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This is my Titans V Monsters entry topic.

 

All hope is lost for BZ Koro.

 

Kayn is dead.

 

Pakare is wounded.

 

Toa Uhat and his Titan powers are the only hope left.

 

Is 'The Monster' a paranormal being bent on destroying BZPower? Or is it just a sadistic kid playing with his Bionicles?

 

YOU DECIDE.

 

In BZ Koro: The Movie!

Edited by Hahli Husky

9HYoRY7.pngKayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended

 

 

                                                                                                 

 

                                                              

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Great opening! You set the emotional tone extremely well with the heroes falling. I absolutely loved the "gotta get myself back together" line XD! The middle was okay, I didn't really like the fact that Uhat shoved Pakare into the box and found out that Uhat was happy that Pakare was dead. The ending was a bit humorous. For your future movies, I would suggest stop-motion animation.


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Great opening! You set the emotional tone extremely well with the heroes falling. I absolutely loved the "gotta get myself back together" line XD! The middle was okay, I didn't really like the fact that Uhat shoved Pakare into the box and found out that Uhat was happy that Pakare was dead. The ending was a bit humorous. For your future movies, I would suggest stop-motion animation.

 

Thanks for the feedback :P I started off trying to make a serious short but I just decided to try and make it funny when I accidentally made Uhat wriggle too much at the start.

 

If I ever make another one of these, I'm still going to go for the non stop-motion approach but I'll take more time in making it smooth. I'll also make sure to not let my hand appear in any of the shots haha.

 

I enjoyed making this!


9HYoRY7.pngKayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended

 

 

                                                                                                 

 

                                                              

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The first two minutes of that were just...Amazing-Awesome-Face-Teary-Eyed-Kane-Clap_large.gifThe comedy bits were pleasantly unexpected, and certainly brought a smile to my face. Except for the unsteady camerawork, I have no complaints, ha ha.

 

Thanks man :D I appreciate the feedback,

 

I'll make sure to be more steady in the sequel.


9HYoRY7.pngKayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended

 

 

                                                                                                 

 

                                                              

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