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#41 Offline VoxuChro

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Posted Feb 25 2012 - 12:53 AM

The Switch Mirror has been reviewed! Thanks for the request, Voxumo!-HH

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#42 Offline Aderia

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Posted Feb 25 2012 - 01:27 AM

1) The Best Kept Secrets2) Review topic3) 10Feel free to be as critical as possible, this epic is a little project to exercise my creative writing skills. It'd be nice to get some reception out of it. :P

I have ECC critic Aderia: Toa of Ducklings assigned to your work. And while your epic is a bit extensive, I can promise her critique will include some pointers on improving your "creative writing skills." That's why we're here, after all...-Ced

Ta da!Thank you, Wretched Automaton, for an awesome read.

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#43 Offline The Otter

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Posted Feb 25 2012 - 11:47 PM

1) Into the Darkness2) Darkness Brought to light: Review for Into the Darkness3) 3 (for now, of course.)

Edited by Kal Grochi, Feb 26 2012 - 09:53 AM.

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#44 Offline Cederak

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Posted Feb 26 2012 - 03:00 PM

1) Into the Darkness2) Darkness Brought to light: Review for Into the Darkness3) 3 (for now, of course.)

Okay, I guess this one is mine. :) Expect a review sometime in the next 24 hours.-Ced

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Posted Feb 26 2012 - 04:44 PM

1) Into the Darkness2) Darkness Brought to light: Review for Into the Darkness3) 3 (for now, of course.)

Okay, I guess this one is mine. :) Expect a review sometime in the next 24 hours.-Ced

A review from the guy in charge? AHH! I have to clean the house first.*runs off to grab a sword, multiple rat traps, and a few flamethrowers*

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#46 Offline Cederak

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Posted Feb 26 2012 - 08:27 PM

1) Into the Darkness2) Darkness Brought to light: Review for Into the Darkness3) 3 (for now, of course.)

Okay, I guess this one is mine. :) Expect a review sometime in the next 24 hours.-Ced

A review from the guy in charge? AHH! I have to clean the house first.*runs off to grab a sword, multiple rat traps, and a few flamethrowers*

Heh, never gotten that reaction before. XD Anyway, enjoy your review. And thanks for coming to the ECC.-Ced

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Posted Mar 07 2012 - 06:03 PM

Epic: WingsReview Topic: Here# of Chapters: All of them, I guessThanks in advance. ^_^-Inferna
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Posted Mar 07 2012 - 06:13 PM

Epic: WingsReview Topic: Here# of Chapters: All of them, I guessThanks in advance. ^_^-Inferna

Okay, I have a critic assigned to your epic and you can expect a review sometime soon. Thank you for choosing the ECC!-Ced

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Posted Mar 18 2012 - 01:05 AM

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Posted Mar 18 2012 - 11:16 PM

Hey whenever you have a critic available, please review a Co-Authored Epic for us?Second ChanceReview Topic8 Chapters so far.Please and thank you. =)

Edited by The Great Grant in the Sky, Mar 18 2012 - 11:17 PM.

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#51 Offline Cederak

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Posted Mar 19 2012 - 01:10 AM

Hey whenever you have a critic available, please review a Co-Authored Epic for us?Second ChanceReview Topic8 Chapters so far.Please and thank you. =)

I have a critic available right now, as a matter of fact. Expect a review soon!-Ced

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Posted Mar 20 2012 - 09:11 PM

The review for Second Chance has been posted. Kudos to Great Grant and Zo' Tomana for their work!-HH
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Posted Mar 20 2012 - 09:42 PM

I'll bite!The UtopianThe Utopian - Review TopicChapters: 3 now, probably 4 by the end of tonight.
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Posted Mar 20 2012 - 09:57 PM

I'll bite!The UtopianThe Utopian - Review TopicChapters: 3 now, probably 4 by the end of tonight.

Okay, your request has been filed and assigned to Aderia: Toa of Ducklings. Thanks for choosing the ECC!-Ced

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Posted Mar 25 2012 - 09:46 AM

This is it:1) Team Curse2) Review topic3) 4 chapters, now by now.----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth
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Posted Mar 25 2012 - 04:19 PM

This is it:1) Team Curse2) Review topic3) 4 chapters, now by now.----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth

Reviewed. Thank you for choosing the ECC! :)-Ced

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Posted Mar 26 2012 - 08:36 AM

This is it:1) Team Curse2) Review topic3) 4 chapters, now by now.----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth

Reviewed. Thank you for choosing the ECC! :)-Ced

I must thank you!Thanks so much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth

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Posted Mar 26 2012 - 12:11 PM

This is it:1) Team Curse2) Review topic3) 4 chapters, now by now.----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth

Reviewed. Thank you for choosing the ECC! :)-Ced

I must thank you!Thanks so much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth

You're very welcome. Just remember, we wouldn't exist if BZPers didn't come to us with requests in the first place. :)-Ced

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Posted Mar 29 2012 - 03:16 AM

1)Journey of the Toa2)Review Topic3)2, at the moment.
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Posted Mar 29 2012 - 12:48 PM

1)Journey of the Toa2)Review Topic3)2, at the moment.

