My Downtime Mocs

[flameman]

well, the title says it all, forum got offline for pretty long time, and gives me a lot of time to MOC, so i think i'm gonna post them all now, i got 5 to post i was planning to mkae some sort of golden kikanalo but I don't have any suitable part for the horn so i just make it this way gallery next one is a guardian of onu metru, his duty was to protect the onu matoran, gallery a glatorian, i made it when i was trying a new color combo, still yet to be named,gallery (i uploaded some new photo so it might not be public yet) next is,it was supposed to be like some sort of assasin mech, it took me months to finish it because it was abandoned several weeks after i started making it due to the school bussines >.<, gallery and the last onemy favourite, the first MOC that uses HF parts ( cus i just got it at that time ), my self MOC, ( see my avatar), and my entry to the local site contest called bricksindonesia HF MOC contest (for indonesian), altthough I ended up losing, i'm pretty proud of this MOC , gallery C & C are very welcomed

[Taipu1]

These are all great, my favourite sized sort of MOC. The fourth I think is the best. The white and black colour scheme is pulled off well, and the custom torso looks great. It also just looks cool, which I think puts it just ahead of number 3. Number 3 is probably the most well done. It looks sleak, neat and well proportioned. apart from the small patches of white on the arms, and the silver on the chest, the colour scheme is great too. The golden kikanalo is nice, it looks better armoured than the standard 'nalo, and the red and gold go together well. The addition of the spikes on it's back are great idea, and work well.Number two is pretty good, but in a couple of places seems a bit thin and spindly, most noticably the kneck. I think that could be fixed with some sort of edition to the head, rather than just a single piece.As for the final, self MOC, I'd have to say that it's well done, but the metru red lower leg guards stand out a little but, and the feet also look a little small for it's size.

[Toa Kanas]

All looking good, but the second dude's head is tiny, just pop on a metru-head and I am usre you have a mask for that. I enjoy the white and black one the most, its outlandish and scary, very assinlike cool. Keep it up!

[Obsessionist]

#1: Great colors, I like the gold. The grey throws the color scheme off a bit, but that's a minor thing. I love the humpback and shoulders.#2: The head is the major weak point her. It's just to small. The legs are great, but the arms need beefing up.#3: Best of the lot, IMO. I love, love the color scheme and the shoulders are brilliant. It just looks great.#4: Great torso, although the shoulders look a bit weak. Some more complete arms would be fantastic. I like the legs.#5: The red parts at the shoulders look awsome. The whole thing is very robot-y. The dark red at the shins ruin the color scheme, though, and the arms could use more red. Overally, you have some great MOCs. A few minor adjustments, mainly with colors, could improve them alot, but they are still terrific!

[flameman]

These are all great, my favourite sized sort of MOC. The fourth I think is the best. The white and black colour scheme is pulled off well, and the custom torso looks great. It also just looks cool, which I think puts it just ahead of number 3.Number 3 is probably the most well done. It looks sleak, neat and well proportioned. apart from the small patches of white on the arms, and the silver on the chest, the colour scheme is great too.The golden kikanalo is nice, it looks better armoured than the standard 'nalo, and the red and gold go together well. The addition of the spikes on it's back are great idea, and work well.Number two is pretty good, but in a couple of places seems a bit thin and spindly, most noticably the kneck. I think that could be fixed with some sort of edition to the head, rather than just a single piece.As for the final, self MOC, I'd have to say that it's well done, but the metru red lower leg guards stand out a little but, and the feet also look a little small for it's size.

Thanks, for the third moc, i did use that vamprah mask on purpose to give some silver on the armor, i think it's fine but yeah, those white bother me too :/, as for the second MOC, unfortunately i don't have any suitable head for it :/, and as well with my self MOC, i was running out of usable dark red and gunmetal parts, that's why the feet are grey, thanks anyway

All looking good, but the second dude's head is tiny, just pop on a metru-head and I am usre you have a mask for that. I enjoy the white and black one the most, its outlandish and scary, very assinlike cool. Keep it up!

as i stated above, i can't find any other suitabe part for that second MOC , i've tried using metru head but the neck ends up too short, making the head looks too close to the torso, which i not prefer :/thanks anyway

#1: Great colors, I like the gold. The grey throws the color scheme off a bit, but that's a minor thing. I love the humpback and shoulders.#2: The head is the major weak point her. It's just to small. The legs are great, but the arms need beefing up.#3: Best of the lot, IMO. I love, love the color scheme and the shoulders are brilliant. It just looks great.#4: Great torso, although the shoulders look a bit weak. Some more complete arms would be fantastic. I like the legs.#5: The red parts at the shoulders look awsome. The whole thing is very robot-y. The dark red at the shins ruin the color scheme, though, and the arms could use more red. Overally, you have some great MOCs. A few minor adjustments, mainly with colors, could improve them alot, but they are still terrific!

thanks,making the nalo's humpback is the hardest part of that MOC lol, the fourth moc's shoulder looks weak ? really ? i thought those axe make him looks strong XP, well i'll try revamping it later, thanks anway