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#1 Offline joev14

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Posted Oct 31 2013 - 12:25 AM

So, I whipped this model up about two months ago, and have slowly been adding things to it over time, and I now feel as though it's ready to be displayed. Wudda y'all think? :D 

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Hopefully I'll have some better photos up in a while, my camera battery is dying. The back-view shot turned out pretty well though.

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#2 Offline Mohamed Marei

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Posted Oct 31 2013 - 07:27 AM

Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous.

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Posted Oct 31 2013 - 10:43 AM

I think the MOC could benefit from some more bulk on the limbs to match that of the torso. :)


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Posted Nov 01 2013 - 11:02 PM

Torso looks great! I just think that the only part lacking is the arms. They seem a bit scrawny when compared to the rest of his limbs/body.


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Posted Nov 05 2013 - 03:40 PM

Torso looks great! I just think that the only part lacking is the arms. They seem a bit scrawny when compared to the rest of his limbs/body.

  

I think the MOC could benefit from some more bulk on the limbs to match that of the torso. :)

Added more armor to the arms, and made a few slight changes to the shoulders as well. Will update with new photos soon!  

Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. :tohu:

What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO).

Edited by joev14, Nov 05 2013 - 06:44 PM.

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Posted Nov 06 2013 - 08:02 AM

 

Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. :tohu:

What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO).

 

 

Well, off the top of my head (see what I did there? LOL), maybe replace the buzzsaw blade (?) with a Glatorian neck and one of these pieces. They always look like a decent piece of armor. Alternatively, one of these might do.

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Posted Nov 06 2013 - 02:29 PM

Sweet torso construction! Though the legs are a bit bland, so maybe enlarge and customize them a bit? Also, a tiny nitpick but I think might have helped the look: If you could place some sort of armor at the back of the neck, that would be marvelous. :tohu:

What parts are able to connect to the neck? I can't think of anything aside from a tire (Which I've already tried, and it looks terrible IMO).

 Well, off the top of my head (see what I did there? LOL), maybe replace the buzzsaw blade (?) with a Glatorian neck and one of these pieces. They always look like a decent piece of armor. Alternatively, one of these might do. :tohu:

I don't really use Hero Factory parts. I only own two HF sets.

Edited by joev14, Nov 06 2013 - 02:30 PM.

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Posted Nov 12 2013 - 02:36 PM

The MOC don't look good in my opinion, the body is too big plus i don't like the star foot on it, the lower leg i think should be custom and i don't like the double. The upper arm is really odd but too long for the MOC, the lower arm is just a normal inika arm and okay, the weapon i think you should made it something different then just Ackar Sword, last the head is too small but it is a glatorian so i'm okay with it. 


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Posted Nov 18 2013 - 11:29 PM

The MOC don't look good in my opinion, the body is too big plus i don't like the star foot on it, the lower leg i think should be custom and i don't like the double. The upper arm is really odd but too long for the MOC, the lower arm is just a normal inika arm and okay, the weapon i think you should made it something different then just Ackar Sword, last the head is too small but it is a glatorian so i'm okay with it.

A lot of people seem to like the large torso. Although I haven't updated the photos, I've bulked up the arms a bit. Although I disagree with you on the head, there really wouldn't be a whole lot I could do about enlarging it anyway. In the updated version I also added a shield to him, as well as the sword.

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Bionicle: ANP aims to create audiobook versions of all the Bionicle books, with voice actors for each character, and music taken from various media to enhance the story. Check here if you're interested in voicing a character, and here for the chapters that've already been released!

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