Katoris Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 (edited) Name to be hopefully changed in the near future Now that I'm starting, I will work hard to gain some momentumand make these comics follow a series of arcs.Until then, Enjoy the show! Critiques Requested! Comics: ~ A Fresh Start ~ The Birth of a New LegendUnprofessional MoverThe FreeloaderTakori Meets Mr. FreeloaderFirst Mistake, FreeloaderBoredomThe Torture RoomReturn From "Vacation" Holiday Specials! Valentine's Day 2014April Fools' 2014Happy 14th Birthday, Katoris! Stuff: Cherry BlossomsNewcomer... ~ | ~ PGS: 1. Tahukan2. TBK3. Aurora More PGS spots will possibly opened in the future If you have any thoughts or any tips that can help me,please help in any way you can!And boy, do I need help with doors and furniture. Credits:Dark 709, Gerlicky, Soran, and whoever elsemay have contributed to the creation of the Chimoru R Kit.Special Thanks to Damaracx Ultimate and Soranfor giving me help in Gimp,and Tehurye for help in miscellaneous stuff.And thanks to Gavla, Dark 709, Gerlicky, Kahinuva,and all others whose works gave me the inspirationto start creating comics. ~Katoris Edited September 27, 2014 by Katoris 8 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 Nice job I like the fact how the background has a reflection and the eye movement so great job as a first comic! I think I will follow this topic now,Keep it up! -Tahukan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroxx Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 So far, I really like the clean aproach to the pilot. (no pun intended, really!) Is it going to be a series focusing on a bigger arc? Quote New pages are up! Click to see latest! \(°u°)/ Gallery & conceptart topic - Current: Pre-mut & pre-ev Makuta: Krika | Antroz | Vamprah | Miserix | Bitil | .. Older pics: Helryx's Fury | Makuta Sethuldur | Order's Call (no necro k? C8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBK Posted February 13, 2014 Share Posted February 13, 2014 Good to see you get started! Very aesthetically pleasing, and I'm liking the simple pilot. I'm excited to see where you'll be taking this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 13, 2014 Author Share Posted February 13, 2014 (edited) Thanks Guys! From the first comic, I apparently have 3 PGS reservations. So far, I really like the clean aproach to the pilot. (no pun intended, really!) Is it going to be a series focusing on a bigger arc? I decided that I will make it follow a bigger arc once I've gained some momentum(and once I've found names for one female character and one male character). ~Katoris Edited February 13, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted February 13, 2014 Share Posted February 13, 2014 Dude! These are really nice comics!Good graphics, good humor and good text bubbles = great comics!The Cherry Blossom thing was cool too.I can't wait to see more of these, and I bet most people feel the same way. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobLazer Posted February 13, 2014 Share Posted February 13, 2014 dude, these comics aren't half bad! I want to see more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 14, 2014 Author Share Posted February 14, 2014 (edited) Thanks, guys! I'm currently getting ready my second comic. ~Katoris Edited February 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 Thanks, guys! I'm currently getting ready my second comic.Great!! I can not wait!! -Tahukan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 14, 2014 Author Share Posted February 14, 2014 (edited) NEW COMIC! Later on I'll get a character sheet done possibly. ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 2 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobLazer Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 NEW COMIC! I almost lolled in the middle of class when I read this! I love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 NEW COMIC! Later on I'll get a character sheet done possibly. ~Katoris Katoris and his katana... tisk tisk. Maybe Katoris needs some anger management... and maybe Katori needs some pushcart school. 1 Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBK Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 ... and maybe Takori needs some pushcart school. I second that notion. I wonder what actually happened to all the furniture... On a side note, I LOVED it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 NEW COMIC! Later on I'll get a character sheet done possibly. ~KatorisXD Amazing! Takori and I have yet to met...I will help protect him...maybe..By the way where did you get that sword? -Tahukna Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) I needed a way to delay having furniture in the comics, because I still don't have any sprites! NEW COMIC! Later on I'll get a character sheet done possibly. ~KatorisXD Amazing! Takori and I have yet to met...I will help protect him...maybe..By the way where did you get that sword?-Tahukan I just Googled it. Darn my laziness. ~Katoris Edited February 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 I needed a way to delay having furniture in the comics, because I still don't have any sprites! NEW COMIC! Later on I'll get a character sheet done possibly. ~Katoris XD Amazing! Takori and I have yet to met...I will help protect him...maybe..By the way where did you get that sword?