Here is where you can comment and criticize constructively on The Bionicle Comics Narration.
To start things off, I realized that Kopaka never told Matoro his name, so I just worked it into the part where Matoro is telling Kopaka about the Toa.
I kept wanting to go into first-person present-tense. I kept it third-person past-tense, though. Do you think I should switch?
Looking forward to hearing what you all say!