Jump to content

  • Log in with Facebook Log in with Twitter Log In with Google      Sign In   
  • Create Account

Welcome to BZPower!

Hi there, while we hope you enjoy browsing through the site, there's a lot more you can do if you register. The process is easy and you can use your Google, Facebook, or Twitter account to make it even faster. Some perks of joining include:
  • Create your own topics, participate in existing discussions, and vote in polls
  • Show off your creations, stories, art, music, and movies and play member and staff-run games
  • Enter contests to win free LEGO sets and other prizes, and vote to decide the winners
  • Participate in raffles, including exclusive raffles for new members, and win free LEGO sets
  • Send private messages to other members
  • Organize with other members to attend or send your MOCs to LEGO fan events all over the world
  • Much, much more!
Enjoy your visit!

Photo

Through The Eyes Of Red Review Topic


  • Please log in to reply
1 reply to this topic

#1 Offline -Bionicleman-

-Bionicleman-
  • Members
  • Toa

  • 23-May 05
  • 171 posts
  •  

Posted Oct 18 2011 - 07:29 PM

Post your thoughts on my epic here. :)
  • 0

#2 Offline Fighty

Fighty
  • Members
  • Defender of Mata Nui

  • 11-February 07
  • 2,174 posts
  •  

Posted Oct 19 2011 - 10:24 AM

I want to start out by saying that I really enjoyed the prologue. It didn't necessarily do much in setting up the plot - besides the fact that Teridax is using Infected Kanohi to control Rahi - but it had a nice style that was simple and concise. It gave me a good sense of place without being overly descriptive, and it gave me a good sense of action and progression without skimping on the details. It's a good, solid style that is easy and enjoyable to read. If the rest of the epic is like this, I may just have to give it a look.
  • 0

click the banner

reservoir_dogs.png

for a bloody good time





0 user(s) are browsing this forum

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users