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Through The Eyes Of Red Review Topic

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#1 Offline -Bionicleman-

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Posted Oct 18 2011 - 07:29 PM

Post your thoughts on my epic here. :)
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#2 Offline Fighty

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Posted Oct 19 2011 - 10:24 AM

I want to start out by saying that I really enjoyed the prologue. It didn't necessarily do much in setting up the plot - besides the fact that Teridax is using Infected Kanohi to control Rahi - but it had a nice style that was simple and concise. It gave me a good sense of place without being overly descriptive, and it gave me a good sense of action and progression without skimping on the details. It's a good, solid style that is easy and enjoyable to read. If the rest of the epic is like this, I may just have to give it a look.
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