tahukan Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 (edited) TAHU2014's Comics of Guest stars! i have decided to make an ultimate guest star series Prepare for Randomness and crazyness COMICS Part 1 of white backgrounds GS Toa Kayne part 1 GS/PGS Toa kayne part 2 I need money I got money Ill be back Your alive! Part 1 credits dark709 tapika ~zarkan~ michale, toa of lightning BCTH mercenus and everyone else who made the chimoru omega and kits also cred to whoever made the mlp sprites when i use the charecter or weapon you made in the chimoru omega i will make sure to add your name with darks Part 2 PART 2 CREDITS Soran Dark709 Gerlicky King Lehvak Oneker Vataki Teridax For Chimoru R and the exspresions from the Chimoru Six Shade kit also most backgrounds in my comics are from wallpapers off of google if you made them tell me and i'll add your name to the list thanks! GUEST STARS are unlimited just PM me 1 Toa kayn 2 Avmatoran 3 Taurus (Falcon lord) comic ideas Av Rainbow Dash CLOSED TILL FURTHE NOTICE PERMANENT GUEST STARS 1Snicker 2tecnokua 3toa Kayn 4Giggles 5Loganto 6Arzaki 7Magnisius (maliginus) im new to this so if i did something worng please tell me via pm Edited August 13, 2013 by TAHU2014 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Not much I can say besides center your text always when using speech bubbles, make sure the text is centered inside your speech bubbles, use correct grammar, punctuation, and capitalization when writing text, and make sure to create some backgrounds and plot ideas that aren't so raw and unprepared. Other than that, there really isn't anything else to critique. However, in your next comic, I encourage you to consider my few points, as it will improve each and every comic you make in the future. Good luck! -Rez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 24, 2013 Author Share Posted July 24, 2013 Not much I can say besides center your text always when using speech bubbles, make sure the text is centered inside your speech bubbles, use correct grammar, punctuation, and capitalization when writing text, and make sure to create some backgrounds and plot ideas that aren't so raw and unprepared. Other than that, there really isn't anything else to critique. However, in your next comic, I encourage you to consider my few points, as it will improve each and every comic you make in the future. Good luck! -Rezthanks! ill do that i was kinda rushed so ill make sure to use those tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarracenianKaijin Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 Well, that sure is a white background alright. -------------- Reach Heaven by Violence. And while you are at it, see Bionicle characters as Magical Girls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 26, 2013 Author Share Posted July 26, 2013 yeah mondays overrated so heres a new comic NOW! *crowd yells and applauds here it isGS comic for Toa kayne part 1 ta da also comic 1 has been redone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kayn Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 (edited) Oh noes! Edit: While the generic comment rules may be loosened, please try to make more substantial posts when reviewing!-Wind- I'll remember that next time Edited July 26, 2013 by Toa Kayn Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 27, 2013 Share Posted July 27, 2013 nice! good start! just get a couple more comics up, your doing well for first comics! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 (edited) Comics anyone? (i think that lines been used lol)COMIC 3nice! good start! just get a couple more comics up, your doing well for first comics!thanks yeah i just started so exspect more also i made the football eyes and mouth drop spritesand hres a bit of art AvRdrecolor Edited July 28, 2013 by TAHU2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 (edited) new comic studio is a art studio/house i need money Edited July 28, 2013 by TAHU2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 new comic studio is a art studio/house i need money That was awesome!I like these comics. These comics are great. ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 new comic i got money Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 new comic i got money YOU CAN'T DESTROY MY NOOBICORN!!!FIX IT!!! ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 new comic i got money YOU CAN'T DESTROY MY NOOBICORN!!!FIX IT!!! ill fix it okay just take a breath 1 minnew comic ill be back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 new comic i got money YOU CAN'T DESTROY MY NOOBICORN!!!FIX IT!!! ill fix it okay just take a breath 1 minnew comic ill be back Awesome. Thank you. ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 new comic i got money YOU CAN'T DESTROY MY NOOBICORN!!!FIX IT!!! ill fix it okay just take a breath 1 minnew comic ill be back Awesome. Thank you. no prob been wanting to do the RESPAWN comic for a while btw i mighnt change kits to either chimoru R or Talog beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arzaki Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 Seems legit.I think I'll follow this. I got Monster Hunter World on PS4, add me at bmrjw2 if you want Also I play FFXIV, my main is Anastasia Willow on Exodus but I've got characters on every NA datacenter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 (edited) of course its legit! new comic the comic that use to be here is lost if you find a copy of it please pm it to me Edited August 14, 2013 by TAHU2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted August 2, 2013 Share Posted August 2, 2013 kind of unwise to use an unfinished kit in your comics. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted August 2, 2013 Author Share Posted August 2, 2013 (edited) kind of unwise to use an unfinished kit in your comics.Yeah I wanted to try it out I think We need to work on it before its in da comics update: im changing kits so it will take a few days to complete exspect new comics soonBackgrounds and characters done new comics soon Edited August 14, 2013 by TAHU2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 (edited) New comic Part 2 Pilot also for those of you that want a sneak peek of the template now here it is Edited August 14, 2013 by TAHU2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 3, 2014 Author Share Posted February 3, 2014 (edited) I have decided that I will possibly be doing a revamp in which case it will be completely redone thank you to all my PGS and GS for a great time, this will be where I leave off till I do the revamp I mentioned -Tahukan Edited February 4, 2014 by Tahukan The TaVo-Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 REQUEST TOPIC CLOSING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Six Posted February 5, 2014 Share Posted February 5, 2014 REQUEST TOPIC CLOSINGThread closed. Bio of a BZP Admin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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