Trad Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 (edited) REVIEW TOPIC: HERE The Epilogue Pt 1.Pretend.Pretend that the pain doesn’t exist.Close your eyes, and pretend that you aren’t trapped in this cell underground, with your tendons torn out and bones broken, making you the symbol of near extreme helplessness.Pretend that you’re not in this clean, polished, high tech world of pain, but that you’re sleeping on the beach were you met Sara. That the screams of your fellow inmates are actually the sounds of waves caressing the beach.Scream yourself as your mind is dragged unwillingly from the scene you created and forced to relive the events that got you into this mess.Scream. Edited August 11, 2013 by The Writer Quote "Wer Traumt?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Of Anarchy Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 Wow. That was really good, you should definitly right some more. I like the format. Very modern horrory. Quote BZPRPG CharactersWant to play all the Lego games? Click Here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 Oh boy. This looks like it will be a good story to keep up with.When will you post the next part? Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trad Posted August 11, 2013 Author Share Posted August 11, 2013 Added the review topic link, and in response to both the above replier, I am writing this on an irregular basis, and therefore there is no set schedule for updates. Quote "Wer Traumt?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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