All the old lights review and reply thread.

[Sordin]

Hello. "All the old lights" is my first epic on these forums. I'll try and release installments as regularly as possible but my creative process is kinda slow. There story will be taking place with different characters in different places and possibly different times as they generally get on with adventure and life, while I'm told my best work is done with settings and descriptive work this time I'm trying to focus on dialogue and character so the quality may waver from piece to piece, not only that but because it will be moving between multiple characters the story may seem kind of erratic but rest assured It will (probably) make sense by the end. So read the stories, tell me your thoughts and point out inevitable grammar and spelling mistakes. Thank you all in advance.