Makuta of Time Posted November 28, 2013 Share Posted November 28, 2013 Here is where feedback for my new epic, Fall of Rome is held. I would be very grateful if you give me criticism for this story since this story is on the brink of the political guidelines here in BZP. My story is not meant to spark politics here so please do not do so, and I am asking a staff member to check how it it is. So read, and tell me how it is so I can improve my new story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacian Posted November 28, 2013 Share Posted November 28, 2013 It seems really nice. My favourite part was when the rebels tried attacking the UN army. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted November 29, 2013 Author Share Posted November 29, 2013 Thanks man. That's my favorite too. Also to anyone who is reading, I'll to update the story every week or two weeks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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