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#1 Offline Kopekemaster

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Posted Jan 27 2014 - 03:31 PM

Review Topic for this.

Constructive criticism: encouraged.


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#2 Offline TheKanohiIgnika

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Posted Jan 27 2014 - 03:52 PM

First Chapter?  Amazing.  I like how mysterious it is, and you really have the ability to make anything sound interesting.  Keep up the good work!  By the way, I am also a writer myself, but not of BIONICLE.


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#3 Offline Kopekemaster

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Posted Jan 27 2014 - 05:49 PM

First Chapter?  Amazing.  I like how mysterious it is, and you really have the ability to make anything sound interesting.  Keep up the good work!  By the way, I am also a writer myself, but not of BIONICLE.

 

Thanks! Yeah, I typically don't (aka NEVER) write fanfiction, because I feel that it isn't really...mine in a way. I mostly write my own stuff *hup hup *cough* see link in signature*, but couldn't resist this idea once it came to me.

 

 

EDIT: New part of the story.


Edited by Master of all Kopekes, Feb 04 2014 - 02:55 PM.

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#4 Offline Kopekemaster

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Posted Feb 22 2014 - 03:27 PM

New part up, you all. Check it.


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#5 Offline JAG18

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Posted Feb 22 2014 - 07:22 PM

I liked the introduction, felt very suspenseful, the first part was just alright, probably because it was basically two guys walking along.  The last chapter wasn't too bad, good cliffhanger I'd say.   

Overall, I'd say I'm interested in seeing where this go's; can't think of anything I would suggest doing in the next chapters, writing wise I mean.

 

So yeah, good start. 


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#6 Offline Kopekemaster

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Posted Feb 22 2014 - 09:40 PM

I liked the introduction, felt very suspenseful, the first part was just alright, probably because it was basically two guys walking along.  The last chapter wasn't too bad, good cliffhanger I'd say.   

Overall, I'd say I'm interested in seeing where this go's; can't think of anything I would suggest doing in the next chapters, writing wise I mean.

 

So yeah, good start. 

 

Thanks. I'm not really trying to leave the parts off at "cliffhangers", I'm just writing for a bit then finding a good place to stop. 

 

And I've got this whole thing planned out. There's going to be plenty of cliffhangers ahead. :P


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Posted Feb 23 2014 - 09:44 AM

 

I liked the introduction, felt very suspenseful, the first part was just alright, probably because it was basically two guys walking along.  The last chapter wasn't too bad, good cliffhanger I'd say.   

Overall, I'd say I'm interested in seeing where this go's; can't think of anything I would suggest doing in the next chapters, writing wise I mean.

 

So yeah, good start. 

 

Thanks. I'm not really trying to leave the parts off at "cliffhangers", I'm just writing for a bit then finding a good place to stop. 

 

And I've got this whole thing planned out. There's going to be plenty of cliffhangers ahead. :P

 

Good, I guess about the second part.   :P

 

And also, you sure you don't want to leave off at cliffhangers?  They say it's a good way to keep an audience, because everyone who reads this will want to know what happens next and keep coming back.


Edited by JAG18, Feb 23 2014 - 12:44 PM.

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Posted Jul 01 2014 - 08:54 PM

New chapter up, y'all.


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