Nav3taX Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 (edited) Do NOT bypass the filter. -B6 Edited November 4, 2011 by Black Six Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sniper Jo Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 All right then. I didn't understand what was going on, the text and the shading on the sprites hurt my eyes, and the text actually leaves the panels. Is this supposed to be funny? Because I don't get it. On the plus side, you seem to know how to put the bits of a sprite together. bionicle is trans culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 (edited) All right then. I didn't understand what was going on, the text and the shading on the sprites hurt my eyes, and the text actually leaves the panels. Is this supposed to be funny? Because I don't get it. On the plus side, you seem to know how to put the bits of a sprite together.well, you would have to have viewed my work on the old bzpower to get my rag-tag random style that usally only works in my head untill i make enough material for it to work in other peoples head. but basicly:Do NOT bypass the filter. -B6 is just a generic comic series.Galaxy is a re-do of the last one i did on the old BZPower.Do not worry friend. all will be revealed in time.! Edited October 25, 2011 by Black Six Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sniper Jo Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 I say your work on the old forums and... Well, to be honest, I don't really understand that either. It doesn't "work in my head", no matter how much of it I look at. bionicle is trans culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~kh Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 I think we all know that this is a pretty blatant bypass of the word filter, good sir. Trying to use the spaces to your advantage only enlarges that fact. As far as your comics go, however, your first series (which we all know why I can't name) has too small panels for us to ever see anything. That, and there's a pretty big graphics clash between the rest of the panels and the "Navin's new house", which looks very Paint-made in its appearance. That said, the rest of the panels after the "new house" one are okay as backgrounds go; they don't distract the eyes too much and give attention to the characters. And as for the next one, the font is too small and looks quite ugly. Never use Times New Roman for your series; it just looks out of place. The ships also looks a little questionable in their detail; the white one is passable, but still looks out of place whenever you try to put that lens flare of yours in there, and the green one in particular is completely one shade and ruins any type of drama or realism you wanted to convey. This also carries to the backgrounds and their bare-grey appearance. There's not much else to say, really. Your spelling is good, but you don't use punctuation and/or forget to capitalize many words at a time. You just need to keep working on these; change the font, change the backgrounds, change the layout, and so on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P~M Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 Yeah, using that name is going to get this closed, methinks.Aside from that... Eh, hard to tell, as there are only two so far, but... I think we all know that this is a pretty blatant bypass of the word filter, good sir. Trying to use the spaces to your advantage only enlarges that fact. As far as your comics go, however, your first series (which we all know why I can't name) has too small panels for us to ever see anything. That, and there's a pretty big graphics clash between the rest of the panels and the "Navin's new house", which looks very Paint-made in its appearance. That said, the rest of the panels after the "new house" one are okay as backgrounds go; they don't distract the eyes too much and give attention to the characters. And as for the next one, the font is too small and looks quite ugly. Never use Times New Roman for your series; it just looks out of place. The ships also looks a little questionable in their detail; the white one is passable, but still looks out of place whenever you try to put that lens flare of yours in there, and the green one in particular is completely one shade and ruins any type of drama or realism you wanted to convey. This also carries to the backgrounds and their bare-grey appearance. There's not much else to say, really. Your spelling is good, but you don't use punctuation and/or forget to capitalize many words at a time. You just need to keep working on these; change the font, change the backgrounds, change the layout, and so on.Yeah... What Kahi said. Also, the GIMP effects don't go well with the overall MS Paint feel.I hope you keep making these so I can better evaluate them, but... well, let's say there is room for improvement. -- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chibinuva Posted October 23, 2011 Share Posted October 23, 2011 (edited) Dang, I was thinking you actually called it "Do NOT bypass the filer." which is what grabbed my attention. The comics aren't really funny, and you should really get the topic name changed if you don't want it to get locked. However, as I'm sure you can do better, I will watch these to see how you improve. Edited October 23, 2011 by Hyper Rarity <<Newest Chibi: Nuparu Inika Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted October 23, 2011 Share Posted October 23, 2011 Hard to tell what's going on.And you should edit out that word from the comic. It bypasses the filter. Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted October 24, 2011 Author Share Posted October 24, 2011 Dang, I was thinking you actually called it "Do NOT bypass the filer." which is what grabbed my attention. The comics aren't really funny, and you should really get the topic name changed if you don't want it to get locked. However, as I'm sure you can do better, I will watch these to see how you improve.hehehehehe.. I dont think i will actuly.. It might be better than what I had before... Oh well, I can comply to the comics sucking monkey butt - probibly cause while I was doing them I was more focused on training my attack on runescape. and learning new GIMP effects. So gime a few days to give tis alittle of an overhaul and get my mind back on track. cause im just AWESOME like that. lol Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iver Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 You have to put up some actual content you know, otherwise your topic is gonna get locked. "You humans are absurd, Rook. Furious when you're not in control, terrified when you are. Pull it together." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted October 26, 2011 Author Share Posted October 26, 2011 it got removed. i have no idea why! Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vataki Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 The best title for a comic series Of all time naw man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 thanks vah Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iPenguin Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Where are the comics? Also funny story: I once made a comic, and the description was something like "These comics owned and are cool XD" Eventually, it got changed to "These comics Do NOT Bypass the word filter and are cool XD" Majhost sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 mm. i just put up the Galaxy comic .. AGAIN .. and i think it got taken down. AGAIN. thats the good one though. Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 You should probably censor yourself somehow in your comics too... Don't go all the way to "Do NOT bypass the filter was that?" though My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Windrider- Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 (edited) It would be wise to familiarize yourself with BZPower's Rules and Guidelines, specifically this paragraph:Do not use foul language anywhere on BZPower. We want BZPower to be kept clean, and that includes keeping a clean sounding forum. Most bad words are filtered out, but some have been overlooked. Just because a word is not filtered does not mean it is allowed. If you're not sure if a word or phrase is allowed - don't post it. Additionally, just because you know a word will be filtered does not mean you should use it. If you can't think of a way to say something without swears, don't say it.The comic you posted and reposted contained a swear word. That is why it was removed the first time, and that is why it has been removed again.Since there is no current legal content, I'm going to close this. You mentioned in your post that you had some comics coming soon. Feel free to repost this topic once you have prepared them and once you are absolutely certain they do not violate any of BZPower's guidelines.Topic closed. Edited November 4, 2011 by -Windrider- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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