-Tahukan I just Googled it. Darn my laziness.Really? How'd you get rid of all teh white I worked for hours on it and I can't get a good sword :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) That is where Gimp comes in handy! ~Katoris Edited February 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 Ugh will I have to learn.....GIMP??!?!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) It's so simplistic... ~Katoris Edited February 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 It's so simplistic...Are you insane? It's really tough..I'm going to try gimp..any tips? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora the cat Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) Gimp is ok, but I find it a bit on the hard side to use. I like Photoshop a lot more, though it is really expensive (my work pays for it). One tip though, just blow up pixle art so you can get these nice high res things. Katoris, this comic looks great so far. You have done a great job on this, and it has lots of potential. Edited February 15, 2014 by Aurora the cat Quote -Insert deep message to prove I am alive here- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) Thanks, Aurora! I have ideas for my next comic already by the way. ~Katoris Edited February 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kayn Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 This comic looks extremely promising Quote Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) Happy Valentine's day! A day late... who cares... ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 1 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 19, 2014 Author Share Posted February 19, 2014 (edited) New Comic, Everyone! Introducing the Freeloader! ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 New Comic, Everyone! Introducing the Freeloader! ~KatorisWell seems me and Katoris don't start off very well :/ Goodjob on the graphics can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBK Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 Introducing the Freeloader! I actually lol'ed all the way through this. Fantastic job. :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 20, 2014 Author Share Posted February 20, 2014 (edited) I'm planning to make a comic based on this post at some point XD Amazing! Takori and I have yet to met...I will help protect him...maybe.. ~TahukanIt's going to be a dark day for you then! Gihi. ~Katoris Edited February 20, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 New Comic, Everyone! Introducing the Freeloader! ~Katoris Haha! Well, I know how I'm going to be waking up my siblings for now on. lolYeah, I probably would have called Tahukan the same thing. lol jk Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora the cat Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 That frying pan is masterfully done. Quote -Insert deep message to prove I am alive here- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobLazer Posted February 21, 2014 Share Posted February 21, 2014 I've been out of the loop for the past couple weeks, and it was nice to be able to see the new comics! They're really fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroxx Posted February 21, 2014 Share Posted February 21, 2014 A frying pan... hehe. That was awesome. I have to utulise that method somewhere. Quote New pages are up! Click to see latest! \(°u°)/ Gallery & conceptart topic - Current: Pre-mut & pre-ev Makuta: Krika | Antroz | Vamprah | Miserix | Bitil | .. Older pics: Helryx's Fury | Makuta Sethuldur | Order's Call (no necro k? C8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alrdy.Fate Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I'm actually pleasantly surprised. Not bad, little brother. Not bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 So I actually got around to reading these. They amuse me. Especially the use of a sword and then a frying pan. Beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 25, 2014 Author Share Posted February 25, 2014 (edited) I'm actually pleasantly surprised. Not bad, little brother. Not bad. I'm actually a little surprised you actually came online after so long. Nice to see you back, bro! ~Katoris Edited March 3, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobLazer Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 I'm actually pleasantly surprised. Not bad, little brother. Not bad. I'm actually a little surprised you actually came online after so long. Nice to see you back, bro! this is totally off topic, but are you guys actually brothers, or is this just really informal talk? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted February 27, 2014 Author Share Posted February 27, 2014 (edited) We are actual brothers. He's my elder. ~Katoris Edited March 3, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobLazer Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 It's nice that you guys both like Bionicle. my younger brother dumped Bionicle a long time ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 It's nice that you guys both like Bionicle. my younger brother dumped Bionicle a long time ago.XD My longer bro (Zexx) just last year got into it So Katoris how's the comics coming? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted March 1, 2014 Author Share Posted March 1, 2014 (edited) Slllloowwwwwww. ~Katoris Edited March 3, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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