms and the legs look bulky and great. However, I don't like the head being that far out.

 

Does he have waist articulation?


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#3 Offline ChroXumo

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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 06:58 AM

Great build, Jazz. As Draaaaven said, the main issue is the neck being kinda far forward, but as you said you've fixed that, so I think he'll look even better with a realigned neck. :P

One more thing. Black and silver looks nice and suits him well... but it can get a little boring. To make him stand out I'd suggest using something bright as an accent color, though that's obviously all up to you. :)

 

 

I don't see why this hasn't gotten attention yet. This is a great MoC.

 

Probably because people can't view the MOC until they view the topic, so they don't always view the topic because they don't know it's for a great MOC, etc. :lol:


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#4 Offline The Swimming Beard

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Posted Jun 25 2013 - 03:52 PM

I don't see why this hasn't gotten attention yet. This is a great MoC.

 

I really like the claw hand HF piece being used as the chest armour. The arms and the legs look bulky and great. However, I don't like the head being that far out.

 

Does he have waist articulation?

 

Thanks. I'm not the first to use the claw piece as chest armor - it was even used on the official Witch Doctor set. No, it doesn't have waist articulation.

 

Also, updated the page with the improved version.


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