All right, your request has been filed and assigned to Hahli Historian. Expect a review soon and thank you for choosing the ECC!-Ced

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#61 Offline Aderia

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:14 PM

Phew! The Utopian, done, finally.Sorry again for the delay!!
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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 09:47 PM

1) The Herald of Darknesshttp://www.bzpower.c...842) Review topichttp://www.bzpower.c...023) 2 + prologue, so 3I don't know how to disguise a link within normal text...awkward. Sorry about that.
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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 12:44 PM

1) The Herald of Darknesshttp://www.bzpower.c...842) Review topichttp://www.bzpower.c...023) 2 + prologue, so 3I don't know how to disguise a link within normal text...awkward. Sorry about that.

To place a link in your text, type out the text, highlight it with your cursor, click the chain link symbol above your post, and paste the URL into the bar that comes up. Future reference tip. ;)Anyway, expect a review soon and thank you for choosing the ECC! :)-Ced

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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 05:51 PM

Er, can I change the number of chapters to 3? I'm way behind schedule due to waiting for the review. I haven't posted since requesting a review because I already said how many chapters.
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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 07:18 PM

Er, can I change the number of chapters to 3? I'm way behind schedule due to waiting for the review. I haven't posted since requesting a review because I already said how many chapters.

First of all, I apologize on behalf of the critic assigned to your story. It is not our intention to interrupt anyone's posting schedules and I'm sorry about the present situation. However, I need you to bear in mind that critics here (much like with the SSCC) have a week to complete an assignment - two weeks for extenuating circumstances. While the SSCC does not have to worry about additional posts being made to a request, I believe that seven days is a fair timetable for an epic to be reviewed in as well.To expedite the process of your review, I'm going to speak on the critic's behalf and say she'll be fine with a third chapter being posted and reviewed. Once again, I am terribly sorry about this and hope to have the situation dealt with soon.-Ced

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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 09:58 PM

It would seem the critic in charge of reviewing my epic is online now (After days, last I checked she was online at March 29 before) so I won't post another chapter yet.
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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 10:14 PM

EDIT: Situation resolved.

Edited by Cederak, Apr 02 2012 - 10:19 PM.

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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 10:17 PM

The review for Journey of the Toa is posted! My apologies to Tahu Nuva Golden for the delay; my internet was down.-HH
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#69 Offline Cederak

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Posted Apr 02 2012 - 11:48 PM

The Herald of Darkness by ZOMBI3S has been reviewed. Thanks again for choosing the ECC!-Ced
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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 08:32 AM

The Herald of Darkness by ZOMBI3S has been reviewed. Thanks again for choosing the ECC!-Ced

thank you so much!!

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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 12:16 AM

I'd like to ask for the last 3 chapters of Journey of the Toa to be reviewed before Attack of the Bohrok is posted.1)http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=41122)http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=41223) 3 unreviewed, those being 4, 5, and 6.
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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 11:35 AM

I'd like to ask for the last 3 chapters of Journey of the Toa to be reviewed before Attack of the Bohrok is posted.1)http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=41122)http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=41223) 3 unreviewed, those being 4, 5, and 6.

I will be personally attending to your request this time, though I will most likely skim over Chapters 1-3 to give me a better sense of what is going on in 4-6. I had neglected to post this as a rule earlier, but after this, an epic will only be reviewed one time by the ECC. As such, I will be updating the ECC rules for authors to preserve a degree of fairness among everyone. I hope this will inspire authors to carefully choose at what point they would like their work reviewed. That aside, expect a review of Chapters 4-6 somewhere in the next 48 hours. And thank you for choosing the ECC.-CedUPDATE: Reviewed.

Edited by Cederak, Apr 08 2012 - 09:22 PM.

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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 02:13 PM

1.) The Leaking + http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43272.) http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43283.) 5 so far
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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 02:35 PM

1.) The Leaking + http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43272.) http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43283.) 5 so far

All right, Aderia: Toa of Ducklings has been assigned to your epic. Expect a review soon, and thank you for choosing the ECC!-Ced

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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 06:41 PM

Alright, then, notify me when he does.
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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 06:09 PM

Alright, then, notify me when he does.

You'll just have to keep an eye on your review topic when she posts there. If you aren't subscribed to your review topic already.-Ced

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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 09:10 PM

Oh, it's a she!. Wow, I get confused, as there aren't that many Female members on here.
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Posted Apr 16 2012 - 11:22 PM

Alright, so when you guys get some space, I would like a review for this:1)Fire2)Fire Review Topic3) Chapters: 3
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Posted Apr 16 2012 - 11:29 PM

Alright, so when you guys get some space, I would like a review for this:1)Fire2)Fire Review Topic3) Chapters: 3

Yeah, we have space. I fought the urge to make some sarcastic pun here. :)Anyway, Hahli Historian will be taking care of your request. Expect a review from her soon and thanks for choosing the ECC!-Ced

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Posted Apr 18 2012 - 10:22 PM

1.) The Leaking + http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43272.) http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=43283.) 5 so far

All right, Aderia: Toa of Ducklings has been assigned to your epic. Expect a review soon, and thank you for choosing the ECC!-Ced

*sigh* Done. I'd be totally proud of myself too, if it weren't for the literal two and a half hours of trying (and failing) to get the stupid formatting to work for me. I'm about ready to throw my laptop at the wall. I just couldn't afford to lose the whole review I'd typed.I'll get in there to clean it up as soon as my schedule allows. Apologies in advance.

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