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#1 Offline The Swimming Beard

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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 02:52 PM

Gallery: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/367455

 

For R3 of the EBC on Mocpages.

 

Feedback appreciated.


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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 03:15 PM

I think you meant the link to be http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/367455

 

Apart from that, looks great. The feet though seem a bit too small.


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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 03:40 PM

Where did Banjax use that upper arm techniqe? I have the same EXACT design on a moc right now, and I've never seen him use it :I

EDIT: nvm, found it here: http://www.flickr.co...N03/9163909942/

It's a pretty common technique tbh. Clark certainly wasn't the first to do it.

 

But sweet moc. I don't quite like the trans orange, since there's so little of it, and I think that a black/dark red color scheme needs a third, different color to add contrast, but you made a nice and flexible moc with great shape. Arms could be longer though.


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#4 Offline The Swimming Beard

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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 09:15 PM

I think you meant the link to be http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/367455

 

Apart from that, looks great. The feet though seem a bit too small.

I thought you were Chro when I saw that av. Anyway, Thanks. I don't think the feet are too small, they're what I usually use. I think they look fine.

 

Where did Banjax use that upper arm techniqe? I have the same EXACT design on a moc right now, and I've never seen him use it :I

EDIT: nvm, found it here: http://www.flickr.co...N03/9163909942/

It's a pretty common technique tbh. Clark certainly wasn't the first to do it.

 

But sweet moc. I don't quite like the trans orange, since there's so little of it, and I think that a black/dark red color scheme needs a third, different color to add contrast, but you made a nice and flexible moc with great shape. Arms could be longer though.

 

Thanks. As for the trans orange, I kind of had to use it; it is, after all, a Toa of Neon. You're right about the arms. I don't think it's that bad, though. I noticed it myself, but I didn't want to redo them.


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Posted Aug 15 2013 - 07:17 PM

I don't think the feet are too small, they're what I usually use. I think they look fine.

You're wrong ._.

 

The feet are way too small.

 

If you insist on using that part, at least bulk it up. Like this or something: http://www.brickshel...er/p1090344.jpg


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Posted Aug 15 2013 - 08:33 PM

 

I don't think the feet are too small, they're what I usually use. I think they look fine.

You're wrong ._.

 

The feet are way too small.

 

If you insist on using that part, at least bulk it up. Like this or something: http://www.brickshel...er/p1090344.jpg

 

 

Well, by the standards of the way it is on a human,(equal to forearm length) the feet are proportional. I guess the bulk on the lower legs might disrupt it, but I think "way too small" is an overstatement. I didn't consider bulking it up, though. Maybe I'll try something like that in the future.


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